Open Mic: Never Too Late.

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We are in dark times, got to learn how to manoeuvre 
Mask, gloves and sanitisers...    not what Covid threw up
Learn how to move up, though culture vultures screw us
To both viruses a natural remedy you can 'Be' like Manuka
So i'm hoping-this offender comes clean about his globalist agenda 
To Labels the artist is just "stock", so really they're only-just a vendor 
The record labels are finished! Don't be scared I'm a Phobia defender 
Capitalists show faults; my journeys showing-how to Venture
Industry is shady it needs to be taken over
They let you rap about Crack and Baking Soda
Dismissing our hardships as if mitigating's over 
Stop you, as soon as you start stating Kosher
Time is nearly up for all these ageing jokers
Won't lets us free; knowing we are making Owners
We are so influenced we always fail in retail 
We are who we are: it's either Male or Female
Dropping so much gems, check the scales in detail
Got our own story, our masters tale's what we hail
Change Gone Come, all we need is the patience 
And a spark like how slavery was ended by the Haitians 
With Racism and Viruses we are still getting daily patients 
But soon our life and our homes gonna be very spacious 
Fuck compliance, whether you want it or not its Equality Season 
And you can try to keep killing us for no fucking reason
And its over for the News, they keep telling lies
'When you look at a black kid, you are seeing a Felons eyes'
And whats worse is that we keep spreading spies
Ben Carson, Candace Owens and the like will never thrive
You will be able to stay home; "The Revolution WILL be Televised"

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Real Hip Hop Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 18 March 2014 Location: London Status: Offline Points: 278	Post Options Post Reply Quote Real Hip Hop Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Never Too Late. Posted: 30 January 2021 at 9:31am
	We are in dark times, got to learn how to manoeuvre Mask, gloves and sanitisers... not what Covid threw up Learn how to move up, though culture vultures screw us To both viruses a natural remedy you can 'Be' like Manuka So i'm hoping-this offender comes clean about his globalist agenda To Labels the artist is just "stock", so really they're only-just a vendor The record labels are finished! Don't be scared I'm a Phobia defender Capitalists show faults; my journeys showing-how to Venture Industry is shady it needs to be taken over They let you rap about Crack and Baking Soda Dismissing our hardships as if mitigating's over Stop you, as soon as you start stating Kosher Time is nearly up for all these ageing jokers Won't lets us free; knowing we are making Owners We are so influenced we always fail in retail We are who we are: it's either Male or Female Dropping so much gems, check the scales in detail Got our own story, our masters tale's what we hail Change Gone Come, all we need is the patience And a spark like how slavery was ended by the Haitians With Racism and Viruses we are still getting daily patients But soon our life and our homes gonna be very spacious Fuck compliance, whether you want it or not its Equality Season And you can try to keep killing us for no fucking reason And its over for the News, they keep telling lies 'When you look at a black kid, you are seeing a Felons eyes' And whats worse is that we keep spreading spies Ben Carson, Candace Owens and the like will never thrive You will be able to stay home; "The Revolution WILL be Televised"
	Jay-Z: "I just tackle the subject, the flack of the public/ Nothing!I know real N***** just happen to love it"

Red-B Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 09 January 2014 Location: FL Status: Offline Points: 408 Crew: eNtiTy Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-0-1 Form: NWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Red-B Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 31 January 2021 at 12:13am
	This is a nice piece. I really like these lines specifically Industry is shady it needs to be taken over they let you rap about crack and baking soda paints a clear picture as to what is trending nowadays. The Multi-syllabic rhymes are there and through and through this reads nicely. I am an audio head myself so easy transitions and readability is BIG for me. Overall nice piece. I think if I had one critique I’d say maybe if you sacrificed just a bit of the technical ability you’d get a more cohesive clear piece but on the flip side of that coin we all have different styles. Nice drop