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YungAngel 
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 Topic: Niggas aint readyPosted: 05 July 2012 at 4:39pm |
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Niggas aint ready for wat i gt fo dem, cuz dese grown ass men aint gt nun on this forum. I'm only 17 but i stay wit a fly btch, over 18 but she stayin 4 my dck. so u kn i aint gone stop wit dis paper, dis game is a btch hold her down nd rape her, im steady smokn dese flavors like tyler the creator, bt money bring da btches nd den it bring da haters, i still stay hot like the earth equator. See im not a human dey call me the fallin angel, u nigs r a joke i saw u stealin cable. Dis music nd me was 4 each other, if im a fallin angel den Satan is my brother. I do dis 4 da money i must be a hooker, life is a movie nd u niggas r da bloopers. Gettn good head naaw i call it gettn dome, nd while she suckn me up she callin u on da fone.See yall nt ready nt ready for a real nigga, put down da 9 nd fight me like a real nigga, or i kill ya ass b4 u even pull the trigger, im a fuckn murderer, if da game is btch i mus b fcknn ha, da only realest nigga u will never find anotha |
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Manc
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Posted: 05 July 2012 at 6:54pm |
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I ain't even reading this cuz the structure is fucked
Bro - read the rules - cuz you've posted this in the wrong section. You won't get feed if you don't structure ur verses properly. Look at the open mic section and learn how to lay out ur verses |
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DWall97
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Posted: 12 July 2012 at 6:11am |
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Not only is this in the wrong forum and a fucked up structure but isnt "I do dis 4 da money i must be a hooker" basically the same exact thing as what lil wayne said in one of his songs from sorry for the wait album?
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Psycho Tick
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Posted: 12 July 2012 at 10:30am |
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"that love gettin head we call it georgia dome," not saying you copied that but the whole verse sounds recycled like ive heard very similiar before on almost all your lines. and please structure verse its not hard to tell when your line ends *shakes head* also work on your flow because this was choppy
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