Open Mic: No Compromise

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    Posted: 11 March 2019 at 7:59am
Now my eyes closed, so I sleep through it all 
I'll dream you to feel you to keep you involved 
I seem to withdrawal, when I'm guessing this is it 
Trying to move heaven two-stepping with the wind 
Questioning my sins but I know destiny's a bitch 
Heading to the pit, out of options, heaven is a miss 
All the while I'm trying to find a pleasure in a fifth 
A pressure in my lid has my mind heavy as it is 
Regretting all this shit as I'm hurting in my thoughts
Drinking all this bourbon has me nervous when I'm sauced
Cursing at a god, my heart is certain that it lost 
Now I'm just a burden, who couldn't purchase all the cost 
Cursive's all I got, I jot it on my own heartstrings 
So I'm worthless, writing cursive like bone carvings 
A frozen rose to hold you close while your souls parting
The hatred you project is just so charming
We could never compromise to connect the lesson
Got no future, 'cause our past affects the present
Acceptance? never! - that's why I'll be dead in seconds
Filled with hollowness that fill regrets in heaven 
God doesn't give a fuck, and rejects my essence
On my knees praying, saying "please, accept my penance"
It's so crushing, I'm left with nothing except my guessing 
My minds stuck, fuck a witty line to end this sentence
My shoulder is chipped, nothing colder than this 
What hurts most is words won't fucking ghost on you quick 
Knowing its it, and acceptance is harder alone 
A broken artist who knows, beauty's in a garden that grows 
Or a carcass disowned, who wants to harvest the bones? 
Seasons pass and on the beaten path you chartered alone 
My heart is just stone and you wanna chisel the edge? 
I give in with little defense, we can’t be civil in death


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Well my friend, i really liked the enduring quality of a kind of forbidden love
here, and the cause and effect scenario you had going on, was a real nice
slant for the reader to digest, you did well in my opinion with the emotional
aspects too, the details/imagery kept this verse fresh & ticking along nicely
for me, your obviously no novice to writing poetry, & i look forward to reading
more from you (i likes ya swagger), i enjoyed this one, good shit...peace.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Sammy Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 April 2019 at 2:52pm
Originally posted by The Poets Skills The Poets Skills wrote:


I'll dream you to feel you to keep you involved 


dope. I think i know who you are, if im correct then welcome to the site, if not then welcome to the site. hope to see you drop more.


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