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    Posted: 04 June 2019 at 4:36am

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To my brothers on the grind throw it up onetime - ONE

To my brothers on the street cause they gots to eat - ONE

to the fathers on the stoop, embracing the views and when reaper comes calling still playing it cool - ONE


Condolences pouring in

Weather locals are foreigner

To the cats in the corner who mourning those in the coroner

My mourning was

French toast and bacon bits fist shaking

Stock markets exchange glance

Sammy blazin a 5th

crazy and gifted

They say I’m lazy and witless

I’m just painting these images

To relay the daily playbooks and scrimmages

Livin just to beat the 95 traffic (i-95)

9 to 5  mass avenue panic ensues

Crack addicts spew god passages booze in they breath the mood so depress,

they say that death comes in two and so by noon I was dressed,

It’s just a path that we choose

The Pasteur was new

Yeah its greener on the other side

Whichever fence u pick, it’s skewered

So it’s do or die

I move to the left

Side of town but it follows

Gliding down the hollow trail where I’m fine for now  

Think I’m fine for now



Worda mutha,

I saw a bird fly past my window today

Swear to god my eyes froze it in time

Coated in black

Crow feet, broken beaks

spoke broken dialect

A hieroglyphs

but property of pain is the same no matter how u dress it

I’ll start looking for answers they day im out of questions

There’s a thousand lessons

But I’m seeking one that lessens

The burden

Respectfully urging my bruthas to observe the early sun

Soak it in cuz tomorrow is never certain,

the world’s becomes a

Curse, a conundum, inverted and introverted  

So my words are drawn in cursive, immersed in conservative junction

interconnecting nuance bonding to faces

Face it, Cause the truth will move more than a thousand parades

Fuck the corny shit.

The sky’s an open space but, what if the sparrow’s broken

I’ll clear the air before I spread my wings and leave it to interpretation

They said I’m out of pocket

I’m was searching those two cents


peace.




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Sammy sir!

As always great writing, your bar structure seems unorthodox, but it is a continuous fluidity that comes together very nicely, Its slick how you do that...both reading and listening you can't miss the flow. Super chill delivery, even when you up the aggression in the second verse,

"I'll clear the air before I spread my wings..." - dope shit.
"My name has the most shout outs in the history of rap...."
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thanks, dntply! i think its time we collaborate on a track, sis


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Struth dude, I enjoyed this one here, your flow was solid from start to end, its
been a hot minute since i last peeped one of your audio joints, nice to hear you
haven't lost a step either, ripe work friend, real ripe..leace.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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Agreed. 💯
"My name has the most shout outs in the history of rap...."
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