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daydizzle89 ![]() Superior Member ![]() Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3804 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW |
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ruttz. Dont you get loud limpy
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Rutter knows best ![]() Senior Moderator ![]() ![]() Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4528 Crew: EMPIRE ![]() Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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So smooth aye...discuss.
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Smoothtung ![]() Standard Member ![]() ![]() Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN |
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Wattup
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Smoothtung ![]() Standard Member ![]() ![]() Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN |
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That concept is mine. And its ok to refine your bars. This whole site is essentially a notepad. It's meant to refine and develope. Its not like I copy and pasted an entire piece of mine. I recalled a couple of my favorite concepts and tried to make them better. Then I went on and built off that with 100% new material. You could not convince me in a hundred years that I'm the only cat on this site that occasionally uses old ideas.
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Rutter knows best ![]() Senior Moderator ![]() ![]() Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4528 Crew: EMPIRE ![]() Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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All my concepts are from 2020 and later sorry can't agree there.
Sorry though smooth this was more a que to hear others opinions on the matter. |
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Concrete ![]() Standard Member ![]() Joined: 02 September 2013 Location: Oslo Status: Offline Points: 1396 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 33-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
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I'll give my honest opinion if someone bothers to post up the lines bitten\recycled vs what he posted
I was accused of biting once because I utilized a concept that was used before, its a grey area sometimes, other times its not..
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Rutter knows best ![]() Senior Moderator ![]() ![]() Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4528 Crew: EMPIRE ![]() Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/bae-ridley-squat-vs-smoothtung_topic46190.html
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rhetorical ![]() Site Moderator ![]() Joined: 14 February 2014 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 798 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-1-0 Form: WWL |
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I got master degree burns After a heatstroke of genius + Recycling is not a good look I have posted old verses, but i put a disclaimer in there saying "this is an old verse" so shit like this dont happen. but in a battle, i will not just go grab an old verse and modify it. thats just lazy. oh, and biting is pretty lazy too you and this kid Dagel i know should hang out one day.
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Smoothtung ![]() Standard Member ![]() ![]() Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN |
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Pretty dope line |
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iLL ScriptureZ ![]() Standard Member ![]() ![]() Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2475 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
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You recycled the same verse twice on this site alone. Then, used it in a battle, making it three times. "Refined", it's word for word. Maybe I'm from the school of thought where recycling is frowned upon in battles. I thought it went without saying that "no recycling/no biting" was universal. This just shows you were too lazy to come up with something new and/or simply just couldn't. It shows a lack of respect to your opponent and to us as a community.
Also, you have a bitten line in the verse. Also, you went above 16 lines. All of which are means of disqualification.
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Beans ![]() Superior Member ![]() ![]() Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6687 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
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Lmao |
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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Smoothtung ![]() Standard Member ![]() ![]() Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN |
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It's 16 lines, I format my verses to accentuate the pauses where I want them. And it aint word for word, after refining, the key words were different making a different meaning. The next 8-9 lines are completely brand new. Also i originally started writing this for a regular open Mic drop.
And the line isn't bitten bruh |
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iLL ScriptureZ ![]() Standard Member ![]() ![]() Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2475 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
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Rutter knows best ![]() Senior Moderator ![]() ![]() Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4528 Crew: EMPIRE ![]() Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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Think of this as an intervention smooth. This is where friends and family get to let you how your biting addiction has hurt and effected them.
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Smoothtung ![]() Standard Member ![]() ![]() Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN |
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Yea aight guys
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daydizzle89 ![]() Superior Member ![]() Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3804 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW |
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We gonna have one for you and give you the strength to go see a doctor
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Rutter knows best ![]() Senior Moderator ![]() ![]() Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4528 Crew: EMPIRE ![]() Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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What's the worst that can happen. |
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Rutter knows best ![]() Senior Moderator ![]() ![]() Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4528 Crew: EMPIRE ![]() Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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I'll tell you how it makes me feel... It makes me feel like I can't trust you, as an extension it makes me think the worst of people. It's contagious, it's make me doubt other people. Next minute I'm reading a a dizz line about anal flows ...like is that a rakim line, is that jay electronica...then I have to remind myself...no that's hot garbage, no one else would of wrote that. There's a ripple effect smooth. |
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Lord Puente ![]() Newbie ![]() ![]() Final Boss Joined: 05 July 2016 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 1814 ![]() Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-2-0 Form: LWWWLW |
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I think everyone forget the purpose of sammy thread, and that’s not fair to sammy.
On behalf of everyone here.... FUCK YOU SMOOTH |
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Rutter knows best ![]() Senior Moderator ![]() ![]() Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4528 Crew: EMPIRE ![]() Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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It's what Sammy would of wanted though.
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