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daydizzle89 
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 Posted: 24 September 2018 at 1:31am |
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see how talk is cheap when it's a open venue. Chain got his pusssy flaps inverted
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Rutter knows best
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Posted: 24 September 2018 at 12:15pm |
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Yeh took the words out of everyone's mouth. We were all just taking about how cheap words are, well in the case of open venues anyway.
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daydizzle89
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Posted: 24 September 2018 at 12:17pm |
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ruttz. Dont you get loud limpy
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Rutter knows best
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 3:03pm |
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So smooth aye...discuss.
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 3:08pm |
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Wattup
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 3:12pm |
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That concept is mine. And its ok to refine your bars. This whole site is essentially a notepad. It's meant to refine and develope. Its not like I copy and pasted an entire piece of mine. I recalled a couple of my favorite concepts and tried to make them better. Then I went on and built off that with 100% new material. You could not convince me in a hundred years that I'm the only cat on this site that occasionally uses old ideas.
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Rutter knows best
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 3:21pm |
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All my concepts are from 2020 and later sorry can't agree there.
Sorry though smooth this was more a que to hear others opinions on the matter. |
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 3:27pm |
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I'll give my honest opinion if someone bothers to post up the lines bitten\recycled vs what he posted
I was accused of biting once because I utilized a concept that was used before, its a grey area sometimes, other times its not..
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Rutter knows best
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 3:28pm |
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http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/bae-ridley-squat-vs-smoothtung_topic46190.html
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rhetorical
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 3:29pm |
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I got master degree burns After a heatstroke of genius + Recycling is not a good look I have posted old verses, but i put a disclaimer in there saying "this is an old verse" so shit like this dont happen. but in a battle, i will not just go grab an old verse and modify it. thats just lazy. oh, and biting is pretty lazy too you and this kid Dagel i know should hang out one day.
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 3:30pm |
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Pretty dope line |
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 4:05pm |
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You recycled the same verse twice on this site alone. Then, used it in a battle, making it three times. "Refined", it's word for word. Maybe I'm from the school of thought where recycling is frowned upon in battles. I thought it went without saying that "no recycling/no biting" was universal. This just shows you were too lazy to come up with something new and/or simply just couldn't. It shows a lack of respect to your opponent and to us as a community.
Also, you have a bitten line in the verse. Also, you went above 16 lines. All of which are means of disqualification.
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 4:19pm |
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Lmao |
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 4:20pm |
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It's 16 lines, I format my verses to accentuate the pauses where I want them. And it aint word for word, after refining, the key words were different making a different meaning. The next 8-9 lines are completely brand new. Also i originally started writing this for a regular open Mic drop.
And the line isn't bitten bruh |
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 4:23pm |
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Rutter knows best
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 4:26pm |
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Think of this as an intervention smooth. This is where friends and family get to let you how your biting addiction has hurt and effected them.
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#bananas
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 4:28pm |
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Yea aight guys
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daydizzle89
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 4:33pm |
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We gonna have one for you and give you the strength to go see a doctor
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Rutter knows best
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 4:35pm |
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What's the worst that can happen. |
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Rutter knows best
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Posted: 03 October 2018 at 4:49pm |
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I'll tell you how it makes me feel... It makes me feel like I can't trust you, as an extension it makes me think the worst of people. It's contagious, it's make me doubt other people. Next minute I'm reading a a dizz line about anal flows ...like is that a rakim line, is that jay electronica...then I have to remind myself...no that's hot garbage, no one else would of wrote that. There's a ripple effect smooth. |
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