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see how talk is cheap when it's a open venue. Chain got his pusssy flaps inverted 
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Yeh took the words out of everyone's mouth. We were all just taking about how cheap words are, well in the case of open venues anyway.
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ruttz. Dont you get loud limpy
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So smooth aye...discuss.
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That concept is mine. And its ok to refine your bars. This whole site is essentially a notepad. It's meant to refine and develope. Its not like I copy and pasted an entire piece of mine. I recalled a couple of my favorite concepts and tried to make them better. Then I went on and built off that with 100% new material. You could not convince me in a hundred years that I'm the only cat on this site that occasionally uses old ideas.
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All my concepts are from 2020 and later sorry can't agree there.

Sorry though smooth this was more a que to hear others opinions on the matter.


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I'll give my honest opinion if someone bothers to post up the lines bitten\recycled vs what he posted
I was accused of biting once because I utilized a concept that was used before, its a grey area sometimes, other times its not.. 
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http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/bae-ridley-squat-vs-smoothtung_topic46190.html
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I got master degree burns 
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Recycling is not a good look

I have posted old verses, but i put a disclaimer in there saying "this is an old verse" so shit like this dont happen. 

but in a battle, i will not just go grab an old verse and modify it. thats just lazy. oh, and biting is pretty lazy too

you and this kid Dagel i know should hang out one day. 
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Originally posted by Rutter knows best Rutter knows best wrote:

All my concepts are from 2020 and later sorry can't agree there.




Pretty dope line
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You recycled the same verse twice on this site alone. Then, used it in a battle, making it three times. "Refined", it's word for word. Maybe I'm from the school of thought where recycling is frowned upon in battles. I thought it went without saying that "no recycling/no biting" was universal. This just shows you were too lazy to come up with something new and/or simply just couldn't. It shows a lack of respect to your opponent and to us as a community. 

Also, you have a bitten line in the verse.

Also, you went above 16 lines. 

All of which are means of disqualification.  
   
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Originally posted by rhetorical rhetorical wrote:

I got master degree burns 
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Recycling is not a good look

I have posted old verses, but i put a disclaimer in there saying "this is an old verse" so shit like this dont happen. 

but in a battle, i will not just go grab an old verse and modify it. thats just lazy. oh, and biting is pretty lazy too

you and this kid Dagel i know should hang out one day. 




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It's 16 lines, I format my verses to accentuate the pauses where I want them. And it aint word for word, after refining, the key words were different making a different meaning. The next 8-9 lines are completely brand new. Also i originally started writing this for a regular open Mic drop.

And the line isn't bitten bruh
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Originally posted by Smoothtung Smoothtung wrote:

It's 16 lines, I format my verses to accentuate the pauses where I want them. And it aint word for word, after refining, the key words were different making a different meaning. The next 8-9 lines are completely brand new. Also i originally started writing this for a regular open Mic drop.

And the line isn't bitten bruh

   
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Think of this as an intervention smooth. This is where friends and family get to let you how your biting addiction has hurt and effected them.
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Yea aight guys
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Originally posted by Rutter knows best Rutter knows best wrote:

Think of this as an intervention smooth. This is where friends and family get to let you how your biting addiction has hurt and effected them.


We gonna have one for you and give you the strength to go see a doctor
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Originally posted by daydizzle89 daydizzle89 wrote:

Originally posted by Rutter knows best Rutter knows best wrote:

Think of this as an intervention smooth. This is where friends and family get to let you how your biting addiction has hurt and effected them.


We gonna have one for you and give you the strength to go see a doctor


What's the worst that can happen.
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Originally posted by Smoothtung Smoothtung wrote:

Yea aight guys


I'll tell you how it makes me feel... It makes me feel like I can't trust you, as an extension it makes me think the worst of people. It's contagious, it's make me doubt other people. Next minute I'm reading a a dizz line about anal flows ...like is that a rakim line, is that jay electronica...then I have to remind myself...no that's hot garbage, no one else would of wrote that.


There's a ripple effect smooth.
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