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Kosmosis
Superior Member Joined: 12 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 3264 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-15-1 Form: WWLLNL |
Topic: Orion vs. Veritas Posted: 17 August 2010 at 3:38pm |
rules=eh. unlim bars, O spits first, no time limit, any body can vote just please explain it, pink slips if you want O, just say it. VERITAS check.
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Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13.
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 19 August 2010 at 3:11am |
And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon thee...
There's only one gOd It's true that I am flawless While you're just Dr Seuss if we let him loose with a thesaurus kos's daddy said to 'be the best' But Father taught him to suck Religion 1, fam 0 But do we even give a fuck? Since you revealed you survived Katrina It's funny that . . . All the donors been callin' in They want their money back That whole 'james' verse was an atrocity Now you're Tiger Woods Without the cash, talent or pussy And a worse apology Inferiority complex Constantly obsessed I'm this faggot's idol Loves my rank Even put me first in the battle title I was baffled by you The way you insanely boasting Wait . . . he works for a nuthouse Don't that just explain the whole thing?! A nuthouse That's how this fuck is measured He phone battles the retards just to up his record But who agreed to pinkslips? kosmosis did Now when you lose You must obey the gOd's commandments kos Moses did You're wacker than the co-worker you signed up to ride you And ya 'vocab rap' style is even faker than ya IQ To find proof? It ain't hard, if I'm honest 'Cuz you so fuckin' stupid you named yourself after a Goddess You thought you were smart You thought 'I'm the truth' But you faker than every personal you've ever tried to use Now it's time to lose james murphy gon' cry and boo So fuckin' stupid But at least you dyin' true by ya Irish roots It's typical Kosmo Meanin' every time you try an' spit You're obsessed writin' 'bout gettin' O But only stupid bitches buyin' it And ya writtens ain't a threat and You got no soul But we'll still call james Brown 'cuz I'm shittin' on a dead man Why you say no time limit? Tryna switch rules? Bitch move I dare you to take forever 'Cuz I know you'll still lose Plus you wanna talk me outta slips Don't wanna see the pink Scared of bein' banished Damn, what would Jesus think? Three PMs and an email Spyin' on me, he failed Harassin' Cuba, Cali, Stalin, scooter for my details But this fuck isn't gonna win Full of more fake intelligence than his beloved Republican government Fuckin' pathetic You a dour bitch You got a house and kids But it's Murphy's Law None of it will amount to shit Ya Call of Duty's to ya church and online fantasies And so ya wife'll play hers out gettin' smashed in every cavity Ya kids won't ever speak of daddy Embarrassment too frequent They'll go back to Father just to get the treatment Crunch time You're just a little bluffer You just can't deliver Like your mother when she killed your brother And when she cried they were tears of joy A stunnin' truth She'd saved herself and the world from another one of you She's stuck with you though But I'm takin' care of that And if she was on LA I know she'd be sayin' thanks You're welcome |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Kosmosis
Superior Member Joined: 12 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 3264 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-15-1 Form: WWLLNL |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 4:34pm |
Die.
so gOd is a nerdy asian kid with sickle cell? well now i'm an athiest
punch your face till we can't tell which of your slanted eyes i made laziest
you fucking suck, and that verse proves it, now it's got your dick riders cursing...
cuz that trash proved Rameez and Orion is actually the same person!
i beat you to a pulp , cuz your lines were all fiction:
shit even chain did a better job of dissing a christian!
i called him out, but got stuck with the veteran's curse:
Feeling like Scott Pilgrim, had to battle his boyfriend's ahead of him first!!
obvious this faggot is shook, my raw style is what he likes:
THE PROOF IS HIS WHOLE VERSE IS ONLY MY OPEN MICS!!!
i gave you all the chance in the world, but you still proved unable:
you fail, like thinking renegaydes will ever get signed to a major label (lames)
wanna battle?
the TRUTH IS I was the champ while you still had a rookie spit
VERITAS makes this chink flip when i hand him his pink slip!
that drop was pure shit, and I ain't even tryna bring sway:
I can't believe this is the same guy who used to beat King J!!!?
you missed me with eighty lines of shitty format:
shatter the glass ceiling, now you know where the floors at!
you think your too good, but you ain't active, just an anonymous troller:
VERITAS is far colder, with these punches all up in his grill like a molar!
my skill is bolder, fuck complexity, I bring your pain simply:
this bitch is named after a belt and he still couldn't whip me!!
i had to wait four months for shit, like i just watched a bear wake up from hibernation:
MOTHERFUCKER HOW CAN YOU BE NAMED AFTER A STAR AND STILL NEED ELEVATION???
smash your face in, replace the space you fake in, when i retire this coward
the "comfort zone terrorist" , how i left your stories twin towered!
this is slaughter, the discerning voter will see how this ain't even a contest:
for the record, when i said any of the top ten, what i meant was the best! (u suck.)
you want another chance? well not on lyrical assault, taking back the mojo i loaned you...
now you will always remember that it was JAMES MURPHY who fucking owned you!
i aint gotta talk to his buddies to get the information on this disgrace.....
cuz only one ugly motherfucker wouldn't post his face on myspace!!!
your verse should have rode on a float making it's gay pride march...
LOL.....maybe you should have left in all the J5 parts !!?
when i said "remember the future" I already knew at first you'd duck:
been waiting for this moment to reveal how i already knew your verse would suck
what a letdown: go back to the beginning, see if I dont make you a believer:
"IF THAT IS VERITAS, THEN HE AINT A SON EITHER!!!" (his own words giving me props)
you really think i would pm those guys to get the truth? bitch i am a mastermind controller
remember the old saying: keep your friends close, but your MSN-emies closer!! (right?)
i was big upping in my open mics, and of course, i knew you'd bite....
IF THIS FAGGOT NEVER BATTLES, HOW CAN HE BE RELEVENT UP ON A BATTLE SITE??
these irish eyes were smiling when i saw your verse, like did you even re"hearse" it first???
all it had me saying was, "what the fuck? were our ranks reversed!!!?"
this is murder. my punches are "ironically" fatal, as I-kontinue to be illa with this son....
SHIT, EVEN KING JEHU IS BETTER THEN u, SO EASY TO BRING 5 TO 1 (kill)
in closing, i dont want to be the new star, i just dont want the site to vote wack....
becuase i just made "orion the hunter for a new site to post at".......bitch go pack.
no...YOUR welcome.
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stuckinthepost
Standard Member Joined: 14 April 2010 Location: Gravesend Status: Offline Points: 634 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-7-1 Form: WLLWLN |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 4:59pm |
FUCK.
seriously. fuck.
I'll vote on this in while, I need to get my head round this
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you come at the king, you best not miss.
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Calibra
Standard Member Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 5:14pm |
Ok, I'd loveto break this down line for line but obviously there's a shit load of bars so I'm not gonna bother.
Orion - There were some true murderous parts to this verse. I wasn't sure how well you'd come in this battle being rusty and obviously knowing how much time you worked on it. Flow was ok for the most part, got choppy at times, for a text battle though I don't think it matters too much. Opener was good, liked the James Brown punch too. My fav lines though were the "kos Moses did" line, that actually had me laughing and obviously the "You failed to deliver" line, which was absolutley beastly, 2's status, although this time I feel you were justified in using a line like that. Could have ended stronger after the bar you set with the "Failed to deliver" line but was overall pretty impressed. I could go on about more of the bars which impressed me and which didn't but I don't wanna write a vote longer than the verses. Kosmosis - I actually really liked your opener, HOWEVER, as has been said to you before by the man himself and I can also confirm this, he isn't Chinese, therefore to me personally all of you're Chinese punchlines missed for me cause it's just like a fake personal. I also felt you spent a large amount of time just saying that Orions verse was shit, which as a one off filler 'personal' you can maybe get away with, but you did this numerous times and as I liked his verse I also felt this didn't hit. Closer was decent, but overall I felt there was too many misses or just generally weak punchlines. In closing, a battle that didn't quite live up to the hype for me. I thought it ended up pretty one sided and was expecting a lot more from Kos considering how much he's been bigging himself up over the past months. So, my vote goes to Orion. Take it or leave it. |
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The Composition
Standard Member Joined: 13 August 2010 Location: States Status: Offline Points: 178 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-0 Form: LLLLW |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 6:21pm |
O There's only one gOd kos's daddy said to 'be the best'
But Father taught him to suck Religion 1, fam 0 But do we even give a fuck? Decent Personal Since you revealed you survived Katrina Decent Line
That whole 'james' verse was an atrocity
Now you're Tiger Woods Without the cash, talent or pussy And a worse apology Nice Flow And Punch Inferiority complex
Constantly obsessed I'm this faggot's idol Loves my rank Even put me first in the battle title Again Nice Flow Set Up And Punch I was baffled by you Nice Personal A nuthouse
That's how this fuck is measured He phone battles the retards just to up his record Nice Again But who agreed to pinkslips?
kosmosis did Now when you lose
You must obey the gOd's commandments kos Moses did Fuckin' Sick Good Flow, Killer Punch/NamePlay You're wacker than the co-worker you signed up to ride you
And ya 'vocab rap' style is even faker than ya IQ Nice Personal To find proof? james murphy gon' cry and boo And ya writtens ain't a threat and Tryna switch rules?
Bitch move I dare you to take forever 'Cuz I know you'll still lose SoSo, Some-What Filler
Plus you wanna talk me outta slips lol nice Three PMs and an email
Spyin' on me, he failed Harassin' Cuba, Cali, Stalin, scooter for my details Nice But this fuck isn't gonna win Decent Ya Call of Duty's to ya church and online fantasies
And so ya wife'll play hers out gettin' smashed in every cavity Ya kids won't ever speak of daddy Nice Embarrassment too frequent
They'll go back to Father just to get the treatment Decent Personal Crunch time And when she cried they were tears of joy Nice Close But Could Of Had A Better Flow And Hit Harder
so gOd is a nerdy asian kid with sickle cell? well now i'm an athiest punch your face till we can't tell which of your slanted eyes i made laziest you fucking suck, and that verse proves it, now it's got your dick riders cursing... cuz that trash proved Rameez and Orion is actually the same person! Nice But Again Another Set Up About O's Verse Sucking i beat you to a pulp , cuz your lines were all fiction: shit even chain did a better job of dissing a christian! Decent i called him out, but got stuck with the veteran's curse: Feeling like Scott Pilgrim, had to battle his boyfriend's ahead of him first!! SoSo obvious this faggot is shook, my raw style is what he likes: THE PROOF IS HIS WHOLE VERSE IS ONLY MY OPEN MICS!!! Very Nice i gave you all the chance in the world, but you still proved unable: you fail, like thinking renegaydes will ever get signed to a major label (lames) Decent wanna battle? the TRUTH IS I was the champ while you still had a rookie spit VERITAS makes this chink flip when i hand him his pink slip! Nice that drop was pure shit, and I ain't even tryna bring sway: I can't believe this is the same guy who used to beat King J!!!? Nice Punch, But Too Many Uses Of O's Verse being Shit or Sucking you missed me with eighty lines of shitty format: shatter the glass ceiling, now you know where the floors at! Nice you think your too good, but you ain't active, just an anonymous troller: VERITAS is far colder, with these punches all up in his grill like a molar!
my skill is bolder, fuck complexity, I bring your pain simply: this bitch is named after a belt and he still couldn't whip me!! Nice But Somewhat Obvious Punch i had to wait four months for shit, like i just watched a bear wake up from hibernation: MOTHERFUCKER HOW CAN YOU BE NAMED AFTER A STAR AND STILL NEED ELEVATION??? Long, But Still Decent smash your face in, replace the space you fake in, when i retire this coward the "comfort zone terrorist" , how i left your stories twin towered!
this is slaughter, the discerning voter will see how this ain't even a contest: for the record, when i said any of the top ten, what i meant was the best! (u suck.) Decent you want another chance? well not on lyrical assault, taking back the mojo i loaned you... now you will always remember that it was JAMES MURPHY who fucking owned you! Nice One Of Your Better Punches i aint gotta talk to his buddies to get the information on this disgrace..... cuz only one ugly motherfucker wouldn't post his face on myspace!!! Decent your verse should have rode on a float making it's gay pride march... LOL.....maybe you should have left in all the J5 parts !!? Set Up Was SoSo, Punch Was Good when i said "remember the future" I already knew at first you'd duck: been waiting for this moment to reveal how i already knew your verse would suck
what a letdown: go back to the beginning, see if I dont make you a believer: "IF THAT IS VERITAS, THEN HE AINT A SON EITHER!!!" (his own words giving me props) Nice you really think i would pm those guys to get the truth? bitch i am a mastermind controller remember the old saying: keep your friends close, but your MSN-emies closer!! (right?) Decent i was big upping in my open mics, and of course, i knew you'd bite.... IF THIS FAGGOT NEVER BATTLES, HOW CAN HE BE RELEVENT UP ON A BATTLE SITE?? Nice these irish eyes were smiling when i saw your verse, like did you even re"hearse" it first??? all it had me saying was, "what the fuck? were our ranks reversed!!!?"
SoSo Set Up, But Again Another Line About O's Verse, The Punch Was Very Nice Tho'
this is murder. my punches are "ironically" fatal, as I-kontinue to be illa with this son.... SHIT, EVEN KING JEHU IS BETTER THEN u, SO EASY TO BRING 5 TO 1 (kill) Nice in closing, i dont want to be the new star, i just dont want the site to vote wack.... becuase i just made "orion the hunter for a new site to post at".......bitch go pack. Nice Closer, Good Simple Multi's |
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J504
Banned Joined: 08 June 2010 Status: Offline Points: 5385 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-0-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 7:09pm |
So Really? I thought it was the more clever of the 2 drops, thought the Opener and Closer were better and it flowed better (I agree Orion’s was choppy) As for the “fake personals”, that’s moot. Cause that “James” drop is all that O referenced and it was clearly bait (I can vouch for that too) As for creativity? Have we not heard the same exact Christian/Family/IQ stuff for months now? This was like a weaker version of what CHAIN killed Kosmo with already. Go read CHAIN's again, it kills O's. I think Kosmo stepped up for this against the number 1 guy who’s definitely no where near his old self. I really liked the “cause Moses did” line though, that was nice! Vote = Kosmo lol |
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 20 August 2010 at 7:11pm |
J504 - You're going to have to actually explain your vote. You can't give a vote to Kosmo on the grounds that -Orion-'s verse is a weaker version of what CHAIN smashed Kosmo with.
So yeah, still 2-0 until you explain your vote better. Thanks.
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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J504
Banned Joined: 08 June 2010 Status: Offline Points: 5385 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-0-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 7:24pm |
O- Should've attacked his skill more than just referencing 1 Open Mic and his religion that's been done to death already. Flow was choppy, format was choppy. Best hit was the "cause Moses did" line. Would've been nice to see you expose his actual mistakes or his battles against him rather than info that "he purposely provided you with".
Kosmo - Opener was funny as shit, closer was better than O's (again O referencing an Open Mic). The MSN-emies line killed, The callback to Veritas was clever. You did alot less lines than he did though, could've used those extra lines for some soccer references or something. You did a good job of making a personal against a dude that works hard at not revealing personal info.
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 20 August 2010 at 7:27pm |
Cheers.
2-1 -Orion-
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J504
Banned Joined: 08 June 2010 Status: Offline Points: 5385 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-0-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 7:29pm |
That better, Nep?
I was referencing the "creativity" aspect with the CHAIN reference (not sayin' O lost cause Chain's was better), as we've all seen the same religion disses for months now. Don't know if I was clear enough on that. It's kinda like the Tommy/Rugrat references, after seeing it in 3 or 4 battles, should voters want to see more creativity wise?
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NepentheZ
Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 7:46pm |
You know what. FFFFFS.
I just spent like 30 minutes on my fucking vote, and I hit "back" by mistake (quick scrolling ftl) So here it is again, in shorter, sharper terms : -Orion- , solid verse. Some nice concepts, solid punches, kos mosis did bar was hot, Killing baby brother bar was raw, there was another sick punch in there towards the end, The Murphy's law punch, that was sick. Didn't think the format of the verse would help you none, but it was quite the opposite. Made it very easy to follow, flowed well, nice verse. Kosmosis, Chinese shit fake personals, and other fake personals are a massive negative for me. MSN-imies line was nice, but it seems you come unstuck when trying to think of wordplay and metaphors. Yeah, you got similes, but they're child like (Up in your grill like a molar, for example) - and really just don't have an effect on the battle. Considering O's drop wasn't of the highest standard, you had an epic opportunity here to crush him, but you just didn't. Pretty pissed off that I lost my previous vote, because I had everything down in a hell of a lot more detail, however, what I've got there is sufficient. Overall, pretty 1 sided battle here. -Orion- GMV......
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-Que-
Standard Member Joined: 22 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 2745 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 13-4-1 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 21 August 2010 at 1:25am |
Man imma be straight up wit it cuz I dont have no ties to either competitor.
Orion yo shit was soft more than vicious and punchy.The slut wife / the mom killin brother/and ect..... You set up your shit like its about to be hella funny but then it just fizzles.I been waiting to see your scripts for a long while so I guess I was anticipating too much.Wasn't considering how long you been away.You did have a few good lines but no where near the dopeness that some said you had IMO.Overall your drop was average .....but I did like your unusual style you brought to the table....the read was nice. Kos- One line stood out for me and that was the star elevation line.LOL.......the rest was along with Orions......just decent.....didnt see much else goin on with your drop niether except some repetitive things. This battle was hell close in my eyes and I really don't give a fuck what peeps think cuz frankly...I had to read these drops like 3 times each to make sure I didnt miss nothin.This battle was long winded and lost its appeal midway thru. I think Kos barely escapes the L with that one line that caught me off gaurd and made me laugh.This shit could go either way ...good luck fellas! V-Kos |
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BIG GAME
Newbie Joined: 16 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 4322 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-4-0 Form: WLWWLW |
Posted: 21 August 2010 at 1:28am |
I personally think that this was a catsweep by Kos.
Kos did his thing here.
To be quite frank, he didn't need to do much. TBH, Orions verse got way boring and sleepy. Plus his structure was all fucked up. Yes, Kos had his typical few stretched lines but still had a wayyy better rhyme scheme and flow than Orions. Seriously Orion said nothing. Makes me wonder how he has that record. Kos, good shit and good hits, I like the Orion and Rameez being the same person line.LOL MVGT KOS
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Calibra
Standard Member Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
Posted: 21 August 2010 at 1:56am |
Well you could totally ignore my vote and read what you'd like to see or you could actually properly read it and not just look at the outcome.... I suggest you do the latter and get back to me. |
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J504
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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 2:28am |
Cal, honestly I don't want to disrespect O or Kosmo by flippin' on your swayin'. Come to the "for Orion" thread I started and we can continue this... |
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 21 August 2010 at 2:29am |
So flippin / swaying about the battle in another thread is acceptable?
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Calibra
Standard Member Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
Posted: 21 August 2010 at 2:31am |
My fuckin' swayin'? Did you even read the vote ou dumb ass motherfucker?! I have no problems about you riding for ya boyfriend but don't drag me into your dick riding cause you disagree with my opinion.
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Manc
Superior Member Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 21 August 2010 at 2:52am |
If I accuse somebody of swaying in my battle when they didn't sway - that in itself will serve as a swaying tactic - and unfortunately, most of the time it would work. Amongst all the bitching and hissy fits...I'm amazed nobody is cottoning onto this reverse psychology swaying |
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Manc
Superior Member Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 21 August 2010 at 3:18am |
Yano what - fuck it. I said to Kos I wasn't gonna vote but battles need votes and I'm in the mood for voting.
Firstly - I'd like to say that I DO NOT AGREE with this pink slip shit. Although it makes for a more intense show-down - I dont believe that a loss should mean the end to a members membership. Anywhooo....... Orion - As Que already mentioned....I was a little disappointed with what you came out here with, in comparison to what I've read from you previously, but having said that, the Moses bar and those surrounding it killed this for me. The format was a bit funky but still easy to read and although you flow went off at points - I enjoyed your verse. Kos- I've already told you what I thought about this battle - and that I don't want to contribute to you leaving this site - which is why I'm voting now, so that I don't become that last voter to make that decision. Your verse was the best I've seen from you since you've been here - but the made up personals (which you and J5 seemed to be accustomed to) and the lack of consistency in your punches is why IMO, Orion beat you this time. MVGT - Orion And I'd just like to add - that my initial doubts on voting in this battle have NOTHING WHATSOEVER to do with anything that has happened between me J and Kos - it was solely cuz Orion NEVER votes on battles (or at least since I've been here). Though my decision still stands. Good luck to you both |
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