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    Posted: 05 September 2019 at 5:44pm
Well ppl have i got a challenge for you that'll test your writing skills and creativity, the rules
are simple, 1st every entry must start with #p15 as part of the title when submitting your
verse, as this will save me trawling through posts missing entries, 2nd, this is a monthly
challenge where I'll post a picture up and you then have 15 Lines max, or less to write a
topical piece on the picture provided, then ill do a little write up on each verse kind of like
a mini mag scenario, 3rd, your offerings will be judge either by the boards members or by
yourselves (those who took part), failing that I'll be the deciding judge.. G/L..


ps..the rules to this challenge are not set in stone, 1 month could be different from the next,
there will be months when this challenge takes on a twist or variation..











Closing date 5th October..

Edited by Crimson Juice - 05 September 2019 at 5:50pm
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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#P15.

I didn't want to kill her, Christ told me too,
What's a man spose to do but follow urges through?

I tried to dull the voices but the louder they grew.
So I wrapped my hands round her throat till her face turned blue,

Up until her last breath blew, she put up a fight,
I knew it wasnt right but this wasn't done outta spite,

I'm out here doing gods work, An angel of the night.
So as the day Dawns and her body turns white,

I take her to the church, Lay her where the voices say,
Portray her in a way that entices disciples to prey,

For this is an example of what happens to children that stray from our Cult and for their sins they must pay,

Today was her day and her Life was the price,
So God please take this sacrifice and take mercy I beg,


My Child wasnt raised this way, She ain't a bad egg.


Edited by Mitch.Wagwaan - 09 September 2019 at 2:33pm
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hidden within fairy tales still told to the children
truth behind the lies chills up and down your spines
The killin that occurred would blow your little minds
Corrupt the soul change the heart of whoever realize
The witch in the woods is real eyes as cold as steel
Soon as she sees you threw the trees, hard to breath when you scared
Have you frozen on the spot gasping for air
As she comes closer bubble in your throat
Each step she takes got you losing hope
Trying to scream nota a sound try to run not a chance
As you faint down to the leaves she cackles with a dance
Singing I’m the witch in the woods who would kill you with a glance
As she drags you home to eat your flesh and feed her cats the scraps







Edited by Slip - 19 September 2019 at 2:10am
See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego
inner demon violent beast so
warn the mother fucking people
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My dear son, what strength you have overcome 
people are numb to the fact that its 1741 
heavenly thoughts, people think your done 
your muscles are numb but your heart is a ton
one day people like you will be included and loved
instead of secluded and shunned 
Im not a caregiver, im his fucking mom 
without my trust he would be lost 
He is an outcast to the community except for in church
God gives us the power to overcome the worst 
In the future i hope people will see how much it hurts
to put no worth into a person that was like this since birth

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Desperate pleas, fall deaf on trees. As I realize My words are wasted...

The woods reply to all my cries...With a snide reverberation

Wicked whispers from the wind, combined with cackles from the crows...

paranoid by all the gossip, has my hackles on its toes....

I’m getting weaker, breath is shallow, now I’m seeing stars and doubles

Light is dimming, air is thinning as my vision starts to tunnel...

That's when I hear the rustle...no doubt....the creature whom Im fleeing...

I heard the low growl from its muzzle, convinced this was no human being....

Saw two reflections for a second, that's when... all things turned to nothing ...

My final thought, before the darkness...”OMG...They must have drugged me” .

You’ll do lovely, said the creature...it’s intentions dark and morbid

Fascinated by the locks of gold... that framed her face and made her gorgeous

Pushing the corpse back through the forest...she emerges with her forage....

Hey Papa bear... come grab the door! I caught the whore who ate the porridge
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I live inside a cabin in the middle of the forest
the forest floor is morbid cause' I riddled it with corpses
I like mashing brains up to turn them into porridge
I'm a hunter gatherer, I'd rather hunt than forage

I like my corpses fresh, I don't want no peelin' skin
I don't want no flies around me by the time I wheel em' in...
I wake up every morning feeling grim
cause' I know I'll have to kill again before my meal begins

I eat human flesh, something most have never done
I eat human thyroids, livers and their tongues...
you'll get your penis severed son,
I'll cover it with ketchup and I'll put it in a bun
I'm an antisocial hermit, but a clever one
they'll never catch me in the act, the cops will never come
if you see me and you're in the woods alone you better run


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Now closed, mag will be up in a day or two..peace.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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