Open Mic: #p15..... Picture in 15 Lines.

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    Posted: 05 September 2019 at 5:44pm
Well ppl have i got a challenge for you that'll test your writing skills and creativity, the rules
are simple, 1st every entry must start with #p15 as part of the title when submitting your
verse, as this will save me trawling through posts missing entries, 2nd, this is a monthly
challenge where I'll post a picture up and you then have 15 Lines max, or less to write a
topical piece on the picture provided, then ill do a little write up on each verse kind of like
a mini mag scenario, 3rd, your offerings will be judge either by the boards members or by
yourselves (those who took part), failing that I'll be the deciding judge.. G/L..


ps..the rules to this challenge are not set in stone, 1 month could be different from the next,
there will be months when this challenge takes on a twist or variation..











Closing date 5th October..

Edited by Crimson Juice - 05 September 2019 at 5:50pm
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#P15.

I didn't want to kill her, Christ told me too,
What's a man spose to do but follow urges through?

I tried to dull the voices but the louder they grew.
So I wrapped my hands round her throat till her face turned blue,

Up until her last breath blew, she put up a fight,
I knew it wasnt right but this wasn't done outta spite,

I'm out here doing gods work, An angel of the night.
So as the day Dawns and her body turns white,

I take her to the church, Lay her where the voices say,
Portray her in a way that entices disciples to prey,

For this is an example of what happens to children that stray from our Cult and for their sins they must pay,

Today was her day and her Life was the price,
So God please take this sacrifice and take mercy I beg,


My Child wasnt raised this way, She ain't a bad egg.


Edited by Mitch.Wagwaan - 09 September 2019 at 2:33pm
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