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    Posted: 29 August 2019 at 6:03pm
Hello ppl..

I'm going to start a new challenge that'll test you as a writer, each month i'll be
posting up a picture, you then have to write a themed topical that corresponds
to it in 15 lines or less, (in essence the word drop with a twist), ill do a write up
on each verse submitted which will also be open for feedback this will be held
in the Open Mic section, the board or even the ppl who entered themselves can
vote on who was the Poet Laureate for that month, if believe you have the skills
then here's where to step and showcase them, stay tuned as this challenge will
be starting on the 3rd of September.peace.
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Why fifteen bars?

Most rap is written in quatrains so 16 would make a lot more sense.
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lol...15 lines friend...peace.
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"Why 15 lines?" Because Crimbo got off his arse and decided to do something to generate activity people said they wanted and he decided 15 lines was what he wanted to do...

Fuck me if you care that much enter and write 1 more line, what's he gonna do? Delete 1 line of your verse in protest?

Jesus.
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lol.... You could write 14,its just 15 the maximum, anyhow poetry is not ridged you could try writing in sets
of 3's,get out the box and try maybe, but whatever suits you....peace.
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Sounds good crim think I mite be down to shake off some rust
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Originally posted by Cuba Cuba wrote:

"Why 15 lines?" Because Crimbo got off his arse and decided to do something to generate activity people said they wanted and he decided 15 lines was what he wanted to do...

Fuck me if you care that much enter and write 1 more line, what's he gonna do? Delete 1 line of your verse in protest?

Jesus.

Cuba I love you to death man but sometimes you just argue for the sake of it smh.
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I was calling you out on your crappy behaviour. Crim posts saying he wants to try something & first response says nothing positive and is a pure needless criticism.
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I know i typed the 3rd of September for this to take place, this will be happening
now on the 5th,due to work commitments om my side..peace.
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