Chase Cash vs concrete
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Category: Battle Ground
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Printed Date: 20 April 2024 at 8:34am
Topic: Chase Cash vs concrete
Posted By: Chase Cash
Subject: Chase Cash vs concrete
Date Posted: 06 September 2013 at 8:16pm
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10 Lines 1st to 5 votes (3-0 TKO) No Flipping Due 6 Hours from the time the last person checks ins |
Replies:
Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 06 September 2013 at 8:17pm
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*Check Check |
Posted By: Concrete
Date Posted: 06 September 2013 at 8:29pm
| check, but I request that Klean isnt allowed to vote here as he obviously has a petty grudge against me. |
Posted By: Concrete
Date Posted: 07 September 2013 at 1:39am
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aight, the people demand personals.. ..tellin me to investigate this trash, to get some but if any effort was invested in Cash, I would demand a refund you want beef son? give me the grass you smoking I'll rotate your backbone just to keep your ass from fronting Cash is stomping? I ain't gonna act a bit intimidated I'll bring value to this battle, Cash gets LIQUIDATED a simple fact is implicated, you're a fake ass whore you're chasing cash.. cause you obviously can't WAGE a war swiftly break your jaw, it's time to face facts call me a fucking web-browser, I just erased CACHE Fronting ass people = Haters LIQUIDATED 1, pay; change into cash 2. destroy, dissolve WAGE 1. Payment for labor or services 2. To engage in CACHE\CASH
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Posted By: Titu
Date Posted: 07 September 2013 at 12:34pm
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Bump for chase ------------- Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head. |
Posted By: Concrete
Date Posted: 07 September 2013 at 2:03pm
| please drop a$ap |
Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 07 September 2013 at 6:01pm
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Lol damnit I went to bed before you posted, but i'll drop in the next hour. You can decide if you wanna accept the verse... lol stupid 6 hour rule |
Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 07 September 2013 at 7:25pm
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Alright look... You a blind man that's bout to get beat, on a paved road to defeat. I'll catch an ass-ault it's this dumb ass-fault (asphalt), yea I blame it on concrete. Let me take over this make over, I'll even let you place your scars, All this effort yet I'm facin' tards, you'd think im givin away xanex the way im wastin' bars! Your family was too broke to get you circumcised, your life's been wrapped in lies, I'm slippin...this could've been your big day, but "concrete" can't capitalize. I'm like the lord of the dark side, you more like princess leah, ima get ya when I see ya, I think you bit that verse, cuz although it was tight, i didn't see 1 concrete idea! My flows as tight as a braid, my tongue as sharp as a blade, and you should be afraid, The irony of your name, cuz you soft as a bitch and you don't ever get laid! - Asphalt/Concrete should be self explanatory - Wastin' Barz/ Xanex comes in bars - concrete's name isn't capitalized - concrete is hard and you lay concrete, hence "soft as a bitch" "never get laid" |
Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 08 September 2013 at 4:56am
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uppin votes!! |
Posted By: Concrete
Date Posted: 08 September 2013 at 9:54am
| dope verse cash, ass-fault\asphalt was just used by umlv though |
Posted By: Concrete
Date Posted: 08 September 2013 at 10:24pm
| Up for legit votes, I will return the favour regardless of who you vote for |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 08 September 2013 at 10:49pm
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Yes we do demand personals.... Concrete - very impressive verse, sharp writing style, get to the point quickly and deliver witty punches that do a lot of damage to your opponent, Even your second bar which was generic was still nicely written, very cleanly executed. I basically really enjoyed this verse, only thing to say is your rhymes could be a bit more intricate...but, that said, you had a flow that worked really well & excellent rhythm to your verse, so actually, all those things are primary to having more complicated rhymes for the sake of it. Very solid verse, will be difficult to best. Cash - ooooo, this is an impressive verse as well!! Interesting! Longer line style, so not as crisp as concrete...but that also allowed you to develop some pretty advanced concepts later in your verse. Opener was cool, liked how you weaves it intricately...but I think this lacked impact, the punch was weaker than the wordplay you had going on...next bar was generic, better rhyming that concrete but I thought yours was kind of filler-ish, ended up being an ok jab whereas his generic bar was a sharp jab. Next bar was a lot better, your filler was a bit ehhh, but the actual punch concept was quality, really liked that as a punch...you then stepped it up from this point, again, filler line could've been better...I liked that you were using 'oneupman' style comparison, but that's pretty dated...so good technique, but needed an updated reference...but the punchline was absolutely awesome, like a perfect punch to respond to his verse...really really high quality! Similar criticism on the next filler, "tight as a braid" is a played concept (doesn't hurt you as much because its not a main aspect to your line, but still, you need to be sharper with your imagery...you show you understand the technique, just need to execute it better)...but yeah, the punch for the closer was another dope one So yeah, you both really impressed me...obviously both know what you're doing & must have a lot of experience. It's actually a tough one to vote. I think Cash had a style I really appreciate, sharp, concise, consistent hits, clever...Cash came back with a wider variety of weapons, his verse had more elements in there (partly a function of having longer lines & therefore more content)...I think he could've been sharper in the way he executed his imagery & wordplay at times...but equally he had the best punch of the battle with that "concrete idea" line Very tough, I think Cash started weak but really came back into...my instinct would generally to go with concrete because I really liked his approach & style...but ultimately, this is a close battle and I think I should go with who had the most heat, and this time Cash had the best punch of the battle & therefore it tips it slightly in his favour. Sometimes you can say "your inconsistency cost you", but don't think that would be valid in this case Vote = Cash...great battle though guys ------------- 
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Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 09 September 2013 at 9:38am
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Thanks for fully explaining your vote Cuba!! It's always nice to get some valid feedback on what you can work on and do better! Good verse too concrete! I didn't see that line otherwise i definitely wouldn't have put it in my verse lol!! but thanks again Cuba and uppin' for more votes!! 1-0 |
Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 10 September 2013 at 12:06pm
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uppin still!! |
Posted By: Zinaii
Date Posted: 10 September 2013 at 7:28pm
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..tellin me to investigate this trash, to get some but if any effort was invested in Cash, I would demand a refund ehhh this coulda been more effective the wording was off to me but it was a decent concept 2/5 you want beef son? give me the grass you smoking I'll rotate your backbone just to keep your ass from fronting this was light but it was effective got the job done imo 2/5 Cash is stomping? I ain't gonna act a bit intimidated I'll bring value to this battle, Cash gets LIQUIDATED this was a nice nameplay flow was dead on syllable wise good line 3.5/5 a simple fact is implicated, you're a fake ass whore you're chasing cash.. cause you obviously can't WAGE a war this was another decent flip not hardhitting but very effective 3/5 swiftly break your jaw, it's time to face facts call me a fucking web-browser, I just erased CACHE this was a nice closer best line of yours very good way to end the verse 4/5 overall this was better then ur other battle verses u got the concept of flowing and syllables down keep working on those nameflips r definently heading in the right direction 14/25 |
Posted By: Zinaii
Date Posted: 10 September 2013 at 7:39pm
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You a blind man that's bout to get beat, on a paved road to defeat. I'll catch an ass-ault it's this dumb ass-fault (asphalt), yea I blame it on concrete. first off i see u were catching flack for the asphalt line but i dont believe u purposely read sumbodys battle and bit i think when u hear concrete thats one of the first things u wuld think of is asphalt. Now on the other hand learn from that because on here u have to be creative and think outside the box bring new angles to old ideas. as far as this line it wasnt to hardhitting but i see what u were trying to do. 2/5 Let me take over this make over, I'll even let you place your scars, All this effort yet I'm facin' tards, you'd think im givin away xanex the way im wastin' bars! this was decent nothing special good use of multis 2/5 Your family was too broke to get you circumcised, your life's been wrapped in lies, I'm slippin...this could've been your big day, but "concrete" can't capitalize. another decent line better then your first 2 lines a decent personal 3/5 I'm like the lord of the dark side, you more like princess leah, ima get ya when I see ya, I think you bit that verse, cuz although it was tight, i didn't see 1 concrete idea! this was ur best bar i felt this hit harder then all of the other lines first line was filler tho 3.5/5 My flows as tight as a braid, my tongue as sharp as a blade, and you should be afraid, The irony of your name, cuz you soft as a bitch and you don't ever get laid! this was a decent concept the line had potential but the way u worded didnt give it any sting we like to stab ppl in the neck and brutalize the opponent 2.5/5 12.5/25 overall this battle was actually a pretty good read and it was close i slept on chase cash but u didnt lay down u brought it and made this battle actually worth breaking down line for line. concrete ur almost there, just work on personals and nameflips u have a lot of potential to be really good on this site. chase cash ur one of the better noobs ive seen on here. work on cutting out the filler in your setup lines. i think ur best bar was prolly the concrete idea line and the capatalize line. crete i liked the cache line cash had slightly better disses overall but i think u edged it out with a better flow and ur haymakers were harder imo. Great battle guys i enjoyed breaking this down concrete gmv |
Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 10 September 2013 at 7:57pm
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1-1 thanks for votin Zinaii!! |
Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 16 September 2013 at 5:16am
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1-1 Still uppin on votes.. |
Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 19 September 2013 at 12:58am
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1-1 upping ------------- The original comeback kid |
Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 22 September 2013 at 7:29am
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Can we get some damn votes?? this battle has been open for like a month now lol U P P I N . . . |
Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 24 September 2013 at 4:54am
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So... |
Posted By: Shankley
Date Posted: 25 September 2013 at 11:00am
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great battle both of you had some great lines and they both were a good read concrete: great word play and i like the short snappy line style you have Cash: your verse was impressive your concepts were solid and your flow was bang on the money. MVGT Cash
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Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 26 September 2013 at 5:44am
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Thanks for taking some time to vote!! 2-1 Still uppin' please these are 2 decent verses.. |
Posted By: levy420
Date Posted: 26 September 2013 at 2:27pm
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concrete- first of all this was a solid verse love the liquiidation line n the web browser line u came wit some solid punches an good name flips cash- ur opener was great an fallowed wit some good solid punches as well while u took a more lengthy approach i thought u pulled it off well an did enough to edge it out this was a really close battle guys could go either way it really is gonna come down to personal prefrence n i was feeling cash's verse just a lil more either way this type of battle is a win win u each brought the best outta eachother but mvgt cash -------------  |
Posted By: Josh DeRock
Date Posted: 26 September 2013 at 2:49pm
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Concrete-I liked it. Each bar was an attack and I liked the "fronting" punch. Your name flips were pretty witty too, without seeming like a stretch to connect. I'm very sure I don't like punches being explained tho, I don't know if that's usual around here or just a few that do it, your punches didn't need explaining, let them hit or miss on their own merits. Chase-your punches seemed a bit forced, not much stood out beyond the "waste of bars" line, (which was a wasted bar) and the concrete idea line, which had some solid humor to it. I liked your flow better, more lyrically inclined, but the punches didn't hit any harder for the poetics. Vote-Concrete for a consistent and witty attack as opposed to some filler and stretched concepts from cash.
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Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 27 September 2013 at 6:48am
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Thanks for votin' guys, appreciate the feedback for sure 3-2 good battle concrete! |
Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 04 October 2013 at 7:01am
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3-2 still... up up |
Posted By: Titu
Date Posted: 04 October 2013 at 12:46pm
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CONCRETE ..tellin me to investigate this trash, to get some but if any effort was invested in Cash, I would demand a refund It was a decent opener.nicely played. It stumbled a bit in "flow",but an ok "so called" personal was present. The concept was cool but wording could be better though.. you want beef son? give me the grass you smoking I'll rotate your backbone just to keep your ass from fronting Here, i liked how you took it to the second bar. This bar was generic but flow remained tight. Cash is stomping? I ain't gonna act a bit intimidated I'll bring value to this battle, Cash gets LIQUIDATED This is what I wanted to see. Nicely played personal which did the job pretty well. Flow was hot aswell. a simple fact is implicated, you're a fake ass whore you're chasing cash.. cause you obviously can't WAGE a war Nice flip. decent concept.did its job well.. swiftly break your jaw, it's time to face facts call me a fucking web-browser, I just erased CACHE more than good as a closer plus flow was also good. Chase Cash You a blind man that's bout to get beat, on a paved road to defeat. I'll catch an ass-ault it's this dumb ass-fault (asphalt), yea I blame it on concrete. Aight ,listen, this personal is too "old".If im not wrong, Zinaii used it first against him.Always try to think outside the box. creativity is very important in forming punches.Besides that, flow was just good. Let me take over this make over, I'll even let you place your scars, All this effort yet I'm facin' tards, you'd think im givin away xanex the way im wastin' bars! Not a banging personal but it was decent.nicely worded. flow was aight. Your family was too broke to get you circumcised, your life's been wrapped in lies, I'm slippin...this could've been your big day, but "concrete" can't capitalize. A decent line.good concept.but could be executed better. flow was nice. I'm like the lord of the dark side, you more like princess leah, ima get ya when I see ya, I think you bit that verse, cuz although it was tight, i didn't see 1 concrete idea! well, nicely executed. It landed harder than ya other lines. My flows as tight as a braid, my tongue as sharp as a blade, and you should be afraid, The irony of your name, cuz you soft as a bitch and you don't ever get laid! Concept was thr. But its a bit awkward the way its worded. overall, i liked reading both verses but concrete had more better personal attempts than chase.he had a better flow too... so MVGT CONCRETE STAY UP HOMIES. ------------- Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head. |
Posted By: Concrete
Date Posted: 08 October 2013 at 8:13pm
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aight then, 3-3, dramatic ncredztozevoterz |
Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 12 October 2013 at 7:51am
| uppin |
Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 18 October 2013 at 6:47am
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C'mon y'all... it's a 3-3 battle that's been open since the middle of September!! Can we just get 1 last vote n finally shut this battle please?! Much appreciated!! |
Posted By: hanGing
Date Posted: 18 October 2013 at 8:35am
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2 last votes... (or maybe 3) -------------  |
Posted By: Psychlone
Date Posted: 18 October 2013 at 1:48pm
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I vote cash I won't pretend I can analyse the bars as good as some of these guys, but cash's wordplay was on target, especially with the concrete idea verse and the ass-ault and ass-fault play was just damn good. Concrete's verse was pretty good too, but I felt cash more. ------------- "Yeah they call me pshyclone, cuz my words hit at a psychological level, When I was just six, I was taught a hundred ways to kill with a pebble" |
Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 26 October 2013 at 7:52am
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My bad lol i forgot first to 5, i don't know what i was thinkin... 4-3 uppin' just a couple more votes at most guys!!! |
Posted By: Concrete
Date Posted: 26 October 2013 at 9:22pm
| aight, no phat lady is singing yet, appealing to the experienced guys for the final n decisive votes |
Posted By: Chase Cash
Date Posted: 27 October 2013 at 7:51am
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i agree... can we get a couple vets to votes? or just 1 depending lol ;) |
Posted By: Sureal
Date Posted: 27 October 2013 at 7:57am
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The asphalt line was a far fetch.. Didn't come together nicely And then the assault part seems redundant because it was only Made to serve purpose to the asphalt part.... Weak sauce sir.. Nonetheless my vote goes to you simply because you had a more so Complex rhyme scheme as well as a flow that remained afloat while Cramming lines down his throat. Ha .. My vote goes to you. The other guy.. I honestly Stopped reading and then went back to it You could have had it if your verse was more Intricate and held strong punches as well As hard personals But .. |
Posted By: FuckButter
Date Posted: 27 October 2013 at 8:07am
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MCGT Concrete Concrete came with better jokes, like I'll bring value to this battle, Cash gets LIQUIDATED. Cash's best line was The irony of your name, cuz you soft as a bitch and you don't ever get laid! which was too little too late. They both brought style to the table, but MVGT Concrete for some good jokes that tipped the scales in his direction. ------------- 
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Posted By: Concrete
Date Posted: 28 October 2013 at 11:33pm
| We both requested some vets to give the decisive votes, so it's up to mods to decide if the last 2 votes should count, if they do count then congrats to Ca$h, great cla$h, dawg |
Posted By: wreckless
Date Posted: 29 October 2013 at 1:45am
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concrete ..tellin me to investigate this trash, to get some ok opener 5/10
ehh....ok 4/10
decent, liking the concept, the first line was awkward to say though "a bit" should of been left out 6/10
big step back down 4/10 swiftly break your jaw, it's time to face facts decent close 6/10 Cash You a blind man that's bout to get beat, on a paved road to defeat. decent opener 6/10
ehhh ok 4/10
ok 5/10 I'm like the lord of the dark side, you more like princess leah, ima get ya when I see ya, ok... the set up was fucked though 5/10 My flows as tight as a braid, my tongue as sharp as a blade, and you should be afraid, decent closer 6/10 Decent battle with some alright concepts. Decent punches and wordplay getting used. Flow seemed hit or miss for both on a bar by bar basis. Real talk both verses were damn close to each other. Concrete 25/50 Cash 26/50 Vote - Concrete |
Posted By: wreckless
Date Posted: 29 October 2013 at 1:46am
| Errr vote - Cash, haha typed wrong name. |
Posted By: hanGing
Date Posted: 29 October 2013 at 11:35pm
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Cash Win. Jackpot. ------------- |