some bars
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
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Printed Date: 19 April 2024 at 10:09am
Topic: some bars
Posted By: D.Von Doom
Subject: some bars
Date Posted: 24 November 2014 at 4:06pm
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Since I'm away from my equipment heres a quick drop Hear these bars from here to fars away To my peers I appear to mold worlds like clay Keep it 100 we run it like a old play My mind is in a different state, I can tell her bumpers from a different place No need to check the plates I gotta get her before the city sticker pull her over and spread it like a cobra I'm all ford it if its focus I perform in a storm full of locusts Touched by god in our first run in N I plan to take the world back Like the second coming No decepti-cons, u know da weapons drawn No detecting are's, n u flexing hard But u ain't ripped, ull be sitting on the bench if u press bump chest get checked If anyone pull the pump u dip Into your stamina n run like shit In other words U woke up like this Blowing smoke knowing the risk Don't worry about whether it can't or it can sir(cancer) that's just what u get Or got...past tense U Only sick cuz u got hives Without the e.s. like magic (johnson) Going in my bag pulling out madness |
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Posted By: daydizzle89
Date Posted: 24 November 2014 at 4:17pm
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this was pretty cool. I liked the flow on this. Also some of the Meta's were slick. That state line was cool. Good shit man, keep at it brothaman |
Posted By: D.Von Doom
Date Posted: 24 November 2014 at 4:22pm
| Thanks for the feed dizzle |
Posted By: Mission
Date Posted: 24 November 2014 at 4:30pm
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good metas, i liked the cancer bars. You had a strange flow, i think it's def meant for audio. I would like to hear u record this when u can ------------- 
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Posted By: D.Von Doom
Date Posted: 24 November 2014 at 4:39pm
| Preciate it mission and yea i meant to save it for recording |