From under the bridge, a blurred figure is stirred stumbling, bumbling and hurt, a slurred word is heard ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Liked the Internals in here. Smooth was nice. Came off a little fablish. Defo liked his knuckles drag and tattered clothes snag the faint echo bounces back, sounded like 'Fag' ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Lmfao, still keeping a flow here brothaman onlookers flee, from the foul creature beyond the tree laughing with glee as he begins to throw debris ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Like the usage of vocabulary and internals good shit
with moans and groans of homophobic overtones the thrown sticks and stones are breaking bones ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Not bad, i with you were to change the breaking bones to something else. Still nice survivors start to plea, please wretched beast spare me the response we see, a flow of filth worse than goatse ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Again, if you were to place a multi on the second line to match your first. This woulda been nice. Still flow is good with iron nerves, demanding the respect he thinks he deserves but all to return is vicious insults in full reserves ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ I liked this, your vocabulary shows and the flow is still decent shocked and appalled, the foul creature recoils from what he's called, galled and enthralled, the beast retreated and bawled ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ damn like the use of multiple rhymes heree. Scootz, i underestimated you to some degree lol.
the next day he returned, vengeful of the hatred he had learned but still he yearned, for the respect the he thought he had earned ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ehhh, not feeling the way this came off my tongue. Still not bad, still get that fable feeling which fits the content perfectly
as puberty was slow, more homo rants flow, his bigotry unashamedly on show blow after blow our wicked beasts bestow and still no remorse from this evil foe ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Trolls are that evil brah. Lol, i liked the vocabulary you have giving
why couldn't the villagers find, the beauty hidden inside his tortured mind still they declined, his affections un-resigned and his talent left unsigned ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DAMN, nice internels and the you havnt lost me on flow. Good stuff with confidence restored, the humours ignored and pitchforks secured the horde are assured the brutes no-longer welcome among the board ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Hey, i did my job here lol. Don't be deceived, the story you heard is an old one indeed repeated so often, its greeted like tumble weed The beast may be slayed and the memory decayed but once again a raid, his kind they invade The cycle goes on, year after year Cut off their head and two more appear ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ hahahahahha Overall Scootz, Much respect on a response. I give you lots of props. Your flow, vocabulary and the content were all pretty good brothaman. Like i said before, this is all for fun. You should write more often Scootz
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