Superficial Mad Linguistic Multi-Braggadocious
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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
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Printed Date: 19 April 2024 at 8:38am
Topic: Superficial Mad Linguistic Multi-Braggadocious
Posted By: Ridley Squat
Subject: Superficial Mad Linguistic Multi-Braggadocious
Date Posted: 28 February 2016 at 10:54pm
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Sup faggots! I've made some words rhyme with some other words. Fucking check it y'all! I've walked out free each vault I've been in Fallout 3 with just the spork I eat my pork n' beans from the school canteen and for a small agreed call out fee I'll walk and leave, not cause a scene I stormed the beach at Normandy in '43 ... then bought some brie for my daughter's tea ... yeah I'm that sort of G! ... ... I'm sorta nastee! ... I stormed the Basti(lle) with a Cornish Pasty threw prawns & scampi at the Tour-de-France team when they cornered past me like Gordon Ramsey - how I'm always angry make Foreman's dad seem - like Orphan Annie fuck the Law's of Harry the whole Morgan family I'll leave your organs danglin' and make you call a taxi ... ... and still the law can't catch me ... cos I'm faster than lightning and darker when rhyming than half of the clients of Arkham Asylum got the heart of Poseidon out sharking for sirens with the last of the Titans on the barbs of my trident I'm remarkably violent but in class I be silent just the mask I'm behind tryna pass this assignment shouts to Art and Orion -------------   |
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Posted By: TittySucker
Date Posted: 28 February 2016 at 11:45pm
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i like the bit about gordon ramsey and how you be packing sporks sporks are awesome
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Posted By: Venomonology
Date Posted: 29 February 2016 at 3:57pm
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not a bad little exercise, I much preferred the flow, feel and content of the 2nd part compared to the 1st since you started off just rhyming for the sake of rhyming, jumping from Fallout 3 to pork and beans to being involved in WW2, just felt messy.. the 2nd part had a more solidified feel to it though, particularly enjoyed: I'm faster than lightning and darker when rhyming than half of the clients of Arkham Asylum thought that flowed incredibly well and was real creative too keep it up man and next drop you I'd love to see you hold down a central topic / subject throughout the piece
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Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 29 February 2016 at 7:01pm
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This was cool for non sense rhyming. I use to do this type of shit all the time. Id love to see some writing of yours that you too time to write. I really enjoyed the second part of this more. I really enjoyed the barbs of my trident. That was dope. Overall it was a cool little flow type piece -------------  |
Posted By: Sammy
Date Posted: 02 March 2016 at 8:26pm
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lmao...fuckin, Ridley. aite aite we know u can rhyme, son lol! i've always love intricate rhyme scheme and this was fun as fuck to read. the nonsense just adds to the apathetic "cool" attitude of the verse lol. Good shit, yo. Hope u explore a more focused topic cause i can see u droppin some dope OM honestly -------------  |
Posted By: Patient Zero
Date Posted: 26 April 2016 at 6:58pm
| Snap this was dope bro, for what it was. I personally didn't dig the rhyme chop halfway thru shoulda just kept it a mass multie... but thems just different apples. I really liked some of the crazy ways you went with it tho...I was digging that flow, you should try some paragraph rhyming and getting a little bit heavier on the schemes, you could drop some mad shit brah. |
Posted By: Raskit
Date Posted: 27 April 2016 at 7:59am
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"I stormed the beach at Normandy in '43" Normandy invasion was in 44 bruv. You can't change history just to fit your flow. Not than I'm suggesting you did, lol..... |
Posted By: Ridley Squat
Date Posted: 27 April 2016 at 9:15am
Yes, D-day as it played out in 'your' reality was 6th June 1944, but they started planning it in 1943, so in the reality I am suggesting here is, fuck a plan, I went off and did it all on my own... so 1943 makes more sense. Hope that helps.
The rest is true though Thanks for the feed y'all ------------- |
Raskit wrote:Posted By: Storm $hadow
Date Posted: 27 April 2016 at 2:54pm
| Not much time to comment but i could twist the effect of that '1944' though. In reality, it was done in '1944', right?(i don't know about it though) but if you did it in '1943', it could also mean you were ahead or you murdered time there. |
Posted By: Schematic
Date Posted: 24 January 2018 at 5:04pm
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Damn...You Are Good ------------- http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/rapper-t-vs-schematic-horrorcore-02_topic45919.html |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 26 February 2018 at 6:14pm
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Why I get no shouts? Is it because my name rhymes with scuba and pooper scooper? ------------- 
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Posted By: Ridley Squat
Date Posted: 17 March 2018 at 8:50pm
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I got ya bro I'm sicker than a thousand tumours I'm "Hidden talent ... Crouching Puma" thinking I could Outmanoeuvre, my shoalin tutor, and the towns Yakuza ... that's why I'm not allowed Sambuka & if you doubt the rumours, then I've grounds to sue ya cos I may not be smart, but I shout the truth I'm like Martin X or Malcolm Luther I may not be a vet, but I know how to neuter and I'll be taking off more heads than the House Of Tudor .... ... .. . SHOUTS TO CUBA ------------- |