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[KOTOM] March Of The Mods

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Topic: [KOTOM] March Of The Mods
Posted By: Ridley Squat
Subject: [KOTOM] March Of The Mods
Date Posted: 01 July 2016 at 3:35am

 
 

Fuck u panguin-looking muthafuckas Smegma n Law
Pair of no-showing faggots seen like never before
And if u miss another battle we're expecting u for ...
You're gonna end up getting bottled like Feathers McGraw
How u even come back and get let in the door
When Shankley got de-modded for neglecting that chore
And Cuba set it in law, which I respected him for ...
But what's the point setting precedents, if ya president's flawed
And Neek's been rapping since '74
Putting the Old into Old Skool ... and the geri-in-atric
Big in the 80's ... and forever been 'phat' since
Joined in LA's Golden Era ... allegedly classic
Way back,  when Cuba was an American black kid
Ice C / The Damager / Legend / Assassin
His "Every Move Kills" in whichever's his discipline ...
with no emphasis on punches, and unlimited flipping in.
Law puts bananas in *cigs* & they know it's not dope
But they all just humour him and go along with the joke
And that damned dancing banana, a witty skit at first
But after a while just seemed a little bit perverse
Made us quit digging the verse and start missing bits of words
That's why he's called The Law ... of diminishing returns
But u a Tough Mudder, that's gruelling shit ...
I heard Law'yer getting mudded ... u Louis Litt
And when u threw a fit, and said that u would quit ...
For fuck's sake why couldn't u go through with it
And Art's started thinking he's supermod
Just cos he's channelling the 'tude of Scott
Not even caring if it's rude or not
Giving us shit if we vote once voting's due to stop ...
Well maybe you should do your job
And those threads would already be reviewed and locked

Fuck it that'll do, that's a proper 32
So fuck all you penguins and Mr Popper32



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Posted By: Neek
Date Posted: 01 July 2016 at 5:08am
jesus fucking christ.

this shit is so raw.

punchlines, flow, energy..

the momentum just built like I dont even know what.

I really dug this. well done sir. bravo.

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#Bananas

Posted By: Concrete
Date Posted: 01 July 2016 at 9:02am
The Riddler strikes again, this was a lethal blend of punches and straight clowning. Pretty much all of it was on point, I think this the OM King for June no doubt. 

Putting the Old into Old Skool ... and the geri-in-atric
Big in the 80's ... and forever been 'phat' since

Made us quit digging the verse and start missing bits of words
That's why he's called The Law ... of diminishing returns

And when u threw a fit, and said that u would quit ...
For fuck's sake why couldn't u go through with it

Posted By: Endeavor
Date Posted: 01 July 2016 at 9:57am
Man... This month I'm gonna go all out on the KOTOM. Ridley, you straight shitted on my verse. That's all. I hate you.

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#Bananas

Posted By: Rutter knows best
Date Posted: 01 July 2016 at 1:32pm
I liked this flow kept it rollin, nice multis too. This had some comedy factor aswell the clowning was good. first section was cool, went at 'em. The eek cube crossover i was diggin, i liked

Joined in LA's Golden Era ... allegedly classic
Way back,  when Cuba was an American black kid
Ice C / The Damager / Legend / Assassin

you carried on in the next couplet nice too, the end section wasn't as good as the first 2/3 here, but was still decent. Overall this was a cool read, flow, multi's, punches and comedy were all done really well here, good shit dude.


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#bananas

Posted By: iLL ScriptureZ
Date Posted: 01 July 2016 at 2:24pm
This was dope... It felt effortless in the sense of how everything went so fluid together. The beginning was a my favorite. It was packed with nice schemes and punches that I really enjoyed. Good stuff man

Posted By: Architect
Date Posted: 02 July 2016 at 8:54pm
I am not sure what went down to inspire this, but this was awesome! The flow was smooooth and continuous. A lot of this just rolled right off the tongue as I was reading it. As far as for criticism, I cannot find anything because I am not even sure I can create something as dope. I was not the biggest fan of the font. That is my only complaint. Overall, the content was dope.

Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 03 July 2016 at 8:48pm
I'm Cuba and I endorse this candidate

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Posted By: Ridley Squat
Date Posted: 17 July 2016 at 1:37pm
I'm so late on this I'm probably breaking rules for necroposting, but I didn't wanna miss the chance to say cheers all for the reading and feeding.

Funny thing is, I had such big plans for this - a full on unlimited piece, with separate sections separated by Morgan Freeman/March Of The Penguins style quote pieces. And a different penguin picture for each.
But in the end it was as much as I could do to reach a reasonable line count in time for the deadline.

This is why it's a bit more flat towards the end, which I was a little disappointed with, but pleased how it turned out on the whole.

Cheers all.


PS. I will not use that font again.

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Posted By: BIG GAME
Date Posted: 17 July 2016 at 2:29pm
Damn! This makes me proud to be a part of your crew.
The whole verse is quotable.
Fire.

Posted By: Ridley Squat
Date Posted: 17 July 2016 at 4:30pm
Haha, cheers bro.

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Posted By: Xces
Date Posted: 18 July 2016 at 2:45am
So I was just stopping by to read some shit and maybe duck out, but this made me come out the darkness to say.

Fuck yea bro. Killed that shit. -


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