Battle Royale #3
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
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Printed Date: 24 April 2024 at 1:00am
Topic: Battle Royale #3
Posted By: Cuba
Subject: Battle Royale #3
Date Posted: 02 January 2017 at 7:43pm
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BATTLE ROYALE #3 CONTESTANTS (this is the running order) #1 Spume Corrupt #2 S Dubb #3 Kiki Spirez #4 Slip #5 Rutter Knows Best #6 Trizzy Tre #7 Beans #8 Law Reserve list If you want to be added to reserve list, please see thread in News & Announcements RULES
ROUND 1 Spume Corrupt drops by MIDNIGHT 4th January S Dubb drops 48hrs later Voting closes 48hrs after S Dubb drops (or if there is a 3 vote KO / best of 7 applies) These are UK times. My decision is final. ------------- 
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Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 06 January 2017 at 12:01am
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This stupid fuck thinking he can try beat me, he's joking surely! Can't even show me a fucking Win when he's voting for me I'll kick you to smithereens you cunt, cos u can't manage my pen Wen U drop here, people gone think you collabing with Damage again S teaming up with Slip tryna get a champ, but not coming nice with it Is only two S's mixed with some messed up "hits"...that twice the "S-hits" Hit the elevation centre you "fool" cos right now you looking fucked dude LA says yo shit is not on the money! Ironically I'm calling Dub-loon Stupid...... -------------  |
Posted By: S Dubb
Date Posted: 08 January 2017 at 7:48pm
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You wanted the battle royale, but miss the deadline even after Checking In..., Your lines are more stretched then bellies of Pregnant Chicks... You only made the title match, because it got closed before the Votes were Finished... Like a guy that lost all his family, you can see in his face his Hopes Diminished... I'll deliver the "L!" Take you back to the first two weeks in the 1-2 Punch League... I'm smoking this herb! No roll up needed, Dutch Free... Battling me, I'll leave you running back in a "Full Circle"... I'm choking this joke, squeezing your neck until I turn You Purple... ------------- Topical Twist League= 1-0 1-2 Punch League= 0-3 Regular Text= 0-1 Alias= 0-1 Topical= 1-0 Horrorcore= 1-0 Overall= 3-5 |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 08 January 2017 at 8:42pm
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Voting window is open. In future rounds if you're over 48hrs you get an N. -------------
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Posted By: Rutter knows best
Date Posted: 09 January 2017 at 12:21am
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This stupid fuck thinking he can try beat me, he's joking surely! Can't even show me a fucking Win when he's voting for me I fuck with the reference, decent angle. I would of put the even after win. I'll kick you to smithereens you cunt, cos u can't manage my pen Wen U drop here, people gone think you collabing with Damage again okay reference- felt it coulda been executed concept harsher though S teaming up with Slip tryna get a champ, but not coming nice with it Is only two S's mixed with some messed up "hits"...that twice the "S-hits" Didn't like this Hit the elevation centre you "fool" cos right now you looking fucked dude LA says yo shit is not on the money! Ironically I'm calling Dub-loon Had to google doubloon. it ties in okay and the name plays there. could've been tightened up. Stupid...... Your the champ. I seen better and you know you can do better. First two lines took this for you. It did the job and pretty convincingly. Could of been tweaked a little and would've added a lot still. vs Post Status: -- Unmarked -- You wanted the battle royale, but miss the deadline even after Checking In..., Your lines are more stretched then bellies of Pregnant Chicks... Tying in a set up to punch would of helped here. The fact yur lines are stretched makes this loose weight here You only made the title match, because it got closed before the Votes were Finished... Like a guy that lost all his family, you can see in his face his Hopes Diminished... okay personal in the set but not sure if true. Punch wasn't there though I'll deliver the "L!" Take you back to the first two weeks in the 1-2 Punch League... I'm smoking this herb! No roll up needed, Dutch Free... nice personal in the set up but you followed it with the most played concept done through the ages Battling me, I'll leave you running back in a "Full Circle"... I'm choking this joke, squeezing your neck until I turn You Purple... Potential in the set up, but just followed wih descriptive text. Overall there was a pattern to your verse. You fall into the topical hole of doing a lot of describing. You aren't tying in your 1st and 2nd lines. On a personal taste level your punch has more room to work with and carry's a punchier feel when it's longer than your set up. You gotta forget the usual sensibilities of writing a bit and work on the punch. Everything come second to the punchline. Vote Spume ------------- #bananas 
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Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 09 January 2017 at 7:00pm
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This stupid fuck thinking he can try beat me, he's joking surely! Can't even show me a fucking Win when he's voting for me I'll kick you to smithereens you cunt, cos u can't manage my pen Wen U drop here, people gone think you collabing with Damage again (I liked the way you opened here,nothing to heavy I thought,but it still had merit via the personal attached,so yeah decent first bar,however the 2nd bar was much better,a nice bit of wordplay/personal which just added extra weight,plus you used the OM he did in a collab with Damage well overall,good punch..) S teaming up with Slip tryna get a champ, but not coming nice with it Is only two S's mixed with some messed up "hits"...that twice the "S-hits" Hit the elevation centre you "fool" cos right now you looking fucked dude LA says yo shit is not on the money! Ironically I'm calling Dub-loon (yep another good personal here but the punch itself read flat really,the wordplay was good again I thought,it just seemed to lack any real power really still it all counts still, however you did mess the wordplay up some though,by typing the 2 Ss and then "Hits" lessened the overall blow,I would of just typed "hit" so the 2 Ss would of fitted better, 1 s at the start and 1 at the end,but I do get the angle you was a typing there,I've no quirms with the play on closing though that was good,a nice punch to end with,the set up seemed to look redundant at first,but it does tie in on the whole,and to cap it all,the flow was good too..) You wanted the battle royale, but miss the deadline even after Checking In..., Your lines are more stretched then bellies of Pregnant Chicks... You only made the title match, because it got closed before the Votes were Finished... Like a guy that lost all his family, you can see in his face his Hopes Diminished... (liked the simile in the first bar there it was quite creative really,stretched/bellies and pregnant chicks,as personals go this was aimed well also,nothing really to heavy as punches go,but still a punch all the same,but the 2nd bar was worded well and again served as a good personal,and the punch for me seemed more of a jab also,it was no swing or blow..) I'll deliver the "L!" Take you back to the first two weeks in the 1-2 Punch League... I'm smoking this herb! No roll up needed, Dutch Free... Battling me, I'll leave you running back in a "Full Circle"... I'm choking this joke, squeezing your neck until I turn You Purple... (OK I get the concept and theme here about cannabis and "L's",but this didn't work for me as he was up there in the contenders spot when the league was winding to a close, so it makes he's earlier losses seem irrelevant,the 2nd bar also had like Spume some nice aggression entow,and the running back in circles was good,the next line had some decent multi's too,didn't quite match up or marry with the first line though,but still it had merit,good verse..) Overall pluses and minuses for both here,and to be fair quite close aswell,I had to read them both twice before I made this choice,and for me Spume gets this just,here's why,I thought he's personals were better aimed and more of them also,S Dub you held your own here,but this is all called see that separated you both,unlucky dude.. Vote...Spume.peace. ------------- "You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance". |
Posted By: Beans
Date Posted: 10 January 2017 at 6:59pm
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This stupid fuck thinking he can try beat me, he's joking surely! Can't even show me a fucking Win when he's voting for me This was decent..needs to be worded better i think. so this was light I'll kick you to smithereens you cunt, cos u can't manage my pen Wen U drop here, people gone think you collabing with Damage again this was nice. I too just used a damage concept but not as a personal directed at him. S teaming up with Slip tryna get a champ, but not coming nice with it Is only two S's mixed with some messed up "hits"...that twice the "S-hits" nah...not a fan of these bars. stretch for me Hit the elevation centre you "fool" cos right now you looking fucked dude LA says yo shit is not on the money! Ironically I'm calling Dub-loon Stupid...... this was ok. nothing wowing tbh vs You wanted the battle royale, but miss the deadline even after Checking In..., Your lines are more stretched then bellies of Pregnant Chicks... This is one of the most played concepts ever bro... not to mention so many rappers have said this shit before. Miss You only made the title match, because it got closed before the Votes were Finished... Like a guy that lost all his family, you can see in his face his Hopes Diminished... Basic punch here. nothing really hitting here I'll deliver the "L!" Take you back to the first two weeks in the 1-2 Punch League... I'm smoking this herb! No roll up needed, Dutch Free... Another played concept bro...Think about how many years ppl been doing this. basic punches like that have been done to death Battling me, I'll leave you running back in a "Full Circle"... I'm choking this joke, squeezing your neck until I turn You Purple... Nothing hitting here. too statementish. nothing clever that makes me think about shit Overall - One sided battle but i've seen better from spume. Dubs you gotta come up with more clever shit bro. Fresher concepts. like use current events and try to flip them in to a angle with some humour or aggressive shit bro. But i got spume taking this easy for better punches,personals everything ------------- 1-2 Season 1 Final Champ |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 10 January 2017 at 7:12pm
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3-0 KO...onto the next one. Spume vs Kiki. Kiki drops first. Within 48hrs of this post. Spume has 48hrs to respond. 48hr voting window opens from when Spume drops. Voting closes on 48hrs or if KO or best of 7 rule is activated first. -------------
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Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 12 January 2017 at 6:14pm
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Already yawning at the 'title jokes' - You want the rhythm I've got, No riddle in the play off mag - You went quiet cos you didn't want Squat, This is my spot.. And I BET, after the Axy match, this guy wept, A spit slayer? You were a bit player to a worn crew that I left, Writes death, then cries when no one gets his dreary play, Hear me say.. Imma salute your passing, and drop a bar a year today, Steer away from the same shit, theres tonnes of Ki plays knockin' about, I'll not make spume jokes, Cos those make him froth at the mouth.. ------------- http://media.photobucket.com/user/Seinamies/media/Big-Dilla-Cover-web.jpg.html" rel="nofollow"> 
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Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 14 January 2017 at 6:18pm
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You just fucking choked on 8 regurgitated lines! Because ya stunted game is strangeled That's one concept worked 4 times! Please stay in the box you Cunt, with that same angle Already a lame handled, so Kiki go fuck your "rhythm" and get with the sound of my beef It's saying your Royale Credentials ain't been living, since I punched the crown out of reach This the steady grounding of Keeks, Quick stating even my dick would prolly flatten him Shit hot enough to see K Stew,-and still come back for another fucking! Like I'm Robert Pattison This is the fucking clobber happening so hard, knocking U out! And you're bars you stupid bastard They are why you "failed" here an it'll take a whole year just 4 U 2 get back an salute me "passing" ------------- |
Posted By: S Dubb
Date Posted: 15 January 2017 at 5:09am
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Spume: You just fucking choked on 8 regurgitated lines! Because ya stunted game is strangeled That's one concept worked 4 times! Please stay in the box you Cunt, with that same angle decent opener, light jab, good multi Already a lame handled, so Kiki go fuck your "rhythm" and get with the sound of my beef It's saying your Royale Credentials ain't been living, since I punched the crown out of reach not feeling this one, not much of a punch more of a light jab This the steady grounding of Keeks, Quick stating even my dick would prolly flatten him Shit hot enough to see K Stew,-and still come back for another fucking! Like I'm Robert Pattison decent punch, good metaphore This is the fucking clobber happening so hard, knocking U out! And you're bars you stupid bastard They are why you "failed" here an it'll take a whole year just 4 U 2 get back an salute me "passing" bad closer, flow was off and wasn't feeling the set up or delivery on this one Overall it seems to me that you rushed this verse.... I wasn't feeling it at all, one of the worst I've seen from you..... Your punches weren't landing hard, you didn't use any personals, and even your flow was off in the end...... Poor showing from you here homie...... Kiki: Already yawning at the 'title jokes' - You want the rhythm I've got, No riddle in the play off mag - You went quiet cos you didn't want Squat, Good opener..... I like the personal, it landed a nice punch.. This is my spot.. And I BET, after the Axy match, this guy wept, A spit slayer? You were a bit player to a worn crew that I left, Decent personal, more of a jab then a punch though Writes death, then cries when no one gets his dreary play, Hear me say.. Imma salute your passing, and drop a bar a year today, I like the humor of this, good punch Steer away from the same shit, theres tonnes of Ki plays knockin' about, I'll not make spume jokes, Cos those make him froth at the mouth.. Eh, not really feeling this closer, the whole spume froth lines are played Overall this was a good verse though..... You first bar was what sealed this battle for you, that was a hard hitting personal...... You came with a lot of personals and landed more punches..... Good verse.... Opener- Kiki Closer- Tie Punches- Kiki Personals- Kiki Flow- Kiki Wordplay- Spume Creativity- Tie Enjoyment- Kiki Vote- Kiki Reason- I feel he wanted this battle more..... I feel like Spume didn't put no effort into this battle and dropped light..... Kiki came with some good personals that landed some solid blows..... So this was an easy choice for me..... good battle guys..... ------------- Topical Twist League= 1-0 1-2 Punch League= 0-3 Regular Text= 0-1 Alias= 0-1 Topical= 1-0 Horrorcore= 1-0 Overall= 3-5 |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 19 January 2017 at 10:56am
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More votes please. I want a minimum of 3 to progress onto the next one. -------------
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Posted By: Trizzy Tre
Date Posted: 19 January 2017 at 4:47pm
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Kiki Already yawning at the 'title jokes' - You want the rhythm I've got, No riddle in the play off mag - You went quiet cos you didn't want Squat, ....Nice opener and personal which you used well. 3/5 This is my spot.. And I BET, after the Axy match, this guy wept, A spit slayer? You were a bit player to a worn crew that I left, ....Nice flow on this, set up was cool decent punch. 2.5/5 Writes death, then cries when no one gets his dreary play, Hear me say.. Imma salute your passing, and drop a bar a year today ....This was cool. Again nice flow which pushed the punchline. 3/5 Steer away from the same shit, theres tonnes of Ki plays knockin' about, I'll not make spume jokes, Cos those make him froth at the mouth.. .... I see you went to use some defense on the closer. lol not really much impact. 2/5 Total: 10.5 Spume: You just fucking choked on 8 regurgitated lines! Because ya stunted game is strangeled That's one concept worked 4 times! Please stay in the box you Cunt, with that same angle ....Ok'ish opener. No real tough angle on this one. 2/5 Already a lame handled, so Kiki go fuck your "rhythm" and get with the sound of my beef It's saying your Royale Credentials ain't been living, since I punched the crown out of reach ....This was just decent, nothing to hard hitting. 2.5/5 This the steady grounding of Keeks, Quick stating even my dick would prolly flatten him Shit hot enough to see K Stew,-and still come back for another fucking! Like I'm Robert Pattison ....Lol this was funny, decent play, so far the best line you've landed. 3/5 This is the fucking clobber happening so hard, knocking U out! And you're bars you stupid bastard They are why you "failed" here an it'll take a whole year just 4 U 2 get back an salute me "passing" ......Meh...Not really feeling this one bro. Thought it missed completely. 1.5/5 Total: 9 Overall: Keeks did his thing. The angles were worded much better then Spume and used the angles much more effectively. Spume my dude, this wasn't anywhere near your writing ability. Felt more of a quick key then anything. Have to go with Kiki on this one as bad for bar he was sharper. MVGT - Kiki -------------  |
Posted By: Rutter knows best
Date Posted: 19 January 2017 at 11:39pm
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Already yawning at the 'title jokes' - You want the rhythm I've got, No riddle in the play off mag - You went quiet cos you didn't want Squat, Decent opener, no complaints. This is my spot.. And I BET, after the Axy match, this guy wept, A spit slayer? You were a bit player to a worn crew that I left, didn't connect the personal in the set up to the punch effectively, second line okay jab Writes death, then cries when no one gets his dreary play, Hear me say.. Imma salute your passing, and drop a bar a year today, i see the angle your playing off could've been better but a current angle still Steer away from the same shit, theres tonnes of Ki plays knockin' about, I'll not make spume jokes, Cos those make him froth at the mouth.. i thought it was an okay play nice turn of phrase i haven't seen before vs You just fucking choked on 8 regurgitated lines! Because ya stunted game is strangeled That's one concept worked 4 times! Please stay in the box you Cunt, with that same angle i thought the angle was okay but it wasn't presented well. Could of same with much less Already a lame handled, so Kiki go fuck your "rhythm" and get with the sound of my beef It's saying your Royale Credentials ain't been living, since I punched the crown out of reach i thought this was a decent personal play, i would've prefered crowns out your teeth personally This the steady grounding of Keeks, Quick stating even my dick would prolly flatten him Shit hot enough to see K Stew,-and still come back for another fucking! Like I'm Robert Pattison rhyme felt a little off when i read it but it's an kay play i just feel once again u could of said it with less This is the fucking clobber happening so hard, knocking U out! And you're bars you stupid bastard They are why you "failed" here an it'll take a whole year just 4 U 2 get back an salute me "passing this was an okay attempt at a flip just wish once again you refined it more. Tbh i though both had a similar level of play/personals going on. Not much difference between on the creativity i thought they both had a nice mix. No haymakers but no real misses. At the end of the day though fell like kiki presented his better. Spume i feel your execution overall was a bit sloppy, rushed while kiki you kept it all fairly tight. So yeh vote kiki.
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Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 20 January 2017 at 9:35am
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Thanks guys, appreciate that. 3-0 KO...onto the next one. Slip vs Kiki. Slip drops first. Within 48hrs of this post. Kiki has 48hrs to respond. 48hr voting window opens from when Kiki drops (min 3 votes required). Voting closes on 48hrs or if KO or best of 7 rule is activated first -------------
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Posted By: Slip
Date Posted: 22 January 2017 at 2:57am
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What kind of grown ass man gonna sit there calling himself kiki I guess a cocknocking donut punching faggot thinks it's easy The truth is sinking in, Keeks defenceless against the laughter This hypocrites an actor ,a gay white supremacist claiming to be a rapper A fucking klew klucks klan fan with all those Kays he kicks around Kiki's kratos kind sounds like a racist joke put together by a clown this blokes lifes hoax I'm feeling bad for Alice and Endeavor Having to follow someone like kiki when they can really do better ------------- See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego inner demon violent beast so warn the mother fucking people |
Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 23 January 2017 at 7:54pm
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Your name means 'failure', so just quit with the slick shit, Insult to injury, you're the only time they don't 'feel' a 'Slip disk', You cling to your partner like you were married to him! Fact is, you've only had 5 stars when you were carried by Crim, Like people speak to YOU when they need a word with the bosses, Leader? You're responsibile for a third of their losses, He stands for some causes, but i'll make a cunt sit, Telling Spume who to defend against, when he's never won SHIT.. ------------- http://media.photobucket.com/user/Seinamies/media/Big-Dilla-Cover-web.jpg.html" rel="nofollow">
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Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 23 January 2017 at 9:28pm
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OK guys lets do this.. Slip,I liked the personal clowning approach you came with here,in fact the whole verse was personals really,you had some nice concepts here too,the KKK play was a good shot also,and the fact you added humour brought another level to this overall,from gay supremacist to him being an actor,you certainly made the most of your ammo, even down to a cheeky shot at his crew,the angles you came with were good,some not to orignal though but you made the most of what you had,I also like the fact you didn't try to make this a complex piece,a plain and simple drop with good direction/ aimed contents coupled with a good flow/vibe,your punches were present also via the personals/humour,shit there was even a little wordplay to be had here also,so props on the whole for delivering a piece that stayed constant,good work.. KiKi straight out the gate you came with an approach that was not only personal,but direct with punches also,your drop had some nice directed aggressive come backs entow,your wordplay did its job well by adding some depth here too,this piece seemed to have a cold vibe running alongside it that made it stand up and out,and like Slip you also had some lol moments also,the bar about Spume and the belts/and the 3rd of the losses lines was real creative,not only in the obvious battle record,but crew members too,your flow/tempo and vibe were good and seem to add weight overall,and the angles you came with were ripe I thought,you seemed to be up for this battle aswell which does nothing but add to the concepts..good work.. Overall a good battle here,I feel Slip did well with his offering and the angle in which he came with,both had a good flow popping too,but for me there is a winner here and that was Kiki,here's why,he had all the same sort of elements that Slip had,but then some,not only did his punches land harder,but his aggression and partly factual content took it for me,Slips sorry to be voting against you here,but I know you'll appreciate my honesty.. Vote...KiKi..peace. ------------- "You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance". |
Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 23 January 2017 at 9:48pm
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Gonna break these short verses down bar for bar as I see em Slippy 1..So opening up bro and first thing I noticed is the lack of tie in between line 1and2....That should be fundamental at a certain level? "Cock knocking dagnat" WTF Is that mean End rhymes was weak! This was not a great start man... 2.. Second bar...Wow, just wow... Slippy my bro, it is simply not good enough to fabricate on some major bs I mean I know for a 100%Fact that Kiki is not a white supremacist!!!!! See how this bar falls flat on its ass? 3..See above why this one could never work! I get the angle with the KKK Thing, but you have done nothing to make it work, no clever play or tie in 4.. Attempt s at good end rhymes thru out and some nice internal s made this read bearable, but the punches was AWOL, this closer had Nathan's my bro Think about it ... Alice and Endy don't have one quarter the experience with LA As Kiki does, plus he's like top tier and top ten of all time or some shit.. That shit had no mileage.... Mate, I kept it real with you! I was a lil dissatisfied with this one! Feel like you took a step back Let's hope Kikadontis dropping the ball eh Can't see it though Back soon ------------- |
Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 23 January 2017 at 11:32pm
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Kiki S I will keep it real with you to bruv 1.. Opener, it's classic Kiki here, Or at least one of your downsides! All the work in the second line was obvious..So the result is a forced overall feel...Think about it! If line one wasn't forced than why don't it makes sense?.... Slip does not mean failure! Punchline was dope as fuck though, really get it 2.. This bar!!! Perfect example of the first bars problem....Here you tie them in perfect Funny.... Insulting.... That's a recipe 3.. This is Kik rolling with the punches Factual, Insulting, Funny 4...What can I say? I mean you have compared him with an ameaboa to a champ! When you yourself are only second to him!..... Lol I jest you fam Overall 60%dope Against 7%dope VOTE,... Kuki for the more experience drop start to finish ------------- |
Posted By: Beans
Date Posted: 25 January 2017 at 1:15am
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Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 25 January 2017 at 7:48am
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3-0 KO...onto the next one. RKB vs Kiki. RKB drops first. Within 48hrs of this post. Kiki has 48hrs to respond. 48hr voting window opens from when Kiki drops (min 3 votes required). Voting closes on 48hrs or if KO or best of 7 rule is activated first -------------
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Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 28 January 2017 at 6:11pm
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RKB? Will move on if not tonight... -------------
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Posted By: Rutter knows best
Date Posted: 29 January 2017 at 2:03am
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Ahem... The champ put you to sleep, wishing you never entered this hobby To my memory foam plays made you lose n boy we all remember that body Set ups just sloppy, pic match you got bullied killed n cooked Ki We watched u fall flat pictured in all caps like a rookie with a multi I mean fuck me, being in Kratos no wonder you tryina act The Binder of Titans? Getting 4 guys for Crewsades wasn't a giant ask Just silence..that speaks volumes n he still thinkin he a soldier Crews mute n he just stood there while his kinship fucked him over (Mutiny) expo's Beat by Spume in the champ match I beat him in pic match, he wore a cap in both pics "the binder of titans" is their slogan He's the leader n couldn't get enough people for Crewsades
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Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 30 January 2017 at 11:00pm
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Created 1-2. Started verse with 'ahem'. Beans knocked him out of 1-2, and is in his crew. Did mags with lots of jifs. Remember I beat you last, let's throw that match inside of the mixture, How can you NEVER see a final, when you fucking decide all the fixtures?! I was spotted at 3 of them, so you can go and 'ahem' a lot, Cos that aint a cough - it's the choke every time that you get a shot, You diss my crew too? Do you think i'm alone in this mission? At least I lead - You follow, and Beans owned you in your own competition, 1-2's got you thinking you're 'in the frame', so let this Vet assist ya', This time you won't get jifs to whine how voters didn't 'get the picture'.. ------------- http://media.photobucket.com/user/Seinamies/media/Big-Dilla-Cover-web.jpg.html" rel="nofollow">
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Posted By: S Dubb
Date Posted: 05 February 2017 at 10:33am
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RKB: The champ put you to sleep, wishing you never entered this hobby To my memory foam plays made you lose n boy we all remember that body Decent opener, okay personal, light jab Set ups just sloppy, pic match you got bullied killed n cooked Ki We watched u fall flat pictured in all caps like a rookie with a multi Okay, nice little punch, another decent personal I mean fuck me, being in Kratos no wonder you tryina act The Binder of Titans? Getting 4 guys for Crewsades wasn't a giant ask Decent personal but poor wording in this bar, the wording hurt the affectiveness of the punch Just silence..that speaks volumes n he still thinkin he a soldier Crews mute n he just stood there while his kinship fucked him over (Mutiny) Nice wordplay resulting in a solid punch, your best bar Overall this was a good showing from you..... This was one of your better battle verses, good work on this one..... You came with personals, and you used them to land some decent punches..... The wordplay was dope and that was an affective punch...... This was one of the best verses I've seen from you.... Good drop, and solid punches..... Kiki: Remember I beat you last, let's throw that match inside of the mixture, How can you NEVER see a final, when you fucking decide all the fixtures?! Okay personal, but a played concept, in my last battle against Rut I used something similar about him running the league/tourney and not making it no where. I was spotted at 3 of them, so you can go and 'ahem' a lot, Cos that aint a cough - it's the choke every time that you get a shot, Decent punch, also a decent personal You diss my crew too? Do you think i'm alone in this mission? At least I lead - You follow, and Beans owned you in your own competition, This was the best bar, solid punch, and a good personal 1-2's got you thinking you're 'in the frame', so let this Vet assist ya', This time you won't get jifs to whine how voters didn't 'get the picture'.. eh, not feeling this closer, poor choice in wording and the flow was shakey... Not feeling this bar Overall this was a pretty decent verse...... Your opener was a played bar though, the fact he runs the 1-2 so many people have used against him, them bars aren't really affective no more..... Now the bar about Beans eliminating him was hard, the best bar of the battle, from both of you actually in my opinion..... The last bar, the wording was poor and the flow was off, so I wasn't feeling it either..... This isn't one of your best verses, but it was an okay drop overall.... Punches- RKB Personals- Kiki Wordplay- RKB Flow- RKB Creativity- Kiki Enjoyment- RKB Vote- Rutter Knows Best The reason I'm voting for RKB is because his verse was more consistent...... Every bar had atleast a light jab within it..... Plus his Mutiny line was very affective..... The fact that he landed more punches is what got him the win...... Kiki didn't come as hard as usual, he only produced one actual solid punchline..... The rest of Kiki's bars were either played concepts or he just worded it too poorly...... I feel had he came more consistent it could have went the other way..... Due to RKB being more consistent landing some kind of a punch in every bar he gets my vote...... good battle though both of you....... ------------- Topical Twist League= 1-0 1-2 Punch League= 0-3 Regular Text= 0-1 Alias= 0-1 Topical= 1-0 Horrorcore= 1-0 Overall= 3-5 |
Posted By: Trizzy Tre
Date Posted: 10 February 2017 at 2:37am
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Ok, here we go.... Rut: The champ put you to sleep, wishing you never entered this hobby To my memory foam plays made you lose n boy we all remember that body ...... Cool play, nice angle and set up. Solid opener - 3.5/5 Set ups just sloppy, pic match you got bullied killed n cooked Ki We watched u fall flat pictured in all caps like a rookie with a multi ...... Ok, 2.5/5 I mean fuck me, being in Kratos no wonder you tryina act The Binder of Titans? Getting 4 guys for Crewsades wasn't a giant ask ...... Decent personal and punch - 3/5 Just silence..that speaks volumes n he still thinkin he a soldier Crews mute n he just stood there while his kinship fucked him over (Mutiny) ..... Nice closer, good wording and set up to punch - 3/5 Overall - 12 Ki: Remember I beat you last, let's throw that match inside of the mixture, How can you NEVER see a final, when you fucking decide all the fixtures?! ...... Ok opener, think it could have been worded better to inflict more damage. 2/5 I was spotted at 3 of them, so you can go and 'ahem' a lot, Cos that aint a cough - it's the choke every time that you get a shot, ...... Decent, but nothing overly hard hitting - 2.5/5 You diss my crew too? Do you think i'm alone in this mission? At least I lead - You follow, and Beans owned you in your own competition, ........ Ok, but no real angle on this punch, more of a statement - 2/5 1-2's got you thinking you're 'in the frame', so let this Vet assist ya', This time you won't get jifs to whine how voters didn't 'get the picture'.. ...... This was solid. Strong punch..Nice concept and whine personal. lol best bar of the battle. - 4/5 Overall - 10.5 Good battle. Thought Ki missed on a few just trying to flip bars, but had the bar of the battle. Rut was more consistent with his punches that gave him the edge. Your opener was nice.... MVGT - Rutter ------------- |
Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 10 February 2017 at 11:27am
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Hmmm,tough one this.. RKB.. Ahem... The champ put you to sleep, wishing you never entered this hobby To my memory foam plays made you lose n boy we all remember that body (Yep that'll work,nice wordplay here a good direct personal/punch with a little humour entow,the set up was tied to the punch well with the sleep/memory foam aspect also, a good opening bar that had some gusto about it..) Set ups just sloppy, pic match you got bullied killed n cooked Ki We watched u fall flat pictured in all caps like a rookie with a multi (OK i see the intentions here,and to be fair this didn't quite damage him much,this bar came off more as a clowning/diss for me really,there was a light punch,or should I type jab here but it didn't hit as hard as your opening bar,still it carried merit on the whole..) I mean fuck me, being in Kratos no wonder you tryina act The Binder of Titans? Getting 4 guys for Crewsades wasn't a giant ask (lol..this made me snigger,this bar is deeper than it first appears really,the cheeky little personal with his acting,and then the direct personal on his crew status,then it hit me, you highlighted the same problem I had trying to muster up ppl from my crew to get in on the act at the crewsades which then wiped the smile of my face,as I felt the blow along with Kiki here,good shot..) Just silence..that speaks volumes n he still thinkin he a soldier Crews mute n he just stood there while his kinship fucked him over (Mutiny) (again solid wordplay here,the punch/personal landed well also i thought, and again directed via his crew more than an all out personal,but hey it is what it is,plus to be honest it still worked well,although the play here carried the whole bar for me really, a good closing shot..) KiKi.. Remember I beat you last, let's throw that match inside of the mixture, How can you NEVER see a final, when you fucking decide all the fixtures?! (this was quite a clever punch/personal really,clowning him via his eyesight and battle abilitys,I liked the no messing approach here also just straight into it with the factual content too,like stay in your place bitch vibe running through it,nice and direct here..) I was spotted at 3 of them, so you can go and 'ahem' a lot, Cos that aint a cough - it's the choke every time that you get a shot, (again with the factual content that for me is working for you,the punch and personal were good,and this attacking slant i like too,I also like the subtle play here aswell,like he's mistaking his intro cough as arrival,rather than a gag,good bar..) You diss my crew too? Do you think i'm alone in this mission? At least I lead - You follow, and Beans owned you in your own competition, (a very smooth and directed punch/personal here,that says fuck you,you ain't shit, plus coupled with some dry humour this bar ticks the boxes for me,the vibe here was aggressive which i like to read in battles,and in truth this aggression has been tagging along from the opening bar really,well played..) 1-2's got you thinking you're 'in the frame', so let this Vet assist ya', This time you won't get jifs to whine how voters didn't 'get the picture'.. (again humour raises its head within,coupled by a good and well aimed punch that hit with weight,again some good subtle wordplay that backed up the personal approach here,and again aggression came into play with a sarcastic vibe entow,that just adds to the bar,good work..) Overall solid battle were the decision is a hard one to call,I liked both pieces that are on display,and because of this fact i read both verses twice as to help with a choice, this didn't really work as I still found it hard to separate you both,because the contrast between the drops seems to cancel each other out,so i broke up each piece and looked for what appeals to me more,and the only thing that separated you both was the aim/ aggression,so I'm going to go against the grain here and give Kiki the nod here.props to both here and solid outings from both.. Vote...KiKi..peace. ------------- "You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance". |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 14 February 2017 at 7:45pm
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2-1 RKB 3-0 KO...onto the next one. Triz v RKB Triz drops first. Within 48hrs of this post. RKB has 48hrs to respond. 48hr voting window opens from when RKB drops. Voting closes on 48hrs or if KO or best of 7 rule is activated first. -------------
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Posted By: Trizzy Tre
Date Posted: 15 February 2017 at 3:02am
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Yo.... 1,2 Punch semifinals u 'choked against Beans', ...bro it's timeless... So I'll keep "pumping his gut" with fists n I don't know the Heimlich! Don't deny it! ur LA jester, crew jokester ...skills what u lack Clown... Makes him Empire's Green Screen, how ur always 'play'in the background'! That's facts pal! Fuck your forced personals, ...he'll try harder... Cuz ur notorious to fabricate-a-line worse then Lebron's barber!! Ruts garbage, everyone in our crew Stomped u out once, just face it bro... You'll always be on the "cliques heels" like there's no-place-like-home! Empire. ------------- |
Posted By: Rutter knows best
Date Posted: 16 February 2017 at 1:02am
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..This guy Said he'd put " Swords in a box " he was pretty clear with that, We told him work his magic...This faggot pulled a disappearing act Manc n Orions the same story, even his crews respect has died, Fuck a "Counter offensive"...its hard enough to defend this guy N every time you try pull that leader crap, I swear dude we're dying Cos Empire's only top ten talents R'n'B, ya past ya prime like Lucius Lyon Claims I'm in his shadow, bitch you get the hands ya try n stop me Punches light up ya front, you said it ...I'm the man behind this body Expo's = rnb rutter n beans/text battle rank ------------- #bananas
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Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 17 February 2017 at 12:10am
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Trizzy.. 1,2 Punch semifinals u 'choked against Beans', ...bro it's timeless... So I'll keep "pumping his gut" with fists n I don't know the Heimlich! (nice opening bar here,the set up line tied in well with the punch, and the personal wasn't to bad either,the wordplay was also solid here which just gave this bar more weight on landing,i liked it good shot..) Don't deny it! ur LA jester, crew jokester ...skills what u lack Clown... Makes him Empire's Green Screen, how ur always 'play'in the background'! (lol..this bar was quite witty and a good personal to boot too,I like the way your going at him via the crew angle,i also like how your creating your punches via this course, again the wordplay was good also,so far 2 thumbs up here..) That's facts pal! Fuck your forced personals, ...he'll try harder... Cuz ur notorious to fabricate-a-line worse then Lebron's barber!! (hmm now whilst this is a good bar,it had a feel of been forced,I mean the punch/ wordplay was nice,but the personal was lacklustred I thought,comparing them to your previous bars it seemed like a filler,but it did have merit still..) Ruts garbage, everyone in our crew Stomped u out once, just face it bro... You'll always be on the the "cliques heels" like there's no-place-like-home! (yep another solid bar where everything was in order,from punch to personal and wordplay,the set up was loosely linked to the punch via the word stomp,which tallied with the film reference clicking heels so nicely done,again going at him via the crew angle (which is working for you may i add) which was aimed well on the whole,a good strong closing bar here..) RKB.. Said he'd put " Swords in a box " he was pretty clear with that, We told him work his magic...This faggot pulled a disappearing act (lol..i do like to read humour in a verse,it adds heaps to the strength of a punch in battles,and to be honest this bar curled my lips in one corner on reading,not the best personal in my opinion,but the punch did land here,so a good opening bar..) Manc n Orions the same story, even his crews respect has died, Fuck a "Counter offensive"...its hard enough to defend this guy (this personal here was directed and aimed well,the punch although present was no haymaking really, but it did hit home all the same,I liked the angle of sarcasm in this bar too,a good inclusion which also helped aswell,good bar..) N every time you try pull that leader crap, I swear dude we're dying Cos Empire's only top ten talents R'n'B, ya past ya prime like Lucius Lyon (very clever this punch here Rut's,linking Lyons to Trizzy being leader of Empire,and RnB as in Rut's and Beans as the talent,which also translated into a heavy punch,a well thought out one at that,the wordplay was also good,your strongest bar yet..) Claims I'm in his shadow, bitch you get the hands ya try n stop me Punches light up ya front, you said it ...I'm the man behind this body (yeah good closing bar,nice punch/wordplay too,the personal was present also,and the twist on the whole was a nice inclusion aswell,also the set up was ripe in the way of linking the 2 lines here,although this bar had some elements of selfhype,it was done in a discreet fashion that it didn't come off as smug,and ended up working well also,i'll even say now,well played..) Overall good battle,and good strong shots from both too,this is truly a hard battle to pick a clear winner,both were pretty even for me and if I could i would call draw, Trizzy had the better alround personal,whilst Rut's had the better wordplay via creativity, both were even in the punch department for me,hmm I think by the width of a coat of paint I'm going to go with RKB,(JUST,& I MEAN JUST).. Vote...RKB..peace. ------------- "You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance". |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 18 February 2017 at 1:34pm
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I thought this was a really good battle between two guys who clearly know what they're doing. For me, both verses were solid and landed consistent hits. Triz highlights were the closer & the background punch. RKB highlights were the counter offensive (which I thought was the best line of the battle) and the closer. For me what it came down to was really impact, I think on the whole RKB did a better job of cutting into Triz, with sharper disses which just gave him the edge overall when it came down to evaluating whose punches landed the hardest. So on that basis my vote goes to RKB. Good battle guys, this is the type of quality I wanted to see when I setup the event. -------------
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Posted By: Beans
Date Posted: 20 February 2017 at 10:50pm
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Yo.... 1,2 Punch semifinals u 'choked against Beans', ...bro it's timeless... So I'll keep "pumping his gut" with fists n I don't know the Heimlich! Dope personal here...Nice Idium punch here but could have been worded better by not saying "idk the heimlich" Don't deny it! ur LA jester, crew jokester ...skills what u lack Clown... Makes him Empire's Green Screen, how ur always 'play'in the background'! thought this was another dope personal That's facts pal! Fuck your forced personals, ...he'll try harder... Cuz ur notorious to fabricate-a-line worse then Lebron's barber!! this was a cool punch W/the fabricate a line but as a personal this is a stretch Ruts garbage, everyone in our crew Stomped u out once, just face it bro... You'll always be on the "cliques heels" like there's no-place-like-home! Dope play here but felt it was worded poorly(the punch its self). i liked the concept but it came off weird tbh. vs ..This guy Said he'd put " Swords in a box " he was pretty clear with that, We told him work his magic...This faggot pulled a disappearing act This was dope Manc n Orions the same story, even his crews respect has died, Fuck a "Counter offensive"...its hard enough to defend this guy DOPE play right here man. nice flip on a played personal this was nice N every time you try pull that leader crap, I swear dude we're dying Cos Empire's only top ten talents R'n'B, ya past ya prime like Lucius Lyon I liked this wordplay here bro. solid hit Claims I'm in his shadow, bitch you get the hands ya try n stop me Punches light up ya front, you said it ...I'm the man behind this body Bit of a basic play here man i wasnt a fan of this tbh Overall - this was a dope battle here. Felt both came with personals and some creative angles. felt both their closers were light tho. Trizz had a few more lighter bars than RKB and RKB used a played personal on Trizz but his angle on them were dope. I gotta edge this to RUTS with the more consistant verse here. Deff battle of the tourney. V/Enbombz ------------- 1-2 Season 1 Final Champ |
Posted By: Beans
Date Posted: 20 February 2017 at 10:50pm
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***RUTTER*** ------------- 1-2 Season 1 Final Champ |
Posted By: The Law
Date Posted: 20 February 2017 at 11:19pm
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3-0 KO RKB moves on Beans vs RKB Beans drops first. Within 48hrs of this post. RKB has 48hrs to respond. 48hr voting window opens from when RKB drops. Voting closes on 48hrs or if KO or best of 7 rule is activated first. -------------  |
Posted By: Beans
Date Posted: 22 February 2017 at 9:55pm
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Expos: his bar vs Trizz "N every time you try pull that leader crap, I swear dude we're dying Cos Empire's only top ten talents R'n'B, ya past ya prime like Lucius Lyon " RNB aka Rut N BEANS Listen fuck boy... You needed help in a 1 bar battle league! pathetic production of course Ironic you brought in 'LORD for the long run'.. http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/text-lord-puente-vs-rutter-knows-best-32_topic43549.html" rel="nofollow - while real battle HE had you commin up short! & while we on that subject? Ya bars all season werent bout gettin heavy! Day in & day out You put work into that league! http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/rutter-knows-best-vs-beans-semifinal_topic44468.html" rel="nofollow - Till I Clocked you out in the Semi's Vs trizz you hardly edged a win, You've never beat me so go & Tell SYN I sent you No matter if its 'Votes or bars', YOU've always had to Mention BEANS to see WIN credentials!!^^ I King shit! while you survive off my scraps - RUT, you not a leader We could 'recruit DTK while he goes ghost' & still http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/bottom-feeder_topic44559.html" rel="nofollow - you'd always be Empires Bottom feeder ------------- 1-2 Season 1 Final Champ |
Posted By: Rutter knows best
Date Posted: 24 February 2017 at 12:43am
LP was a food battle, 2nd bars a statement..fake stop that trash Lies can get you killed n you Always die against Concrete FACTS Levi came in http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/text-levy420-vs-beans-21_topic42175.html" rel="nofollow - fancy dress as a Mexican n still properly clowned kid Jokes aside..how you lost that made Empire look like the comedy outfit I didn't vote on you n Ki, it's a good thing i hadn't bothered Funny you dropped Bombz in your votes, That day you were cannon fodder King? Been chasing the thrown for 3 years, n this cunts got destroyed Only way dude get a turn in the chair's as a fucking judge on the voice ------------- #bananas
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Beans wrote:Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 26 February 2017 at 10:31pm
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Come on guys, you need to support shit like this with votes (and quickly!!) to make us continue to provide these types of things. What is it, nearly 30 people signed up to IC2 but nobody bothered to vote on this? I'll get this started... Beans I thought this was solid without having anything remarkable in there. Foundations were all solid but although you utilised a lot of personal content I felt the edge was lacking. Good example was the opener, I get the punch but it feels a bit meh/'so what' that he got beat off LP...it was a "food battle" so doesn't really feel like it has much relevance, so I think you need to be sharper in the setup to make it really work for you...the core concept should be "LP is shit & he walloped you" but it didn't really come across like that & ended up being a bit statement-ish. That was the weak point...the next two I liked, pretty straight forward but good, personalised, solid hits...the second was a bit statement-ish to an extent, but I think you got away with it to an extent. The closer I really liked, you got the balance way better...you really got the oneupmanship style diss in there...so you kind of dismissed DTK & by association hit RKB harder, plus it was a real nice (very fresh) wordplay to boot. So that one was real nice. So overall I think you had 1 weaker punch, 2 good ones, and 1 very good one. Would've really liked to see 2 good, 1 very good & 1 great from a guy of your calibre...but I get that it's hard to motivate yourself to rip into someone you're cool with. Ultimately you come out with a "good" rating for me here. RBK Lol...gotta give you big props for that opening flip, you basically said what I just said...then you span that into a real nice punch in the second line. I get someone might say it's a 'played' diss to throw the Concrete thing at him...but you combined it with your flip/play combo to really deliver an excellent hit off the bat. Plus it compares favourably to his opener as it's a similar style assault. Those are the type of details that really separate a top tier battler in my eyes. Second punch was another superb one...real great use of the personal to get a 1-2 punch in there & make a connected wordplay into a big hit. Was a real great combination of a comedy hit & a disrespectful hit. Next one continued in the same vein of tenacity...I thought the Enbombz element was a little crowbarred in there to add an element, as ultimately the Ki battle isn't really connected to the Enbombz vote...but that said, I loved the punch & I felt the disdain in the filler line, so think you get away with that one & you landed another quality hit. Closer was a nice hit...good personal diss in the filler. The ultimate punch was ok, I liked the 'turn in the chair' setup but the ultimate punch wasn't as nice as the rest so looked a bit weak by comparison. Still good, but just not as heavy hitting as the rest. Overall for me I felt you had 1 great hit in there, 1 very good one, 1 that was somewhere in between & 1 that was good. You also generally just came across sharper, and I think that's a function of your succinct style & utilisation of your syllable count...you really keep the 'fluff' down to a minimum and it results in verses that deliver. For me I think this was pretty similar to the Triz battle...nothing particularly wrong with Beans verse, it was a good one, but I think Rutts just had the edge and brought more tenacity and slightly stronger punches delivered in a slightly prettier package that mean he came out on top in this one. Vote = RKB -------------
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Posted By: Lord Puente
Date Posted: 01 March 2017 at 12:44am
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firstly...
beans, i liked the first bar (although, come on... of course i beat him, no surprise). n i like the multi at the endsecond bar was better, i like the clock in/out ref that you added as well, this was my fav bar of yours, solid job. 3rd bar could have been wrded better, end rhyme a stretch for me, maybe in audio you can get away with it, but not text or if you got an accent, but fuck your accent, this is text. none the less it still had a punch with other rhymes, so def still a hit. 4th was semi dope, but didnt quite hit hart. like an open hand slap maybe.
up, i won the battle). the play is on point tho with the Concrete facts. second bar, you got a big fat ugly "that" smack dab in the middle of the punch that is making my eyes bleed... none the less this was a solid hit, really nice. you guys and your research. now i know all the notes you must be jotting down in your notepad. third bar isnt connecting for me, i dont really care for this bar at all. then your final bar was dope, i liked that one a lot, funny. mvgt ruttere, he was more consistent with harder punches (minus that one bar... which is 25% of your drop). he had the hardest bar of the match, and was more consistent with hard punches, altho there were some hiccups.
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Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 01 March 2017 at 2:19pm
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Beans.. Listen fuck boy... You needed help in a 1 bar battle league! pathetic production of course Ironic you brought in 'LORD for the long run'.. while real battle HE had you commin up short! (Beans good opening bar here,it came off as a rugged and gritty personal that hit for me,plus the punch was directed well and landed also,I thought you worked the angle well to be honest,a good shot,and the factual element also added weight to this bars strength..) & while we on that subject? Ya bars all season werent bout gettin heavy! Day in & day out You put work into that league! Till I Clocked you out in the Semi's (this bar here to me seemed kind of like a statement really,and although there was a punch/personal to be had,its reliance on the link from a already used punch gave this a recycled feel about it,although it clearly isn't recycled,this bar is strange due to that link in that I can't decide if that was a creative move or not?,still didn't Really have the same sprite as your opening bar though,but it still carried merit along with it..) Vs trizz you hardly edged a win, You've never beat me so go & Tell SYN I sent you No matter if its 'Votes or bars', YOU've always had to Mention BEANS to see WIN credentials!!^^ (now strangely again here,this bar was a good subtle shot really,like your saying he gets wins by association to you,or like your his host in some way,so I feel the personal worked there,the punch was an attempt at heavy blow,which when coupled with your verses obesity Problem gave it a drawn out vibe,and that's kind of been the problem with your drop really,your bars have been a stretched affair as of yet..) I King shit! while you survive off my scraps - RUT, you not a leader We could 'recruit DTK while he goes ghost' & still you'd always be Empires Bottom feeder (yeah a good closing bar this,your punch power is back here also,due to a good bit of wordplay this landed well,the personal was i thought nice too,the inclusion of DTK OM was in the creative realm I believe,although its still groaning under its weight issue,i liked this bar on the whole,as it was aimed real well,a nice parting shot..) RKB.. LP was a food battle, 2nd bars a statement..fake stop that trash Lies can get you killed n you Always die against Concrete FACTS (always a good way to open a verse with factual content,that's aided with good punch/personal,the set up was a flip,or at the least sailing on the fringes of being one,which did for me take some sting away from the bar, on the whole,but it still landed with weight..) Levi came in fancy dress as a Mexican n still properly clowned kid Jokes aside..how you lost that made Empire look like the comedy outfit (yeah I liked the diss via humour here,plus I remember that battle too,(surprise surprise,i voted in it),a tongue in cheek affair which again is factual,this bar also had the clowning factor entow also,came off as a simple no frills well aimed bar..) I didn't vote on you n Ki, it's a good thing i hadn't bothered Funny you dropped Bombz in your votes, That day you were cannon fodder (again good bar here,more aimed than the previous one,the wordplay was good and clean also,and yeah the punch/personal found it's target too,a good shot,the slight sarcastic tone here was a good edge I thought,it added to the bars overall weight on landing.. King? Been chasing the thrown for 3 years, n this cunts got destroyed Only way dude get a turn in the chair's as a fucking judge on the voice (the comic value alone made this a good closing bar,the wordplay was witty and clever really,as it followed the set up well here,the (crunch),sorry I mean punch landed well and the personal was even doing its thing here,a good alround bar this,a complete one I thought,plus the angle which you delivered played well again on the whole,a good closing bar that..) Overall a good battle here,but the winner is for me RKB,here's why,he verse had the better consistency and humour really,ppl may think that going 2nd is an advantage, as he did skate close to flipping a couple of times,but he prevailed in the end,Beans your verse was also good,the difference for me was the weight issue you had with your bars,and the statement at times tendencies.. Vote..RKB...peace. ------------- "You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance". |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 01 March 2017 at 8:02pm
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3-0 KO...and into the FINAL ROUND Law v RKB Law drops first. Within 48hrs of this post. RKB has 48hrs to respond. 48hr voting window opens from when RKB drops. Voting closes on 48hrs or if KO or best of 7 rule is activated first. Yeah, I'm still with that wishful thinking we might get 7 votes!! -------------
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Posted By: Lord Puente
Date Posted: 01 March 2017 at 10:31pm
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Na fam... I got next ------------- |
Posted By: Lord Puente
Date Posted: 02 March 2017 at 2:47am
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expos he never went to champ match in his own league, only to "contenders" multiple times I beat him in a food battle great job on the league, it was amazing how it came together - ------------- |
Posted By: Rutter knows best
Date Posted: 03 March 2017 at 12:49am
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This must be a mix up, I thought you were smarter fam Let's shed some Moonlight, You winning this? Ya living in La La Land You only made it to 1 contenders n you got blazed of course Tried preaching to the choir but couldn't get a vote to praise the Lord I'm a major force, our journeys here show your just a runt I beat Beans Kiks n Trizz, You cashed in on your voter of the month Code for your a cunt! Even ya followers see the fire that I'm spitting Retiring this victim..Taking down the Lords work like i'm trynna end religion ------------- #bananas
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Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 04 March 2017 at 9:59am
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LP.. great job on the league, it was amazing how it came together but greatest ever?!?! it proved you were just a plain contender, (yeah I liked this bar,nothing to heavy but a good punch all the same,I thought the angle you came with here was a good slant to attack him from aswell,the approach was simplistic (which i liked,there's a lot to be said for being simplistic in battle,no confusion for the reader is one of them,plus it also helps to keeps a flow flowing) although nothing to damaging it did find its target..) on the side of that, we food battled, or don't you remember you got cooked like stovetop rice, didn't need no pressure (although this bar seems to be on the light side,to be fair it's heavier than it reads, the attitude angle here was good,the vibe of just brushing him aside with no sweat worked,the w/play helped also,although that was basic it still contributed overall, the personal was were the stinger made contact here for me..) k o t m.... you ran your lap on that track; but i thought you could do better, lets just say, i'd definitely outrun you with both my legs taped together, (again simplicity was the way forward here,this bar also had the lol factor for me, and still keep with the same angle like his not a patch on you was good too,agsin more of a personal based bar than an all out punch,but humour can turn a light jab into a blow,here it worked as far as making a punch that hit,still it counted coupled with the fact the tempo is still going strong just adds on the whole..) moral of the story is: you just a pussy, a bitch... that's your race and gender few more words to describe you? soft and wrinkly, i'll be damned, same shape and texture (lol..a good closing bar with the clowning aspect,the punch was in the realm of being forced though,as it was constructed from nothing really,in fact it was quite loose and near the generic side of things,the saving grace here is that it does tie in with the other bars,plus along with the humour and flow made it a good closing bar,just not that well aimed for me..) RKB.. This must be a mix up, I thought you were smarter fam Let's shed some Moonlight, You winning this? Ya living in La La Land (OK to be honest I didn't like this bar here,it just didn't strike any cords with me,i believe the angle here was forced i was looking for reference or relatable but couldn't find any, and it came off as a filler to me..) You only made it to 1 contenders n you got blazed of course Tried preaching to the choir but couldn't get a vote to praise the Lord (now this was better,good punch here and the personal was a double whammy also via name flip and his efforts in the 1-2 league,I liked the wordplay too praise/Lord and the angle was you came with here was nice and fresh,which just made the punch more weightier for me..) I'm a major force, our journeys here show your just a runt I beat Beans Kiks n Trizz, You cashed in on your voter of the month (yeah this'll work,from set up to the actual punch,and everything in between was nice,a good shot that had a factual vibe running through it also,as I was reading the 1st line,i thought it was heading to the statement realm,but the 2nd line where you show the course you had to take to get this far was a ripe inclusion,the belittling his efforts was good,nice shot, (but remember being voter of the month also requires work,and the Joker card entry is a reward for his work here)..) Code for your a cunt! Even ya followers see the fire that I'm spitting Retiring this victim..Taking down the Lords work like i'm trynna end religion (good closing bar,although on the predictable side via the wording in the set up,the punch was good as too the w/play,the personal was leaning more towards a name flip and worked via that course,and again using that concept of the Lord was a good creative slant on the whole,good shot..) Overall,i'm going to go with Rut's here,i did enjoy his verse more to be honest,it had for me the better angles and the better Punchlines.. Vote...RKB..peace. ------------- "You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance". |
Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 04 March 2017 at 5:22pm
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Rutts Opening bar: I liked this one it had some nice wordplay, maybe a little indirect but it still lands a hit Next:Lord plays getting a bit tired so this Only had minimal impact but still was directed well enough for a jab Next: Liked this one it had a strong dismissive feel and that clowning approach,. Good hit Closer: You already know I'm gonna call this one too simplistic, you could have dug deeper for the final shot Lord Opener: Not too bad here but I would say watch out with this kind of approach, if you start with complimentary wording the punchline needs to be killer. TBH the 1/2 Concept is already overworked on Rutts Next: This was good, directed well Concept was dope but with a few tweaks to the wording it could have been a KO NEXT: Maybe this made sense to you? With all due respect though the actual punchline just wasn't working for me Closer: You didn't bring this home very well fam, def missed the opportunity to hit Rutt here, a fire personal would have given you a confident win Both you guys came with a couple hits and a couple of missed shots Two solid reads with regards to flow can't really say one or the other was better A close battle here but I do have a preference For me Rutter had the bar of the battle with his voter of the month play Lord was close behind with his nice rice roll of the dice BEYOND that I feel Rutt used the rest of his verse to stay hitting at various levels and also showed out on some creative skills with his opener Lord I feel missed a few with some strange angles like his closer, ultimately his verse was less consistent Vote Rutter Well played both though ------------- |
Posted By: The Law
Date Posted: 06 March 2017 at 5:05pm
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LP - started off okay with the first two bars, both could have been executed better for a stronger punch, but the concepts were on point. The last two bars I thought you fell a bit flat. I liked that you used his KOTM as a personal, however, you failed to truly utilize it to attack him rather, you just clarified you thought yours was better than his. The closer was just poorly worded altogether and I wasn't really feeling the direction. I know you were trying to get that verse in there quick, but some of the verse did seemed a little rushed where some extra time would a made a whole lot of difference. Not a bad verse by any means though, you had the right angles here. Rutter - Solid verse. It was consistent and nothing really fell to flat. Opener was a nice light jab on the using the oscar winners creatively. A couple personals and nice nameplays. On the critique side you used a religious/lord based punch twice, seeing as all these battles have been 4 bars you don't have much room to repeat similar concepts here. Luckily both came off smooth and did some damage where the repetition didn't effect the quality of the verse too much. Your 3rd bar could have been a haymaker, where I like the personal and the aspect of you showing the voters he didn't do shit to get to this level. The executed punch read off as more of a statement. MVGT: Rutter - His verse was more consistent and he had better wording/execution of punches he brought in this one. As I am the opponent, unless someone else available per rules snags it and since I finished off the voting. I'll let Cuba, post up the Set up for the next round again.
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Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 06 March 2017 at 8:07pm
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Let's try this one again... 3-0 KO, onto the FINAL ROUND Law v RKB Law drops first. Within 48hrs of this post. RKB has 48hrs to respond. 48hr voting window opens from when RKB drops. Voting closes on 48hrs or if KO or best of 7 rule is activated first. -------------
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Posted By: The Law
Date Posted: 08 March 2017 at 6:56am
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Rutter wants to be the ICON with 1 bar, well... That kinda died on the spot Cause when your 'workin with a small frame' it's to easy to http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/bl3-kiki-spirez-vs-rutter-knows-best-45_topic42966_post438223.html#438223" rel="nofollow - size up ya shots and he decided to drop a King of the Mic, but we did not absorb it Even he was thinking, Oh God.... http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/kotm-since-we-last-spoke_topic44585.html?KW=" rel="nofollow - Please Stop Recordin (1.50 in) Go delete it, or in this 'manny hood' you'll just catch another beatin' Cause if we locate 'rut land in here' he just https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rutland" rel="nofollow - moved to the other region your not in LA Eden, since your a mod technically I'm your boss and you haven't done a fuckin' thing, you can close this loss!! links in verse ------------- |
Posted By: Rutter knows best
Date Posted: 09 March 2017 at 11:44pm
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..Nowadays u just treading Waterloo so i'm ripping every Bonapart You've hit the pits so try butter up those weak plays, stop it dude Even you know ya bars stink with no Lynx like teenage locker rooms For a while they defended ya no shows, now it's fuck him, He's weak Back then you threw dollars at Z's..Now people would pay to see me put you to sleep Spume..Zin Goose some Cain kid too, the no show struggle doesn't end there After Beans n Exhale him for just droppin..Its a fuckin breath of fresh air! expo's He's called Louie/Lou Links/Lynx (Deodorant) Zin won $100 off law last Identity crisis Exhale/Ex hail ------------- #bananas
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Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 12 March 2017 at 2:46pm
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Ppl need to start voting,it's a final for crying out loud,Ok guys,let's get this show rolling.. LAW.. Rutter wants to be the ICON with 1 bar, well... That kinda died on the spot Cause when your 'workin with a small frame' it's to easy to size up ya shots (lol...yeah good opening bar here,the punch was subtle on first glance but on the actual read it landed and found it mark well,the angle was played well too,and the wordplay/ personal did their thing and helped this bar hit on the whole,good shot..) and he decided to drop a King of the Mic, but we did not absorb it Even he was thinking, Oh God.... Please Stop Recordin (1.50 in) (lol..these Links are on one hand working well,with him choking during his audio,and on the other your encouraging ppl to listen to him too,helping him get exposure so to type, its a 1st for me to read a punch that then turns into a open hand of help,the personal was good on the whole a good bar here,nice and simple straight shot..) Go delete it, or in this 'manny hood' you'll just catch another beatin' Cause if we locate 'rut land in here' he just moved to the other region (clever this,a good punch coupled with a strong personal too,the wordplay was fresh and orignal as well,shit even the set up was done well,and the creativity was just a plus also,i liked this bar I believe it to be your strongest yet,as for the link,I assume that was for our American/international brothers,as i personal didn't need it,as it serves as no use other than an expo,ripe bar..) your not in LA Eden, since your a mod technically I'm your boss and you haven't done a fuckin' thing, you can close this loss!! (yeah I like it,a bit of a statement type bar really,but the value was in the diss,rather than a solid swing,it did have merit via a forced personal,the highlight here was aggression for me, like stay in your lane bitch vibe,which for me still counted as I do like clowning bars..) RKB.. Whole site want piece of this body, it's clear u out grown ya spark ..Nowadays u just treading Waterloo so i'm ripping every Bonapart (Yep that'll work just fine for an opener here,very creative on the wordplay,the punch landed well too,the personal although slightly forced,(via the name lou) was a bit of a reach there,but no matter,this bar still came out snorting,to be honest it was the historical play that carried this bar,as the set up didn't really bore no relation to him other than to rhyme..) You've hit the pits so try butter up those weak plays, stop it dude Even you know ya bars stink with no Lynx like teenage locker rooms (now this was a better personal,nice and direct really,the wordplay was again good as to the punch,your actual rhyming words were to be fair stressed and barley worked, (dude/room),the sounding vowels just and i mean just,by the width of a human hair work,but overall still a good bar..) For a while they defended ya no shows, now it's fuck him, He's weak Back then you threw dollars at Z's..Now people would pay to see me put you to sleep (OK, the personal worked,the punch not so much,although it was decent I just didn't see or feel anything to heavy here,the concept was a good angle,i don't think you worked it all that well to be honest..) Spume..Zin Goose some Cain kid too, the no show struggle doesn't end there After Beans n Exhale him for just droppin..Its a fuckin breath of fresh air! (yep I liked this closing bar,good punch/personal also,naming the no shows was a nice touch too,and the wordplay on Beans & Exo's alias just gave it a credibility vibe/feel, like their clapping their hands for him just appearing for once..) Overall i liked this tussle,both had some good shots,both had issues that amounted to an even battle to for the neutral,so much so that I want to call a draw,I'm finding it hard to call a winner,after reading them both a few times each,it boils down to creativity v personals,so i'm going to award my vote too LAW for being more consistent with he's offering,yeah RKB had the better wordplay and creativity,but they help a battle verse, not win them.. Vote..LAW...peace. ------------- "You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance". |
Posted By: Slip
Date Posted: 12 March 2017 at 11:32pm
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I liked the laws opener landed real well nice start His second bar was a decent shot not as hard as the opener 3rd bar had a nice flow but missing the sting of a good punch And the closer I liked how he bossed him around nice way to finish And between ruts opener and the laws I prefer the laws it just landed a lot better And ruts second bar the set up tied in well with the punch and it was decent but the You've hit the pits so try butter up those weak plays, was worded awkwardly I think " so try butter up? 3rd bar was a bit stretched out and you already used the work weak That's a go to concept with law and the no shows so you have to make it work a bit better to do some real damage but props for throwing that IC shot in there I learned something the closer was a better shot at the no show angle but in the end again I prefer the way the law closed it up compared to rut So over all I think the law took it at the start and the finish and in the middle it was pretty equal For all the reasons above MFVGT: the law ------------- See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego inner demon violent beast so warn the mother fucking people |
Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 13 March 2017 at 8:00pm
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Wow this is a dope battle for sure Massive props guys Not sure if this final battle is FIRST to 5 votes or not? If not then I wanna jump in here and say I think Rutts won this battle before someone else potentially end s it Just drawing up my feedback now guys won't take too long ------------- |
Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 13 March 2017 at 11:01pm
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Rutter wants to be the ICON with 1 bar, well... That kinda died on the spot Cause when your 'workin with a small frame' it's to easy to size up ya shots [At first glance this looks dope, but I'm analyzing here so I gotta take a closer look! The link between lines is obvious but I'm seeing a bar that took EFFORT to write and dream up but didn't really punch, the opening line didn't really make sense! That's usually a sign that overly contrived end rhymes and sub plots are more concerning than actual punches.... So this was a miss for me. but I do respect your ability for th clever thought process] and he decided to drop a King of the Mic, but we did not absorb it Even he was thinking, Oh God.... Please Stop Recordin (1.50 in) [Needed that link here, don't usually like the distraction, this was a decent approach though, it did connect with the humorous side of things and caught him with the clown shoes on,... But I think you could have used some stronger wording! @"He decided to blah blah blah" Should have been getting at him.... You had a dope angle here so finding the right OPENINGline for it is when hay-makers are born.. DECENT hit but had a lot more potential] Go delete it, or in this 'manny hood' you'll just catch another beatin' Cause if we locate 'rut land in here' he just moved to the other region [Gotta APPRECIATE the research here man! I'm from the UK and I never even heard of Rutland...So that pesky link thing had to be utilized once again... So at least now I know it's the other region! But I think you are on to something here, maybe there are other regions also?? That was bad wording man.. Anyways the old classical recycled recital of the LAND/PUNCH numberroid, I got no problems with them joints but they needs to be hard hitting or original twist on a clever angle type deals man, even switching a few words around would have improved this! The punch was he has moved to another region? Where was the aggressive approach? Who cares where he lives has lived or will ever live? You should'a been talking bout how he's not gonna be living! KILL people in abattle] your not in LA Eden, since your a mod technically I'm your boss and you haven't done a fuckin' thing, you can close this loss!! [ Wtf is LA Eden??? Am I an Apple short of a picnic here? Wtf is LA EDEN? PUT that to one side for a minute! It's the old pulling rank numberroid here, but is it factually correct? Rutts Been pretty busy in your absence, plus Mods can't close they own battles! Your last bar just proved that... Not feeling this bro] ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Whole site want piece of this body, it's clear u out grown ya spark ..Nowadays u just treading Waterloo so i'm ripping every Bonapart [So did this really make sense bro?, I been at LA for some time now so I can see what you are getting at with the opening line, next line feels clever I get the treading water angle but the loo bit i just making it look like a failed reach just so you could get the bone bit in! Which I did actually like! So I'm seeing an aggressive over reach here that didnt quite connect fully] You've hit the pits so try butter up those weak plays, stop it dude Even you know ya bars stink with no Lynx like teenage locker rooms [Wow this was a pretty dope rebuttal on most of his verse, it looks original to me and it feels like you are going right at him with this direct approach, should have worded it a bit harder! Though I guess stinking bars is pretty dissmisive, I liked this one] For a while they defended ya no shows, now it's fuck him, He's weak Back then you threw dollars at Z's..Now people would pay to see me put you to sleep [Cos some people know there history some people are gonna get shit better, watch out for that Rutt; Luckily for you I know my history, it was funny and worked around some personal approach but it old news and mainly conjecture I for one would not pay you to put him to sleep! I got enough bills man] Spume..Zin Goose some Cain kid too, the no show struggle doesn't end there After Beans n Exhale him for just droppin..Its a fuckin breath of fresh air! [Prolly an overworked angle on Law, but I like the aggressive nature of the bar, and the approach at clever wording almost worked perfect] Not the easiest battle to vote on and I know you guys will appreciate the feedback So after I broke this down I realised you was both just throwing wild punches at each other, some worked most didnt In the end it was Rutter who took it for me with his more aggressive approach in an otherwise even battle... Vote Rutter Good luck to both of you ------------- |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 14 March 2017 at 7:19pm
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Executive decision: Final round will be decided by 'best of 7 votes' rule 2-1 Law, vamos -------------
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Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 14 March 2017 at 9:11pm
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Hear hear.. ------------- "You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance". |
Posted By: Beans
Date Posted: 14 March 2017 at 10:09pm
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Rutter wants to be the ICON with 1 bar, well... That kinda died on the spot Cause when your 'workin with a small frame' it's to easy to http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/bl3-kiki-spirez-vs-rutter-knows-best-45_topic42966_post438223.html#438223" rel="nofollow - size up ya shots Thought this was dope tbh....tho would like ya set up to some how tie in with your punch. this still hit tho and he decided to drop a King of the Mic, but we did not absorb it Even he was thinking, Oh God.... http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/kotm-since-we-last-spoke_topic44585.html?KW=" rel="nofollow - Please Stop Recordin (1.50 in) this was a cool personal...just wording fell flat for me bro Go delete it, or in this 'manny hood' you'll just catch another beatin' Cause if we locate 'rut land in here' he just https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rutland" rel="nofollow - moved to the other region I thought this was dope... nice hit your not in LA Eden, since your a mod technically I'm your boss and you haven't done a fuckin' thing, you can close this loss! the old Mod Close the battle diss....Played concept bro. miss for me here vs Whole site want piece of this body, it's clear u out grown ya spark ..Nowadays u just treading Waterloo so i'm ripping every Bonapart This was dope. Line of the Battle You've hit the pits so try butter up those weak plays, stop it dude Even you know ya bars stink with no Lynx like teenage locker rooms Set up was worded iffy..."so try butter up" but the punch and concept was dope. the Hit the pits play was nice in there aswell. This is a dope punch For a while they defended ya no shows, now it's fuck him, He's weak Back then you threw dollars at Z's..Now people would pay to see me put you to sleep This is cool...@ Z's could be a stretch but i fuck with it. Spume..Zin Goose some Cain kid too, the no show struggle doesn't end there After Beans n Exhale him for just droppin..Its a fuckin breath of fresh air! TBH i wasnt fucking with this. tbh it didnt make sense on a personal note. expo's He's called Louie/Lou Links/Lynx (Deodorant) Zin won $100 off law last Identity crisis Exhale/Ex hail Overall - this is a close battle... I felt Law had some nice hits, with one jab and a miss(Closer) Rutter had LOTB(Opener) and his closer was just as well but I felt his Z's bar could have been better but shit was nice. I gotta Edge this to RKB. that Opener WORDPLAY was dope and the Lynx personal play was fire as well. Could go either way but Rutter Edges this V/Rutter ------------- 1-2 Season 1 Final Champ |
Posted By: Neek
Date Posted: 14 March 2017 at 10:19pm
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Lawzilla Rutter wants to be the ICON with 1 bar, well... That kinda died on the spot Cause when your 'workin with a small frame' it's to easy to size up ya shots this shit is alright, considering the material, this coulda/shoulda/woulda been the deathblow, but its a solid enough opener. and he decided to drop a King of the Mic, but we did not absorb it Even he was thinking, Oh God.... Please Stop Recordin (1.50 in) haha, this is where you shine. your personals are always significant and potent. nice punchline here, decent research, relevant, good stuff. Go delete it, or in this 'manny hood' you'll just catch another beatin' Cause if we locate 'rut land in here' he just moved to the other region solid enough nameplay, nothing out of this world. but it hit, was direct and added a little change of pace. your not in LA Eden, since your a mod technically I'm your boss and you haven't done a fuckin' thing, you can close this loss!! this wasnt the greatest closer of all time /KanyeVoice but I think that you know that. maybe a King(boss)/kiss the ring/I have the crown type of play. but meh, you had to fire first and you did your thing here. Rut-Row Whole site want piece of this body, it's clear u out grown ya spark ..Nowadays u just treading Waterloo so i'm ripping every Bonapart nice opener. real mean and gritty. idda liked to see more on the spark play ala Jay-Z to Nas..but I digress. You've hit the pits so try butter up those weak plays, stop it dude Even you know ya bars stink with no Lynx like teenage locker rooms meh, this coulda hit better. wheres the tie from bars to teenage locker rooms? feel what im saying. if its a deodorant play, great.. but keep the play intact. this was a cool concept but I wasnt blown away on execution…no pun? For a while they defended ya no shows, now it's fuck him, He's weak Back then you threw dollars at Z's..Now people would pay to see me put you to sleep like the flow until now people.. and also felt the execution missed. I get the Z's (zin)/sleep.. but if anybody noshows more than Zin?..you had so much substance that you left on the table here. Spume..Zin Goose some Cain kid too, the no show struggle doesn't end there After Beans n Exhale him for just droppin..Its a fuckin breath of fresh air! bah.. gotta say this was a no no no from me. a reference to zin back to back is meh. and ex hail.. I get it.. but I dunno. it didnt work for me. as a closer, not sure you did a walk off homer. I guess in closing.. this was a neat little battle. I felt that LAW had some questionable angles.. but all of them were direct. I felt that Rutter had the momentum in the opening and just let it get away from him. if this was a boxing match.. LAW landed the power shots and Rutter had a great first round. Vote = Law ------------- #Bananas 
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Posted By: AxyRocker
Date Posted: 15 March 2017 at 9:24am
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Law Rutter wants to be the ICON with 1 bar, well... That kinda died on the spot Cause when your 'workin with a small frame' it's to easy to http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/bl3-kiki-spirez-vs-rutter-knows-best-45_topic42966_post438223.html#438223" rel="nofollow - size up ya shots Setup had a real good wordplay with that icon/bar, punch was decent and he decided to drop a King of the Mic, but we did not absorb it Even he was thinking, Oh God.... http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/kotm-since-we-last-spoke_topic44585.html?KW=" rel="nofollow - Please Stop Recordin (1.50 in) did not absorb it? ohkay setup could've been better, I mean its alright but could've been better. Punch was decent but a bit statementish if you ask me, no wordplay or anything just stating what he said Not good enough in my opinion , concept was cool but execution fell Go delete it, or in this 'manny hood' you'll just catch another beatin' Cause if we locate 'rut land in here' he just https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rutland" rel="nofollow - moved to the other region That was good, I did have to check out about that cookie something movie but the punch 'landed' alright ! lol your not in LA Eden, since your a mod technically I'm your boss and you haven't done a fuckin' thing, you can close this loss!! Nah Nah! This was bad tbh, setup was heading in a good direction but punch ? It could've been so much better if you incorporated some kind of play in this. It was bit lackluster RKB Whole site want piece of this body, it's clear u out grown ya spark ..Nowadays u just treading Waterloo so i'm ripping every Bonapart Holy Cow lmao, this was a good opener! Though Law is Lou is a fact that I just learnt, its good that you used expo for that. Wordplay was good and for an opener energy/tempo was good You've hit the pits so try butter up those weak plays, stop it dude Even you know ya bars stink with no Lynx like teenage locker rooms Lynx/Links Omfg that was good, again a wordplay and honestly a good one. I do think there was some kind of typo in the setup though, but rut gets the benefit of doubt For a while they defended ya no shows, now it's fuck him, He's weak Back then you threw dollars at Z's..Now people would pay to see me put you to sleep This read weird-ish, I get that Zin won some money off him but wordplay doesn't work that way if you think of Z's as symbol to sleeping, he threw dollars at what? you get my point? It ain't working both ways! Spume..Zin Goose some Cain kid too, the no show struggle doesn't end there After Beans n Exhale him for just droppin..Its a fuckin breath of fresh air! The 'n' broke the wordplay a bit, but honestly it was just a touch away, other than that pretty decent hit Overall - What I felt is law lacked the tempo, maybe its just me but I prefer bars with some kind of wordplay or some kind of play that shows creativity, It may just be a matter of preference for some like it raw and some like it with plays - its about what pleases you *winkie* on a serious not though rutt had those which worked in most of his bars and had the tempo throughout his verse also rutt had this cool rebuttal for those links so I think that gave him an advantage. Now some people are like - " No man flips are bad, they are not creative, Manc was a faggot who flipped" But oh well fuck you ! Flipping is a double edged sword so if ain't hurting your opponent, it sure as hell is hurting you. With that said MVGT - RKB for those crisp wordplays -------------  |
Posted By: Lord Puente
Date Posted: 19 March 2017 at 3:26pm
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Law, overall this was a pretty good verse, i enjoyed it. rutter, overall you had some good bars in there but came inconsistent. I think you could have put a bit more effort in this as i consider you one of the top punchline writers on site. its your bread and butter but it seems as you werent hungry. mvgt Law, i think he had the more consistent verse over all. he had one bar that was ehh but still landed at least and rutt had one bar that was eeh and one big miss in my eyes. good battle regardless. i do think rutt could have came harder since this was the final round, and we all know he has it in him. ------------- |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 19 March 2017 at 9:52pm
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4-3, Law retains his title. Locked. Thanks to everyone who came through and voted after the call. -------------
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