1-2 FINAL- bEANS VS aXYROCKER
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Category: Battle Ground
Forum Name: 1-2 Punch League
Forum Description: Weekly 1 bar battle league
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Printed Date: 19 April 2024 at 5:56am
Topic: 1-2 FINAL- bEANS VS aXYROCKER
Posted By: Rutter knows best
Subject: 1-2 FINAL- bEANS VS aXYROCKER
Date Posted: 22 January 2017 at 12:04am
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DUE TUESDAY MIDNIGHT. ------------- #bananas 
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Posted By: Beans
Date Posted: 25 January 2017 at 3:45am
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check.... hope Axxy saw this ------------- 1-2 Season 1 Final Champ |
Posted By: AxyRocker
Date Posted: 25 January 2017 at 4:37am
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Yeah I got some real life stuff though , would it be cool if I post by 4 pm ist? -------------  |
Posted By: Beans
Date Posted: 25 January 2017 at 4:39am
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thats not my time.... But if rutters ok with it a 24hr ext from my time is fine....I'll PM my bar to him incase he doesnt allow it but should be ok bro ------------- 1-2 Season 1 Final Champ |
Posted By: Rutter knows best
Date Posted: 25 January 2017 at 1:18pm
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I have axy's bar will post later tonight. ------------- #bananas
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Posted By: Beans
Date Posted: 25 January 2017 at 4:08pm
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word See... I've KO'd U twice W/Ease, NO WAY this bar wont decease ya life foo Punch wont just give Ax a dent(accident)..But prove thats how he got to a season final ------------- 1-2 Season 1 Final Champ |
Posted By: Rutter knows best
Date Posted: 26 January 2017 at 3:13am
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Axy's bar- My first battle here I defeated champ of the belt he couldn't get while He lost to Conc so many times it must be the only record he's set ! ------------- #bananas
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Posted By: S Dubb
Date Posted: 26 January 2017 at 7:37am
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Beans, what happened here homie..... This is the worse bar you have done this whole tournament man, very disappointed.... You were setting it up nicely, but didn't really deliver the punch here...... The whole ax a dent wordplay is played out bro, and you didn't even do nothing real creative with it...... Also this bar didn't flow at all.... Idk man in my opinion you fell way off here, didn't like the bar at all homie..... Axy, I felt this was a decent punch..... Your set up was okay, but the delivery was pretty good....... It had all the aspects to look for in a good punch, you were creative, it had humor, a good personal, and a nice flow to it...... This was a simple, direct punch...... good work here Vote- Axy Reason- I feel Beans slacked off way too much here, he didn't really deliver the punch..... Plus it's disappointing to drop you worse bar in the championship match...... Really disappointed, I feel this should have been a better, closer battle...... Either way good work Axy...... ------------- Topical Twist League= 1-0 1-2 Punch League= 0-3 Regular Text= 0-1 Alias= 0-1 Topical= 1-0 Horrorcore= 1-0 Overall= 3-5 |
Posted By: Beans
Date Posted: 01 February 2017 at 12:42am
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can we get more votes yall ------------- 1-2 Season 1 Final Champ |
Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 01 February 2017 at 3:35am
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Beans: I thought the punch was hard and personal you just missed on the execution of it. The flow was off a bit but how personal it was really made the punch that much harder. This in my opinion was a pretty good swing and it def landed just have to work on that flow. other wise it would be killer. Axy: Your really stepping your game up. This was a cool punch. You did your research and made it personal and I respect that a lot. Since its just one punch the flow should be locked in. You were off a bit when it came to this. I feel you could have got a lot more personal on beans since he has been here for a while...I'm stoked on your improvement.. Altho Axy keeps getting better and better I feel beans took this. He had a more crisper punch that landed better with me. Axy keep doing your thing I am impressed. MVGT: Beans -------------  |
Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 01 February 2017 at 8:49pm
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Beans I thought your punch and wordplay was good on the whole,the personal was however a little weak,and dare I say the flow was also,this bar barely rhymed,it was stressed and forced,but the punch/play were solid I thought,plus it had some nice aggression with the flip on his alias.. Axy yeah your bar was good,but on reading it seemed to have a catch up vibe attached to it,like it was saying "yeah well, but what about this though",it was aimed true enough, and to be honest that is the strongest highlight in this bar,a good personal with a half decent punch entow.. Overall quite close really for different reasons,Axy came with a steady flow and a good personal,Beans had a strong punch coupled with wordplay,but there has to be a winner right?,sorry Axy, but Beans get my vote today,here's why,he had more of the elements I like in battle bars,plus his punch was crafted quite well,it had a tailored feel about it, props to Axy though getting this far and being consistent also.. Vote...Beans...peace. |
Posted By: Rutter knows best
Date Posted: 03 February 2017 at 12:42pm
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Can we get this voted on guys. ------------- #bananas
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Posted By: The Law
Date Posted: 03 February 2017 at 2:17pm
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This is a pretty close battle to vote on actually. Both had bars that could have been heavy hitters given a little work to them. Beans - Dope concept and great idea with the wordplay/nameplay incorporated into a personal about him making it to the final. I thought the overall wording of the bar lacked the power to make it a smooth, heavy hitting punch though. Although, the concept of the punch itself and the creativity with his name gets off to a nice hit, it reads awkward and never reaches the level it could be. Axy - While your concept and wording were already. I thought yours lacked a little in the aggressive and creative matter. Seemed more like you just used your bar to tell us that than really attack him. Otherwise, the bar is written okay, it is just missing that extra bit to attack your opponent and execute the punch to it's full potential. As is, it doesn't come off very strong because of it. MVGT: Beans - With that being said, this is still anyones battle, given it starts getting more votes. I just thought his overall punch was stronger than Axys and that is my preference. It was a close decision whether to go with the bar that I thought reads much better and has a good concept, or one that had the better overall concept and creative punch together but didn't come off as smooth. Good job guys. -------------  |
Posted By: Rutter knows best
Date Posted: 03 February 2017 at 4:02pm
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Beans- I though the personal name flip was a good route here. All tied in nicely. A lil clunky on the wording but it had a bit of weight behind it. Had all the ingredients here wording could've been tightened up though. Axy- it was presented well but the angle lacked. You can't really compare you win a 1-2 battle with a regular battle like they are equal. So as a comparison bar it wasn't gonna hit that hard. If I didn't know any better I'd say you had a solid punch here but I do so it just wasn't that hard hitting. Vote beans. ------------- #bananas
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Posted By: Paracosm
Date Posted: 30 August 2017 at 7:45am
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I liked beans's punch better and I guess that's the point of a 1 punch battle but Beans set up line and even the rhyming seemed pretty forced to me and made it not as enjoyable to read as if he would of took his time more. I enjoyed Axys shit too, i just think beans won as far as the punch goes and I'm almost certain that's the most important aspect of these kinda battles. Vote - Beans I don't know if you'll count my vote or not. That's up to everyone in charge and even the emcees if they disagree. I was just giving my opinion. Peace |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 30 August 2017 at 1:04pm
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Check the date of the Battle homie, this one is long closed. There are battles in the Battlefield where your vote would be appreciated though. ------------- 
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