The Lycantropic Life
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=44835
Printed Date: 20 April 2024 at 3:50am
Topic: The Lycantropic Life
Posted By: Schematic
Subject: The Lycantropic Life
Date Posted: 21 April 2017 at 8:22am
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The wolf man appears walking out of the jungle after Years in Segregation His Barely Aging still undergoing the primal Stages of Mutation The moonlight rays causing in him a Strange Sensation Possessed by the unruly crave he begins Covering your Face with Abrasions The rage inside doubles upon Hearing your Fading Inhalations Absorbed by his Godly Chakras His main focus is to Completely Berate and Decapitation Dragging your stanking carcass pass the gloomy cave to Feast on your Brain as Compensation A Wierd Abomination prized by Sorcerers that manipulate his actions by chanting Satanic Mantras during Daily Meditation Addicted to Pain and Mutilation his blood is riddled with malicious Plagues and Infestation A single drop can cause pernicious souls Facing Devastation to commense a Phase of Reencarnation Down to the molecular level Entire Frame Regeneration Rib cage is a prison of fire that Enslaves a Generation With lyrics like these Bring the Devil to Life Stabbing the eyes with Pieces of Metal or Knife Humongous claws Sever ya Ties have you Shredded like Fries Lungs exhale Deadly Demise consuming legion of angels releasing dangerous Tides of poisonous Stench in the Skies His skin is hard as diamonds Cloaked in Darkness Quick to react Undenying Uncontrollable Madness The king of gore reciding deep in the core of Unexplorable Aparthreids Engaging the Prey with Viciously Tenacity Turining their day into Serious Catastrophe When he begins to ferociously Feast on them Gradually Ever since billions of years ago my transformation is in tune with Cycles of the Moon, Paintly waiting Daylight for everything to become frightful and Shadowy Soon, Spiteful Doom there is no need to put a Rival in Tomb, Mutual Muscles and Skeletal System mutating through the Spectacular Phases, Olfaction keener than the average Human Elevating undergoing Glandular Changes, Polymorphing Capsular Cases from Supernatural Races, Ocular Glazes Trance you like Arcane Incantations from Oracular Mages with Scapular Braces, aim to wipe out all Granular Traces inside these Triangular Mazes, Look deep into my eyes and when you See the Spark you Been Marked, My deligh begins every night when the skies get Real Dark, They find my victim Stipped in Parts with Incomplete Hearts, My Cranium is harder than Uranium Walls, Jaws are Hackers like Titanium Saws, Pack of wolves that scared to Brawl Only Gaze in Awe as i'm Feasting on Brains Raw, A Wes Kraven Forsaken Existence getting buffer and buffer got them Scared like some Chickens, Licking lips after Each meal getting rougher , See me and escape just to appear Quaking and Stricken, Vividlly Swift, A close encounter leaves you looking like being thrown on top of Blades Gyrating and Spinning, Butchering Massive Bulls including stupid mastives too for exposing their Mean Bark, My claws are sharper than Jagged Cleats to Slaughter and Chop Meat... ------------- http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/rapper-t-vs-schematic-horrorcore-02_topic45919.html |
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Posted By: iLL ScriptureZ
Date Posted: 21 April 2017 at 1:41pm
| ...contribute to the site and you will receive the same. |
Posted By: Blood Eclipse
Date Posted: 23 April 2017 at 5:31pm
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Man.. You never dissapoints.. You are the reason I joined this site at first. I wish to battle you 1 day |
Posted By: Schematic
Date Posted: 25 April 2017 at 5:34am
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Thanks I am glad you read it its an Honor writing with people like Enigma who invited me here in the first place. If i am the reason you joined the site i guess thats enough cpntribution to the site dont you think Ill Scriptures? Instead of being a sored hater why don't you contribite to verses like mine? I was invited here by the best and contribute by reading most of the material posted boy you know nothing about my work in other sites ------------- http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/rapper-t-vs-schematic-horrorcore-02_topic45919.html |
Posted By: Nigma
Date Posted: 25 April 2017 at 6:17am
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Hello. Posts like ^ that aren't going to do you any good. It's a bad look that will only further deter people from giving you feedback. You're creating an image for yourself as someone who doesn't contribute yet expects something in return for nothing. I've gone through your past feedback and had to look back quite awhile to find something I'd consider 'good' feedback. When I see you have provided some decent feedback to other writers I will break this down. I'm happy to have you on this site but you're going to need to put some effort in if you'd like to see results in return.
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Posted By: iLL ScriptureZ
Date Posted: 25 April 2017 at 1:24pm
Really my last post on here as I don't want to spam your thread. I will say, no one cares about your work on another site nor does anyone care about who invited you. What we do care about is your contribution to the site. Small or large. Small being that you've taken time to read peoples pieces and giving more than a couple lines of feedback. Large being that plus contributing to the magazine and voting in correctly in tournaments.
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Schematic wrote:Posted By: Ransom
Date Posted: 25 April 2017 at 1:58pm
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Good post homie, everything flowed well and stuck to the topic. Was impressed that even with the complex word play you didn't drift in different directions. ------------- ~Lyrical Death Dealer~ "The Mike Myers of Papyrus" |
Posted By: Schematic
Date Posted: 28 April 2017 at 8:48pm
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This factual Dude is a Lame ama leave his brains Splatterd in Two in the Lanes then have him dragged Through the Flames He said "Really my last post on here as I don't want to spam your thread" but thats exactly what he did right there sounding like a who just Hit his Head You wouldn't know a bloody flow if you was Pissing Red Also said "no one cares about your work on Another Site" You are the Saddest Type you sit around all day talking about giving assistance or who has the Whackest Writes Your text got flow but lack in deliverance you never Ravage Mics Roll along with your Faggot Dykes caz in the real world you are as high as Average Kites! nor does anyone care about who invited you." You will never be famous beyond this Site its True your tongue sticks to more dicks than Crazy Glue, I can no longer stand You and your Lonesome Stupid Appearance you Turned out to be a bigger party pooper than Oldschool Parents, Well this is my wonderland land and you are not the Fairest! "What we do care about is your contribution to the site. Small or large." This is your execution Bow down to your Paps da Sarge, "Small being that you've taken time to read peoples pieces" If you were behind my iris you would know for sure you Stupid Fuck, Ghoulish Pup ama take some tridents and slash you right Through the Gut, You don't spark many people's intrest in other words you Truly Suck, "and giving more than a couple lines of feedback" Oh my forever underground half hearted spastic artist When will you Release Track? Respects to those that read and keep quiet instead of commenting a whole bunch of garbage when he couldn't have just given a kind compliment. Sometimes a compliment is worth more than a feedback like in this case ------------- http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/rapper-t-vs-schematic-horrorcore-02_topic45919.html |
Posted By: iLL ScriptureZ
Date Posted: 28 April 2017 at 9:02pm
why do I even try
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Posted By: rhetorical
Date Posted: 28 April 2017 at 9:25pm
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Posted By: Deathonađź’Ž
Date Posted: 29 April 2017 at 3:25pm
| Yeh its just like mine , long&Mundane as hell , only difference is my structure turned out REALLY fucked up in contrast to yours, |
Posted By: Blood Eclipse
Date Posted: 29 April 2017 at 6:18pm
Damn.. Murder case. |