ndians are Asians, so these shots make you a zipper head This bidder dead when bullets throw Ax like hipster trends
I guess this went over my head because although I understand the main punch (thanks to the link) I don't understand why or how "bullets" is associated with this bar. Please excuse me if I'm just missing something here. Nevertheless, the rhyme scheme was nice.
Listen friend, you don't want beef it's not what Indians eat Force feed you 'til you die from your religious beliefs
Nice transitional rhyme from bar to bar. It makes for a much more polished verse. As for this bar, the set up here is strong, clever and humorous. The punch is strong also as is the overall bar. The analogy is there throughout and clever for the most part. Nice job.
..Shit 'bout to get dirty as India's streets.. Not an album but this Rocker will get his shit leaked
Again, nice transitional rhyme. very notable. The set up is strong again. Very direct, humorous and pestering. Lol I use that term because at this point, you are bullying him with the Indian thing but just moderately enough. The punch is a knockout. Great nameplay. very idestructive. Well written and polished. The bar over all is a knockout bar. Nice job.
Bitch I'ma beast, between us is nothin' but distance This a kill watch iLL put Axe in a box like huntin' equipment
Decent set up and killer punch. Great nameplay. Nice internal rhyming and it was properly placed. The endrhyming I think is off on syllables but you worked something out there to make it work. Nice job, Knockout hit.
Fuckin' ridiculous, compete with me is deadly as hell Hit AR with an AR & leave'em both empty from shells
Lol great transitional. I enjoyed how it transitions here. Very nice bar. May be the strongest of the verse. But that makes none any less better than they ar individually because this was a very strong verse throughout and made for an enjoyable read.
Flow sketchy don't test me. You could never be a rapper Rocker suicidal, just know "in the end, it doesn't even matter"
Damn. Geez!. Great nameplay and bravo to the way you used a famous recent event to associate his name and career. Great bar. #Hardhitter
So end it, any hezzy & you'll get spun, lifted off the ground pump Rock Like 'Melo arsenal with his back to the block for the jump shot
I'm not really feeling this for a closer but it might be also over my head. Overall a great battle verse. Props
Bad Script? Check! List starring ? Check, the story is dull See me kill a franchise when I crack this wimpy kid's skull
Nicely wrote but I'm not feeling the punch. It doesn't seem direct enough
Weak attack focused on country than the person you are fighting you remind me of suarez the way you both were banned for biting
More statemental here. Didn't really take your dirt and formulate it into a clever punch. Instead you just basically said your dirt. The set up I've read over and over and I just don't understand what you are trying to say
Rock rises and its a landslide, my elevation's been sick While your only rise was for pussies, like a horny dick
This bar was to awkward for me. The whole horny dick thing was weird. And please tell me you were not associating Rock rises/elevation with horny dick!!
You talkin Indian streets, that was funny at first glance I mean its still got less Duzt in it than you got in your pants
Decent personal. Probably the best thus far, As for the set up, I'm not sure if flipping is allowed but decent set up.
You reachin to the top is BS you're a 'dead man walkin' We say 'The script' got good lyrics its the irish band we're talkin
Decent nameplay. Maybe could have made it a tad bit stronger with a couple of tweaks. But it was good execution.
Ax cuts in deep, one last punch and I put out his vitals Leave him making monosyllabic sounds just like his AM title
Nice personal. Great set up. Well played bar all together, Props. The verse was better in the last 3 bars but it had some dull and weird moments as mentioned.
I think this was a decent battle but ILL obviously planned to come out swinging and not stop until his opponent was out cold and that's exactly what he did. Ax had some nice bars which arrived too late and low in numbers. Nice effort for both contenders but my vote will go to ILL
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