Fuck a champ
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=45244
Printed Date: 18 April 2024 at 3:35pm
Topic: Fuck a champ
Posted By: Jay Homicide
Subject: Fuck a champ
Date Posted: 21 July 2017 at 9:11pm
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I slay rappers. You don't want it, soon as I aimed at ya It was ghosts, we had to hire grave trackers Just to find a trace, LA turned pulpit for fake actors Rorschach that brain matter, when did duckin' become a hot trend? Fight club to night club, these faggots just watch men Pop tense and flex on text, but they don't wanna trade wit Jay Avoidin' the call of The Ring like that famous tape Y'all made mistakes, Introduce ya head to a knee No sneak disses I'll openly say it, fuck Exo and Beans Everyone can see me and Cuba have these twats rattled Pull ya skirts up, time to quit duckin' on rap battles Clap at you, no applause just pull it and shoot Loaded chamber, the next bullets for Spume Break him down, you ain't shit but a paper champ Jay brings them dope lines, worth my weight in grams Champ for life? Homie, thats stretchin the truth (please) How's this champ goin' in, bein' expected to lose? (Weak) Frail rappers, why're so many champs dodgin' the call? It's cos I'm Marxist wit' caskets, I'm talkin' bodies for all |
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Posted By: Neek
Date Posted: 21 July 2017 at 9:30pm
 from one five star General to another.. ------------- #Bananas 
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Posted By: Lord Puente
Date Posted: 21 July 2017 at 9:35pm
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This site's been great lately. Nice drop man. I don't see you here often but you definitely earned a place. Hope to see you dropping more... verses... bodies too. This was hot man, nice drop. I like that the last bit changed focus to spume and ended nicely. And how you flat out said fuck exo and beans lol -------------  |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 23 July 2017 at 4:42pm
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I thought this was flames man, nothing too glitzy but direct and really sharp disses...I love that straight talk approach. You dealt shots to a bunch of people who deserved em. Real nice work. #returningfeed ------------- 
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Posted By: Jay Homicide
Date Posted: 10 August 2017 at 8:11pm
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Thanks for the kind comments. Bumping to remind people not to be pussies. |
Posted By: daydizzle89
Date Posted: 10 August 2017 at 8:18pm
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i dont want to feed this because if i do, i might have friends mad at me and that is why i wont feed this. If i give you praise, i might piss someone off that likes me. I cant have my efriends mad at me. Its fucking rude Chain snatcher, punchlines that spun day backwards I slay rappers. You don't want it, soon as I aimed at ya ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ You talking about me wigga? Huh!! (pounds on chest) It was ghosts, we had to hire grave trackers Just to find a trace, LA turned pulpit for fake actors ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Truth sonz Rorschach that brain matter, when did duckin' become a hot trend? Fight club to night club, these faggots just watch men ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Gay talk isnt cool but this was straight Pop tense and flex on text, but they don't wanna trade wit Jay Avoidin' the call of The Ring like that famous tape ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Where the call of the ring if you aint making callouts? Y'all made mistakes, Introduce ya head to a knee No sneak disses I'll openly say it, fuck Exo and Beans ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ This was nice. Yeah!!!! Fuck those type of people man Everyone can see me and Cuba have these twats rattled Pull ya skirts up, time to quit duckin' on rap battles ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ TRUTH MAN, TRUTH!!!!!!!! DUCKING HARDCORE Clap at you, no applause just pull it and shoot Loaded chamber, the next bullets for Spume ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ OH FUCK Break him down, you ain't shit but a paper champ Jay brings them dope lines, worth my weight in grams ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Sort of played but i like it regardless. nice bars so far Champ for life? Homie, thats stretchin the truth (please) How's this champ goin' in, bein' expected to lose? (Weak) ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Flow was ehhh but still not bad. A little rhetorical Frail rappers, why're so many champs dodgin' the call? It's cos I'm Marxist wit' caskets, I'm talkin' bodies for all ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Marxist wit caskets, this was a nice way to end this shit sonz Overall - POWER TO YOU SONZ. GOOD SHIT. NICE |
Posted By: -Que-
Date Posted: 10 August 2017 at 9:50pm
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Jay still got it ha ha. Sharpened back up pretty quick bro. Nice writing ------------- |
Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 10 August 2017 at 10:47pm
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What Que said. Jay's the GOAT Ps: you fools this isn't even Jay's final form *Frieza voice* ------------- |
Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 10 August 2017 at 11:39pm
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It was a dope mix of swag and hits It had a grown up kind of feel, it was but some of it was bare faced non sensical dialogue I found It was a kind of weak in the way it was putting the boots into some already pressurised people! So llacking originality and looking a bit needy maybe? Regardless it's a god set on me....props for that -------------  |
Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 11 August 2017 at 3:14am
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Good stuff. You can rap this out loud and it sounds good. I would have switched Chain snatcher and I slay rappers, but that might be a nitpick/personal preference. ------------- Insert something rappy here |