Time to settle the score
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
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Printed Date: 19 April 2024 at 11:25am
Topic: Time to settle the score
Posted By: Kay B
Subject: Time to settle the score
Date Posted: 06 September 2017 at 9:09pm
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Psycological fears tearing the brain apart Rememberance day of childhood pain how my day would start Smash mirrors n pictures, despising my look Cover cuts an bruises, everyday reminded im shook Can't even pray for some help never believing in faith All skin an bones but it adds more fat when seeing my waist Conceeding im waste, a mistimed accidental mistake He shoulda pulled, never had a son, semen on face no trace True story no fakes, they say speakin' out all that it takes Silently screaming for help but psychologically fallin' no breaks....fuck sake Close my eyes n see a younger me badly clothed n fed Hidden by a fake smiling father, kev's so cute the foes had said Happy child in public, left with no marks to show They knew of his drink n drugs, but "he loved us"....apart from blows The young me on my shoulder, not a weak child anymore No need to hide anymore, wont settle till he's divided an sore ...Time to settle the score... -------------  |
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Posted By: iLL ScriptureZ
Date Posted: 07 September 2017 at 3:49pm
| This was an okay abuse piece. Some lines were smooth while others, to me, felt wordy. I can relate to the topic and content wise, you were selling in the sense of making us feel the child's emotional, mental and physical pains. That was the shining part of the topical. |
Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 15 September 2017 at 7:20pm
Emo King season has returned. ------------- |
Kay B wrote:
Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 18 September 2017 at 7:52pm
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Props appreciate the feed ------------- |