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DTK - Relfections (Finished)

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Topic: DTK - Relfections (Finished)
Posted By: DressToKill
Subject: DTK - Relfections (Finished)
Date Posted: 31 October 2017 at 2:22am
[SOUNDCLOUD]https://soundcloud.com/user-206308494/dtk-reflections[/SOUNDCLOUD]

I finished this track, let me know what you think.

thanks 


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The original comeback kid


Replies:
Posted By: Who-Is-You?
Date Posted: 31 October 2017 at 3:40am
The lyrics are nice. I can definitely feel the vibe you are aiming for.
I just think that your flow and voice sounds kinda corny here.
There's an almost regulated growl in your voice. It's like you want to be loud but the neighbors might think you're weird. It's really restricting your authenticity. It's coming off as unnatural and really killing the vibe of the song. I suggest that you focus and study mic presence. Once you feel the most comfortable, which will be the most natural moment, you will kinda veer right into your lane. You will reach your comfort zone and it may even be crucial to your craft overall. But you definitely need to get more comfortable on the mic. Right now, it's awkward. Practice, you'll recognize it when it comes.

Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 31 October 2017 at 9:29am
I respect your opinion, thanks for dropping feed

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The original comeback kid

Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 03 November 2017 at 1:17pm
Bump

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The original comeback kid

Posted By: Bazooka bastard
Date Posted: 11 November 2017 at 1:50am
sounds a bit like madness. faster flow at the back end was the best bit, why didn't u round it off with a big dirty orrible punchline tho?


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