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"State Of The Union" - Trizzy Tre

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Printed Date: 20 November 2017 at 9:16pm


Topic: "State Of The Union" - Trizzy Tre
Posted By: Trizzy Tre
Subject: "State Of The Union" - Trizzy Tre
Date Posted: 11 November 2017 at 3:21pm




.........think about it.........




......LA politics is obvious ...whatever they might do...
Prosperity of the site vanished in the middle of a Skype view!
I'm right too,...but fuck it, got the scent of death in my nose...
Blood stains to Bloodlines, still got dude's flesh on my clothes!
Activity rose prior to bullshit, ...now LA's staying dead...
I'm an Outsider, ....so it's always easy to give'em a Razors Edge!
Put this shit to bed, ....it's ironic how I Played through this...
That beef? LA 'Raven' about the murder, ...call me Ray Lewis!
Lame movements from snakes slithering, it's fuckin outta spite..??
Cuz I'm the 1st burying an audio champ without picking up a mic..??
Y'all so up tight, ..the Hell with'em! For that LA suffered twice...
Hand of God raised, ......one Death seemed to Birth another life!!
Still I got love for the site! Yet hating cuz you never met Triz..?
......some only dick ride those on a social media friends lists??
That's just lame shit, moving like a teenage diva bitch...
Wanna slow down activity? .................guess you got your wish......



.............Listen.................



Let's pretend legit newbs signed up in high amounts...
Let's pretend it's not tiresome for some running multiple accounts!
Let's pretend battles were fair no matter what side would lose...
Let's pretend it's all a level playing field all playing by the rules!
Let's pretend some weren't trolls, fraudulent and bias...
Let's pretend some vets actually help newcomers giving guidance!
Let's pretend those fake egos stopped tryin to ruin the unity...
Let's pretend there's enjoyment and we're actually a community...

..........reality...???

...it's internet beefs & wannabe G's, .....u know my flow is mean...
but i've always stayed loyal to LA, guess I got those Kobe genes!!
If you notice me, my punches make'em losing all balance...
Tre drop a verse, shhh...'everyone still', ....it's the mannequin challenge!
What I found is some rather be top of a battle site then grow it...
Help LA? u keep Steppin Up then Steppin Down without aerobics!
Its hoe shit that ruined LA, even for me that shits hard to say...
ur in the Closet cuz Beans n others gave years of loyalty still u acting gay!
In a way I'm only here to scribble bars, ...don't think you run shit...
...... audio's? Bitch.....don't let that Sound-Cloud your judgement!!

....so....

...bullets got no names.... everything I write with the pen...
My strength? Throw a punch n all of LA feels its directed at them!
Who to condemn?? Throw shade? Then it's time the site would fall...
Sammy Sosa, Micheal Jackson ............ just trying to enlighten ya'll!
Fuck the dick riders n worthless vets, u know Tre's temperament...
Some of you like a Kardashians life, ... do anything to stay relevant!
Droppin verses for the hell of it? Nope... like u got nothing to prove..?
No work to critique? In the end only activity and the site will lose!
I'm confused...aren't we writers and MC's behind computers...?
Thought this was the Hot Spot, ....guess there's no wifi consumers!
Fuckin rumors of Facebook stalking? Wow, that's a high note...
My enemies? I know when they 'about to write', that's texting on iPhones.....



.........Question.........


Community atmosphere depleting, when will this shit stop..?

Answer...

Some lost touch with Reality, but claim it's for 'The Love & Hip Hop'!

I think not....

... however your schemes, disses or rhyming flow....
LA could either DO BETTER or Heath Ledger.......a dying joke....



.......that's just how it goes........








Tre.






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Posted By: D.Von Doom
Date Posted: 11 November 2017 at 5:23pm
😂🤣🤣🤣 let's get this straight mr. DEF POETRY...you "mysteriously" go on a Hiatus whenever shit get real for you on here lmao then return with wack ass poems...AIMED AT PEOPLE!? Just quit man...nobody missed you..Neek still wants his fade pussy and i smoked you...

HAD A SPARK WHEN YOU STARTED BY NOW YA JUST GARBAGE!

Oh yea I used the "......" since you did so much trying to make your lines seem deeper. Too bad your shallow Hal....see ya after your next vacation from LA that is taken at convenient times 🤣🤣😐. State of the union head ass

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Welcome back slip


Posted By: Slip
Date Posted: 11 November 2017 at 5:46pm
Doom still but hurt I see lol nice drop tre activity is dead here all time low
Good to see you popping by dropping some fire

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dooms so gassed up the audio belt won't fit'em,gave it up without defendin it,like a faggot in prison
Still bitchin like hes but hurt over his own decision,cos a true champ stands,&holds his position


Posted By: D.Von Doom
Date Posted: 11 November 2017 at 6:13pm
Originally posted by Slip Slip wrote:

Doom still but hurt I see lol nice drop tre activity is dead here all time low
Good to see you popping by dropping some fire


Lol slip after what ch3kk did to you...i honestly pity you. God bless you

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Welcome back slip


Posted By: Trizzy Tre
Date Posted: 11 November 2017 at 7:04pm
Originally posted by Slip Slip wrote:

Doom still but hurt I see lol nice drop tre activity is dead here all time low
Good to see you popping by dropping some fire



.... What up Slip?


No diss, just real shit.

You seem very upset doom. Good to see the sting still lingers from 3 months ago.




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Posted By: D.Von Doom
Date Posted: 11 November 2017 at 7:36pm
Originally posted by Trizzy Tre Trizzy Tre wrote:

Originally posted by Slip Slip wrote:

Doom still but hurt I see lol nice drop tre activity is dead here all time low
Good to see you popping by dropping some fire



.... What up Slip?


No diss, just real shit.

You seem very upset doom. Good to see the sting still lingers from 3 months ago.




Sting from from reading a article?? 🤔 get over yourself

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Welcome back slip


Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 11 November 2017 at 8:21pm
Yo Trizzy, good to see you bring sunfin
Trust me bro with the exception of the Doom shit, mainly because he has proved he is dope on a mic and you have not so obviously I can't take that angle seriously
Otherwise I got yo back on this stuff, you spoke on some truths but what you didn't do and it's the one thing I would have done .......and that is put some names to these wrong uns
No doubt I already know who the shitts are anyway but you can't beat a good airing out....
Good work though brother, hope yo life is sweet ATM
Spect

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Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 11 November 2017 at 9:22pm
Well,you had something to say here eh,and to be honest i feel you on this for the
most part emotional wise,it was definitely a heart on sleeve piece that had no
fussing attached,and judging by Doom's 1st reply,you didn't have to name names,
those targeted will know,i loved that incorporation there discreet without being to
subtle (nicely aimed),i also liked how you seemed controlled and angry within each
segment which was also a nice touch,this was a ripe piece,you had me agreeing with
a lot of it's content,and yeah good to see you about and bringing us presents to with
a stout verse..peace.   

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Posted By: Trizzy Tre
Date Posted: 12 November 2017 at 1:30pm
Thanks for the feedback fellas...

What's up Crim? Good to see you still around bro..

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Posted By: Who-Is-You?
Date Posted: 13 November 2017 at 6:38am
...it's internet beefs & wannabe G's, .....u know my flow is mean...
but i've always stayed loyal to LA, guess I got those Kobe genes!!

What I found is some rather be top of a battle site then grow it...
Help LA? u keep Steppin Up then Steppin Down without aerobics!

This was golden. Good shit


Posted By: Trizzy Tre
Date Posted: 17 November 2017 at 2:13pm
Thanks for the feed...



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