These Times w/ DOOM
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Printed Date: 20 April 2024 at 3:22pm
Topic: These Times w/ DOOM
Posted By: Neek
Subject: These Times w/ DOOM
Date Posted: 03 December 2017 at 8:21pm
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[soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/vintage-vocalist-verses/these-times-w-doom[/soundcloud] if it aint for the culture, whats the point? ------------- #Bananas 
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Posted By: Dntplywelwitothers
Date Posted: 04 December 2017 at 3:59pm
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Yooooo!!!!!!!! Imma drop some feed before it vanishes, mfkrs like magicians in this bitch. First off, beat is dope love the strings good choice.... Hook is catchy, only gripe is....the track is too short....I think the track needed a repeat on the hook, and both verses are a bit short, not that they didn't hit the point, just woulda liked to hear more from each verse. Y'all compliment each other , two different flows, but sick delivery on both parts. Not really lyrical but clever...but most of all, I detect no "fucks" given by either of you..... I dig the combination and there should be more collabs between the two. Neek- bar for bar/ send shots...no shit! Poster/ never got the picture....lol Doom- coexist/ don't exist......sheesh ...you open with a open hand? Diss a peer/disappear.... Bottom line...... more! ------------- "My name has the most shout outs in the history of rap...." |
Posted By: D.Von Doom
Date Posted: 04 December 2017 at 9:29pm
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Appreciate the feed. Btw what do you consider lyrical? ------------- I can only fall off in space... |
Posted By: Absolute Abomination
Date Posted: 05 December 2017 at 12:02am
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Dope, pretty solid production quality. Not a big fan of the hook and Doom's line "we can't co-exist 'cause you don't exist" but everything else was nice. Bit short verses but it fit the track I think. ------------- Show me a fortress and I'll show you a ruin. |
Posted By: Dntplywelwitothers
Date Posted: 05 December 2017 at 4:50pm
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I really appreciate this question.... My answer is based only on MY opinion. Not the conventional definition.... When I say lyrical mean a multiple display of elements in writing...and how they are structured or organized.....strategic play with wording, sounds, rhyme schemes, similes, metaphors, multi syllabic rare, but not abnormal vocabulary....detailed setups and executions of puns. To me, it's the difference between popping the hood and showing me the engine, or pointing out the car in the showroom. I haven't really heard many of your tracks....my comment is in no way a dig @ your verse..so my apologies if it seems like that.... it was based on what I got outta this particular track. Anyway, how I see it....lyrical is the formula.....rather than the product....both carry out the same objective... but one takes the scenic route the other drives straight to the destination ... it's cool if you disagree, I'm sure many will. Lemme ask you the same question. ------------- "My name has the most shout outs in the history of rap...." |
Posted By: D.Von Doom
Date Posted: 05 December 2017 at 5:03pm
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It's basically the same as you put it. No worries. But whenever there are schemes with double entendres interlaced its hard to think that isn't lyrical for me...this verse was more simplicistic than my other verses...but on the other hand I had specific lines that may seem statement-ish to you but the people its aimed at will get it fully. For example, the co exist line was directed at trizz because he doesn't exist in the world of audio.... The first two bars connect. I respect it though ------------- I can only fall off in space... |
Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 06 December 2017 at 4:38pm
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Well guys i must state that this joint was impressive,i'm going to listening again when i finish work going home on the train,this was like a gold seam in that it was solid and worth every penny (in the way of listening that is),the hook (and i'll state now im not usually a fan of them) was good to be honest,the sarcastic tone/pitch just added a step to it,and talking of tones and pitches,you both nailed it in mic presence and tempo,Neek did his thing with poster/picture and Doom with handing out swipes,enjoyed fella's,worth 5 mins of anybody time,truth.. ... peace. ------------- "You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance". |
Posted By: Dntplywelwitothers
Date Posted: 07 December 2017 at 11:25am
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I see what you're sayin, Doom....I didn't know the specifics to really appreciate the content in its entirety....so the context seemed to be more general, rather than direct, resulting in me missing key elements. But as you said, I'm not the targeted audience, so it's like starting a book in the middle for me..... I appreciate you showing me the engine. ------------- "My name has the most shout outs in the history of rap...." |
Posted By: Cheeseburger Eddie
Date Posted: 10 December 2017 at 3:38am
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"Hm, ain't been to LA in a while let's see what's up over there..." *Checks the Audio section* "...hm, Neek and Doom are on a track together this is probably dope..." *gives the song a listen* "...yup shits dope." Some things don't change, y'all just sound good on a track.
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