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[wd4] Fossil of war

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Printed Date: 23 April 2024 at 4:01pm


Topic: [wd4] Fossil of war
Posted By: daydizzle89
Subject: [wd4] Fossil of war
Date Posted: 11 April 2018 at 3:54pm
Ridiculous fortunes with prehistoric origins
Regions go to war to forage it
Warlords work in unison to score a lick
Its a practical force driving sorcerers
in its purest form, vague concepts of earths forfeiture
Vibrations of sulfur, oil is torturing us


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Posted By: iLL ScriptureZ
Date Posted: 11 April 2018 at 8:09pm
Nice and to the point. I liked the delivery on this joint. Strong use of the words, I really liked the shorter bar structure in comparison to your other drops.

Posted By: Slip
Date Posted: 12 April 2018 at 1:35am
Yo dizz nice drop short to the point really packs a punch

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See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego
inner demon violent beast so
warn the mother fucking people

Posted By: Schematic
Date Posted: 15 April 2018 at 11:00pm
Your one is Shoter than Mine
No doubt you are Smarter in Rhyme

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Posted By: Dntplywelwitothers
Date Posted: 18 April 2018 at 1:48pm
First, starting with the title, this magnifies an issue in a very short straight to the point approach. Really good use of the words, and the opener was strong, you said a mouthful in five words. Flow and rhyming were on point,

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"My name has the most shout outs in the history of rap...."


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