Lil Tay [Prod. Cxdy]
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Printed Date: 19 April 2024 at 11:36am
Topic: Lil Tay [Prod. Cxdy]
Posted By: Bakardi
Subject: Lil Tay [Prod. Cxdy]
Date Posted: 28 May 2018 at 2:52pm
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[soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/713music/lil-tay-prodcxdy[/soundcloud] ------------- 
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Posted By: Neek
Date Posted: 29 May 2018 at 12:02am
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no. ------------- #Bananas 
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Posted By: Endeavor
Date Posted: 29 May 2018 at 10:32am
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Nah b. This dont work. ------------- #Bananas  |
Posted By: Bakardi
Date Posted: 29 May 2018 at 4:23pm
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Can I get a little more solid of a critique please? Keep in mind that I'm not trying to be lyrical, I'm trying to make successful mainstream rap. Thanks. -------------
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Posted By: Neek
Date Posted: 29 May 2018 at 6:05pm
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your flow is very shaky, the delivery is very dry. the content is borderline corny - its more 2010 party shop boyz than a 2018 future or migos. this isnt "mainstream", its dumpster bin music. nothing catchy or repeat worthy. its a try hard attempt at being cool and it fails so miserably bad that asking you to never do this shit again was a favor. im sure im missing shit, but theres a small overview of what went wrong. ------------- #Bananas
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Posted By: Bakardi
Date Posted: 29 May 2018 at 6:09pm
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Thanks for the feed Neek! -------------
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