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[BAE] Ridley Squat vs Smoothtung

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Category: Battle Ground
Forum Name: Disqualification Archive
Forum Description: Battles stopped for disqualification
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=46190
Printed Date: 22 October 2019 at 4:12pm


Topic: [BAE] Ridley Squat vs Smoothtung
Posted By: iLL ScriptureZ
Subject: [BAE] Ridley Squat vs Smoothtung
Date Posted: 01 October 2018 at 12:50pm



Replies:
Posted By: Smoothtung
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:25am

* they have found metal snow in the mountains of Venus


So look..

I read
scientific Zionistic hieroglyphs in Thai linguistics.
Mine are carved in vinyl disks n' rhyme of ships and flight ballistics.
Might permit a rhyming clinic dominant like holocausts.
Learned to write the finest lyrics compliments to Robert Frost..
I’d never tried to sever ties with letters but the pleasure died,
pressure forges treasures but this pressure more than weathered mine.
I wished to guide a charter toward the heavens but the devil told
to live and die a martyr ‘for these heavens mend a rebels soul.
Listen though..
This..
alchemy is patently on balance with a valency like galaxies and gravity when dropping snow on Venus.. 
I traveled through the apogee so gallantly.. just ask me.. 
Got a
master degree burn after a heat-stroke of genius. 
I'm 
father time's modernized broader mind authorized to colonize fallen tribes of eden.. 
Bottom line
philosophised, modified and optimized these flawless lines like this was the solemn rise of Phoebus..
Gimme back the load of shit I stole and bit to mould and fit the hole I ripped in my own soul from all these fucking opiates.
Know that when I wrote this shit i WROTE this shit no stollen shit this goat is fit for thrones n shit..
Odysseus's holiness..






Posted By: iLL ScriptureZ
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 1:22pm
Originally posted by Smoothtung Smoothtung wrote:


* they have found metal snow in the mountains of Venus


So look..

I read
scientific Zionistic hieroglyphs in Thai linguistics.
Mine are carved in vinyl disks n' rhyme of ships and flight ballistics.
Might permit a rhyming clinic dominant like holocausts.
Learned to write the finest lyrics compliments to Robert Frost..
I’d never tried to sever ties with letters but the pleasure died,
pressure forges treasures but this pressure more than weathered mine.
I wished to guide a charter toward the heavens but the devil told
to live and die a martyr ‘for these heavens mend a rebels soul.

Listen though..
This..
alchemy is patently on balance with a valency like galaxies and gravity when dropping snow on Venus.. 
I traveled through the apogee so gallantly.. just ask me.. 
Got a
master degree burn after a heat-stroke of genius. 
I'm 
father time's modernized broader mind authorized to colonize fallen tribes of eden.. 
Bottom line
philosophised, modified and optimized these flawless lines like this was the solemn rise of Phoebus..
Gimme back the load of shit I stole and bit to mould and fit the hole I ripped in my own soul from all these fucking opiates.
Know that when I wrote this shit i WROTE this shit no stollen shit this goat is fit for thrones n shit..
Odysseus's holiness..

Smooth you recycled the http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/smooths-back_topic35429.html?KW=" rel="nofollow - first part of your verse here . http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/ether_topic38980.html?KW=" rel="nofollow - As well as here . Which leads me to 1 of 2 conclusions. 1.) The second half of your verse is new. 2.) Considering the previous evidence in which you recycled twice, I'm leaning that you pulled it from another previous verse of yours which I could not find. 

Also, this shit is way longer than 16 lines. Get your fucking shit together.

Lastly, a DQ is pending as I consult with other judges on the matter.


Posted By: The Law
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 1:33pm
"master degree burn after a heat-stroke of genius. " 

Bitten from Rhyme Asylum - Poison Penmanship 
https://genius.com/Rhyme-asylum-poison-penmanship-lyrics

Which leads me to believe more of this is not your own work. 


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Go my Minions!




Posted By: Neek
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 1:39pm
wow... incredible.

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#Bananas


Posted By: iLL ScriptureZ
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 1:47pm
Yeah, this is fucking ridiculous. You're definitely removed from the tournament and the Mods will probably make a decision on banning you, again. You're a fucking turd. To think, after I said I wouldn't collab with you, you still supported the event I put on, I figured, why not give you a shot. Then, turn around and make a mockery out of it with your blatant, retarded bullshit. The disrespect you show to other peoples intelligence is remarkable. 

Ridley, on the behalf of this idiot, I apologize. You will move on to battle someone else. If you have started writing for this battle, I hope it turns into a dope ass OM. If you want, I'd gladly use it in Self's "Deconstruct the Bars" thread. LMK.


Posted By: Neek
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 1:50pm
@iLL... before you scrap this.. see if the homie Stalin can step in. he has dope ass multi's.

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#Bananas


Posted By: iLL ScriptureZ
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 1:53pm
Originally posted by Neek Neek wrote:

@iLL... before you scrap this.. see if the homie Stalin can step in. he has dope ass multi's.

Word Neek, Just PM'd him.


Posted By: daydizzle89
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:01pm
Holy Fucking Junkie



Posted By: Ridley Squat
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:03pm
Jesus.

Well ... based on the concept "Content can be anything, but you're judged on relevance" ...
what I wrote so far was tailored to him ... (cos I figured otherwise it would easy to use a recycled verse).

So I'd be started again regardless,


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Posted By: iLL ScriptureZ
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:15pm
Originally posted by Ridley Squat Ridley Squat wrote:

Jesus.

Well ... based on the concept "Content can be anything, but you're judged on relevance" ...
what I wrote so far was tailored to him ... (cos I figured otherwise it would easy to use a recycled verse).

So I'd be started again regardless,

I had a hunch this may be the case. Let me deliberate with the judges and see what we can do for you. I'm inclined to give you this W and new battle parameters with a new opponent. 


Posted By: Smoothtung
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:22pm
What the hell man I didn't bite shit


Posted By: Smoothtung
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:24pm
And I refined a couple of my favorite concepts... and?


Posted By: Rutter knows best
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:27pm
You fucked up dude whatever way you look at it. Make better choices.

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#bananas


Posted By: Smoothtung
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:27pm
They are different bars. They have different words and different meanings.


Posted By: Smoothtung
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:28pm
And the heat stroke line? Dog... That idea literally popped into my head last night


Posted By: Smoothtung
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:29pm
I ain't even making this up..
Fml


Posted By: Rutter knows best
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:31pm
Regardless you recycled your verse. No Bueno

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#bananas


Posted By: Smoothtung
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:33pm
Nah I didn't dog I took 3 bars that I was refining for an open and decided to build off em for this. Had no idea that'd be no bueno especially since they aren't the same bars anymore


Posted By: The Law
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:35pm
Honestly, I wouldn't buy anything that comes from you. This isn't the first time you've bit. And last time we found it to be multiple pieces of your work. Just putting your username and biting in google, we can see you were accused on another site in the past as well. 

The fact that you had to recycle old lines just shows you struggle to write anything new and resort to biting and recycling. If you go back and look at previous bit work, including the play in this drop, it's night and day in the quality from the lines you bit to your own. 


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Go my Minions!




Posted By: Smoothtung
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:41pm
This is mine. The lines you say are recycled are fucking different lines. That's what I do, I refine my work over and over and over again, always trying to perfect it. And I literally didn't bite that line I thought about it when I said I'd crossed through the atmosphere in the previous line. Its a pretty basic concept and I'm not surprised someone has made a play on it.

Ay if you think I can't write new shit pit your money where your mouth is let's do a topical.


Posted By: The Law
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:45pm
Would I be facing Rhyme Asylum or someone else? 

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Go my Minions!




Posted By: Endeavor
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 2:45pm
I'm locking the thread for now while this is under investigation.

@iLL; I'll get back you asap regarding the tourney.
@Smooth: We'll also get back at you regarding the matter
@Ridley: You do you.

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#Bananas



Posted By: Endeavor
Date Posted: 03 October 2018 at 3:20pm

Hello,

 
We'll be removing Smoothtung from the tourney as this is iLL's request. @iLL, if you'd like Ridley to battle a different person I advise you to create a new thread for that one as this one will be locked and dumped in the DQ section. I'm sorry your tourney had to start off like this.


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#Bananas




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