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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Audio Mic
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Printed Date: 18 April 2024 at 2:02am


Topic: Bottles
Posted By: GDub
Subject: Bottles
Date Posted: 10 March 2019 at 4:51am
This is a song I've been working on for a week now. I recorded it using my turtlebeach headset and edited the vocals with Audacity. I really tried to focus on the writing and my delivery.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DO2fA1NeLPI


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Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 12 March 2019 at 7:06pm
Well firstly, it's been a hot minute since i last read/heard from you, like Chekk always good to see a
return-e, (myself included to an extent), i liked the concept bottles (beer & pills) here, i just wished
you stayed on that theme, because (and this is just my opinion) mid way in it seemed to become
spatial/broad in its content, it had a lot of street elements within, but less of the bottle element that
it started with, you could of implied and applied so many different terms and twists via that theme,
anyways it was a solid joint your tone/pitch was nice, your delivery was good for the most part, the
most noticeable problem on hearing for me was confidence on the mic here, (whether that's down
to the quick spit rhyme scheme i don't know, but it stood out like a scarecrow in a field), still despite
my minor, and yes minor gripes this was still solid...peace.

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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".

Posted By: GDub
Date Posted: 12 March 2019 at 7:40pm
Crimson I was thinking of adding "I'm bottling up from these bottles, self esteem going down on full throttle" and a few other lines but I decided to cut them while I was writing.

Does mic confidence just come over time? Or is it something I can work on? If so how do I practice to have confidence on the mic? I am aiming to get as good as I can possibly get so if you have any pointers on mic confidence just let me know.

Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 12 March 2019 at 9:11pm
Well in all honesty i don't do audio's,but i do do beats,maybe adding a little voice
change/character switch up in spats would help,try not to stay in one groove or
tone as it becomes monotone,what you need is another audio head to explain mic
confidence and how to gain it..peace.

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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".


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