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Confetti 2

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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Audio Mic
Forum Description: Where you can link to your own music.
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Printed Date: 19 April 2024 at 8:33pm


Topic: Confetti 2
Posted By: GDub
Subject: Confetti 2
Date Posted: 14 March 2019 at 7:21am
My first confetti video is almost at 10k views so I decided I would make a second song with the same instrumental and call it the same song, just add a 2 at the end of it. So I have been working on this song, I attempted double time in my first verse, please let me know if it sounded natural.

I recorded this using my turtle beach headset and I edited the audio using Audacity. 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GjL5g3fv11I


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Posted By: Nigma
Date Posted: 15 March 2019 at 4:02am
First thing, audio quality. Terrible. Recording with turtle beaches is a bad idea. Put a sock (preferably clean, but any will do) over the microphone portion of your phone and record with any voice recording app comes with the phone, or one on the app store. It'll sound infinitely better,  I promise. 


You're lyrics aren't great, but you're improving. The flows getting to be in a good place, just really need to make what your saying more unique, make it something the listener hasn't heard before, or make them think about something in a way they haven't before. It all starts with clever observations of every day life.

My advice, you can make anything rhyme with anything if you try hard enough, so just rhyming cliches isn't going to impress very many people. Study the game, literary devices and shit. Some good meta's or well executed wordplay goes a long way. 


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