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My Word..

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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
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Printed Date: 24 April 2024 at 4:43am


Topic: My Word..
Posted By: D-NoS
Subject: My Word..
Date Posted: 31 May 2019 at 1:54am
I Aint Gonna Lie, I Aint a Happy Guy, I Gotta Couple'a Worries ina Back of my Mind..
I Aint Qualified for the Jobs I Cant Find, And Like What the Fuck am I Doing With my Life..
I Been Wasting Mine An I'm Running Outta Time, Not Enough Money In An The Waters Run Dry
Wanna Live Life Before I Have To Die, No Way's That Happening Until I Make More Dimes

I Didn't Choose Rhymes, They Choose Me, I Gave My Life to The Music An I Feel It Owes Me
I Was an Addict Before any Drugs I Loves Beats , I'm Like a Fire The Music Is Fuel That Feeds Me
I Aint A Criminal If In The Law I Don't Believe, It Is What It Is And That Is My Philosophy
Mankind Is Cool N All But Aint No Boss Of Me, I Dont Buy God I Just Trust The Almighty

I Wear My Heart On My Sleeve, I'm Starving Hungry, Make Art Constantly, Pray One Day I Can Eat, 
At My Age I Should Be'a Few Albums Deep, It Aint Never To Late So I Formulate Plans G
Take Care of My Health With Fitness Regimes, Prepare To Draw More Wealth From Cash Machines
Fall Back On Floors While I'm High On Hash N Trees, I'm Done With Nightmares I'm Realizing Dreams

Doing What I Shoulda Done When I was In My Teens, Back Then My Head Was Gone So I Was On Bass N Ecstasy
Traumatic Childhood Fucked Me Up Through Puberty, Lost My Brain Went Insane To Much Pain Bothering Me, 
Got A Job Working In The Fast Food Industry Met A Bird Got a Flat B'came A Dad N Got Clean
Fast-forward Nine Years its Y2K19, Been Blasting Doors Off Hinges Like They Aint No Thing


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https://soundcloud.com/dnos_aka_dicey



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Posted By: Crimson Juice
Date Posted: 07 June 2019 at 8:38am
I like social awareness piece's, especially when they act like Windows into a
person's life struggles, this rhyme was simple in its approach but it worked
well for me, you had enough content in there to form a picture when reading,
from start to finish your internal rhyme scheme was working well, considering
the line lengths,it read quite pacey, nice expression there, enjoyable read..peace.


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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".



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