The Last O.G
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=46835
Printed Date: 28 March 2024 at 2:59pm
Topic: The Last O.G
Posted By: Real Hip Hop
Subject: The Last O.G
Date Posted: 16 October 2020 at 3:23pm
I'm Tracy Morgan; my knowledge you'll miss when you're older You're Ikea shit that i fold up make you admit i am colder Uncontrollable unsocial media bitch that's a troller You are a 'Storm' brewing, I'll be the 'Chip' on your shoulder And it doesn't stop at death I'll push at your Wake I'll Eminem your Rule, be the 'Push' to your Drake You're Jared Kush; you're a snake, a George Bush by mistake Go Guerrilla for corrupt cops, some 'Black-ish' for these fakes We-are-long like VietCong, our 'Empires' cause 'Scandals' coz we are strong Fuck this Rudy Giuliani we need a newer Giuliana like Nia Long Fucking Republican, i wouldn't go to the pub with him Can't string 2 sentences together, like Trump; he's mumbling Just like these mumble rappers, this is how trouble happens My 'power's' got these 'dear white people' 'insecure'; shuffling backwards Blacking up coz i'm 'BlackAsFuck' got you 'MaryJanes' backing up 'Grown' like Tyler Perry in 'Atlanta' I'm not acting up
------------- Jay-Z: "I just tackle the subject, the flack of the public/ Nothing!I know real N***** just happen to love it"
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Posted By: AshleyKaos
Date Posted: 16 October 2020 at 11:00pm
I thought that this was really good in term of rhyme scheme and stuff it really went well but I think I might be a little stupid or something because your references in your similes i just don't get what your meanings were in aloy of them I thought that the second half of the post what better than the first. Your best bar was
Fucking Republican, i wouldn't go to the pub with him Can't string 2 sentences together, like Trump; he's mumbling
To me because it rhymes well but this is the bar where the references made sense to me and it was a good clear solid bar.
------------- NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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