yo, tight battle...lemme break this down
Orion First
Robbin' this bitch to demolish him quick "Can't stop the shine" (why?) 'cuz ya crew loves to polish ya dick Didn't like "Cant Stop The Shine" Think you could have connected that to the previous line...but good D/R punch , decent multi..so so as an opener...3.5/5
Only fakes back you, so soon you'll die in a hurry This racist hates Asians (why's that?) 'cuz he was fired from Curry's!
didn't like the fakes back you so you'll die in a hurry connection..poor filler...good personal punch tho coulda done better with setup..3/5 (6.5/10)
Defiant I'm ugly, but I'll leave ya rep in wrecks kid What type-a player goes online for girls an' gets rejected?! (truth)
I like how u continued the rhyme here, type-a was decent..personal so punch was effective...4/5(10.5/15)
An' check this, even my girl got ya clowned If I'M ugly you MUST be worse 'cuz she SHOT YA DOWN! (ahahahaha)
This line was killer, the lead in was concived earlier in the verse, hard hitting bar...Leave out the (ahahaha shit) your gud enuf to not put rookie shit in there...5/5 (15.5/20)
You recycle punchlines and STILL take days to show an' get dropped You constantly shook, so you like soda when you you blow off the top (WHAT!)
liked this bar aswell, again personal...good imagry and connection with the soda...coulda been a lil harder.. 4/5 (19.5/25)
This cock fronts so much he should be an actor Hits so hard I'm bound to Mark Anthony like Cleopatra
Rhyme scheme kinda weak here, but good creativity and name play 4/5 (23.5/30)
I'm about to own this rookie Most ya wins should be in No Man's Land, 'cuz you a bitch an' ya opponent's pussy (get it)
I get it, weak setup....flow was off here...creative punch...3/5 26.5/35
Ya title defenses were free wins, and only luck beat Ice How you gonna claim you a rapper's rapper when you ducked Nee k...twice?!
good personal, simple to the point nothing special...3.5/5(30/40)
Wack from battles to tracks, mangle this cat when beef starts Talk about STEAL BARS but never mentioned TEETH MARKS (OWNED)
tight...nice flow...good word play...SOLID..drop your own commentary though its gay 5/5 (35/45)
I gotta settle the score after you pulled shit for ya titles Don't even front faggot I got cats admittin' they ryde you!!!
decent, another d/r comment, not as clean as the first but a good personal so 3.5/5 (38.5/50)
Admittin' they vote wrong (Yup) I rip through ya soul dude The only shit you've had on lock was threads that dissed an' exposed you!
conept continued from previous bar, coulda been punched better or setup..somethin was off here this coulda been fire but it fell short... 3/5 (41.5/55)
Powertrippin' mod no more but still wit' wack scriptures You getcha way 'cuz Scotty loves you, he prefers the black bitches
I woulda liked to see a better closer and opener overall...seem's like u peaked somewhere in the middle...had some fire lines this was a gud personal I guess at the end but basically ur just calling him a bitch right? Think you coulda been more creative here
3.5 for the personal
45/60 for Orion
Now For Illa
Puttin' the record Striaght, ya personals aint safe If ya girl rejected me, why 'I' got pics of her face? (yuuup holla if u want em)
this shyt had me laughing, it's the kinda opener that makes u wanna read more...puts O's verse into doubt and draws interest to illa's. defenatly the better opener of the battle (4.5/5)
He takes a taste, then I explode he surrenders I put 'JUAN' in an episode, but he too soft To "Contender"(haha)
kept flow well, but i didn't see this as a solid bar, not as funny as u found it...seemed like some played out ish to me contender, hitch all that type of shit is old.. 3/5 (7.5/10)
Exposed who? check last week.. The evidence exposed you Ill never be behind his BARS, SO now he goes to LAW school (Owned)
your comments are worse than his, the law school is a GOOD concept but it doesen't conect well the way you used it...the personal in the setup was good but u already used a bar to say that...shouldn't have carried into another..3.5/5 (11/15)
Ull fall too, See him shiver from the savage Ur only 'Masterplan' that worked, is Jehu's thread for Gay Marriage (HA)
This was creative, rhyming coulda been better with marriage but it was funny..goiod punch 4/5 (15/20)
Vote Perswasion, Im racist to asian.. WHY? This bitch lies cus My EX, MY friend an Uncle are THAI? (fake shit)
STOP WITH THE COMMENTS, fake shit? daym that needed to be cleared up...especially after you wasted a whole bar defending his punch...shoulda used this to punch him rather than block
2/5 (17/25)
I ducked Neek twice, yet another personal is dead U goof..Show La the TRUTH like a fuckin' callout thread
This is the pitfall of going second, instead of spitting about all his personals you shoulda used 1 bar to encompass all of them and make him into a liar...they way you did it, it makes me remember his personals... 2.5/5 (19.5/30)
Undisputed Champ, fag should brush my shoulders off I kno ill win when they see how WACK that Soda shit was (is he foreal?)
sigh...where's your verse? or am I gonna keep hearing a weak comback to a better bar...uncreative poor flipping...2/5 (21.5/35)
Hardcore artist, I ate u AND im still hungry Even da Yanks kno u come from the poshest part of my country (faggot)
This was a good bar, decent punch why not use more bars like this??? 3.5/5 (25/40)
Ya 'cool' usually.. then we battle an u lose it What kinda challenger are u?? U tell me u like my music (huh)
Wayy to basic, seems like you lost all your steam...so/so personal but not close to anything special 2.5/5 (27.5/45)
I koed u months ago, Now the Title im Holdin' See this bitch even LIES in his Signature Slogan (u hav lost?)
Okay check it, this and one more bar about him lying is all you needed, signature slogan is wayy creative I liked this alot 4.5/5 (32/50)
Homo off the NET.. when im makin' the noise Cus U said U blaze 'Relationships'.. In ya Dorm wid yo boys
blah...poor follow up to a good bar.. 2/5 (34/50)
Im a biter? No ill jus break ur neck U tryna cover up why every1 thought u was TEC (BITCH)
I'm sure this was a personal, maybe an alias or something so 3.5/5
37.5/55 Final Score - ILLA
45/60 Final Score for Orion
Bar by Bar Orion was simply better, and when I really broke down ILLA's verse it wasn't nearly impressive....Orion Had the Best two bars of the battle, was more creative...but STOP the comment's after your bars...i mean why the fuck even do that? Orion was more tactfull about it but none the less, why do you need to constantly rep your verse? Ya'll are both good enuf to leave that shit out...
Good Battle To Both.. Props
Orion Gets My Vote
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