Open Mic: Quarantine Sessions

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    Posted: 23 March 2020 at 4:38pm
What better chance to get some creativity on the go and what better way to shake off writer's block than by rapping about rapping lol.


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Am I kicking up the aggression?
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Neek Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 March 2020 at 8:03am
I really enjoyed the flow on this piece. usually I hate a string of suffix rhymes..but you managed to make it work. I think the small dose of vocab helped keep it from being stale. I was trying hard to imagine the beat, cause I could hear the rapid fire precision in the flow and the stress points of structure. very nice showcase piece.


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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Crimson Juice Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 March 2020 at 3:38pm
Neek hit the nail well and truly square with that feed, for me i liked
for a different reason, although it was a self hype piece it had a kind
of difference going for it, it had that coming of age vibe cracking off,
reminded me (very loosely) of The Wonder Years on reading, it had
a reflective nature, sort of a here and now seem within, it felt like you
added a learning of lessons scenario that i thought worked well and
kept it appealing, the word choices i liked also...enjoyable read here
dude, and good to see your back in the fray again...peace.
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goryo long time no see man. ha and speaking of kicking off the dust, i too like to just write about writing cause it like the easiest shit to do plus its usually fun lol. 

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