frank - opener was heat bro, nice personal and good punch, liked the
whole thing man, nice. 2nd bar was ok, wasnt really feelin' it but liked
the personal... 3rd bar was some more heat, nice personal and decent
punch. 4th bar was filler, didnt really feel this one too much here...
5th bar might have been your best one, shit was hot funny ass play there
and it was a good personal and punch, gj... closer was aight, not too
hard but worked, the play was nice and a punch, not a hard punch but ok.
overall, i really liked your verse, you're elevatin' man... but the way
you put your verses together misses rythm a bit, the flow was off...
nox - opener was nice, nicely worded and a good play, not really as much
of a personal as i like in an opener, but still a decent bar. 2nd bar was
nice, good play again and a more direct punch... 3rd bar was niiice,
liked that bar a lot, funny ass play nice punch, nice play. 4th bar was
a hot personal, funny punch again, cept you said "only in deep shit"
when you shoulda incorperated that with him being in deep shit now, but
was still good... 5th bar was creative, but not a hard punch... once
again, nice play... closer was on point, and probably the dagger for
frank...
nice drop, consistant flow and multi's were there, nice plays... coulda
used more personals, tho...
opener: Frank White
closer: noxious
flow: noxious
multi's: noxious
personals: Frank White
punches: Frank White (this was close, both had a few really nice ones,
but im going with frank cuz he came more vicious, they felt harder)
wordplay: noxious (although they were simple and basic, they were more present)
overall enjoyment: noxious
vote: noxious, cuz the flow, semi's line and the closer beat out franks
better personals. good battle guys