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    Posted: 05 October 2019 at 12:11am
Con here on a quick visit, still sick with it
slick witted to kick wicked n rip vicious 
LA is looking frigid, feel the heat my bars emit
bringing fierce fire like an arsonist narcissist
inactivety is pathological, needs straight surgery
hope you're doing well - pardon the fake curtesy
the scene is declining, that seems to be whining
I'll fill the empty corridors of LA like a scene from The Shining

and politics? your views aint refreshing
let me express this
I rather give a leftist left fists 
until all thats left is a granted deathwish
saying shit is too sexist, acting all complacent
while yourself is full of hatred like a racist rapist
today nothing is sacred, worship Satan, it's all right
and the alt right is more cancerous than Walt White
-what you saying Con? 
seems to me youre only on a dissing spree
yeah, basically I disagree with anything that isnt me 

fuck that misery, trickery and bickering all moody
cos whenever Im brooding I find it soothing
to just punch somebody - call it a mood swing
yeah, at this point this verse is getting kinda stupid
truly a horrid show, I guess thats how the story goes
yall still glad to hear Con dropped a verse, sorry, no audios

adiós!
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Loved the flow on This one, plus it was very current and relevant also, i got the
impression you've been lurking behind the scenes watching/waiting, the multi
word/assonance was slick here, (like refined oil), your similies were cool too,in
fact i can't find a fault to hash out or highlight, this was Ripe my man, I also
liked the cold mean vibe that ran through this verse, read kind of callous to me,
good to read your about Con and a real cool verse to announce your still here,
i enjoyed this one got a kick from it,and signing off with adios reminded me of
Snr Perfecto..lol, nice drop dude, very nice indeed....peace.



Ps ppl just remember when posting in OM threads, feedback only..
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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Thanks Crim, good to see you still doing the good work and feeding around here. Let me know if you want some feed for a piece.
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That opener was sick, make a man dizzy with the multies.
Digging the "Empty Corridors of LA" line, props.
Flowed nicely whole way through, the alter ego/talking to yourself bar was a nice touch. Mood swing bar was my favourite.
Shit hot drop man.
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hope you're doing well - pardon the fake curtesy

haha! con da gawd! This was dope man. Your flow still crisp as ever. Seems like it was coming to you mad easy bro. effortless. always a pleasure, brutha


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Yeah this was cool, smooth flow throughout and nice continuous rhyming. I could tell it was written quite quickly almost as if to shake some rust off. Would be interesting to see you write something with a little more substance and meaning rather than a self-hype/fuck you kinda verse. Still enjoyed it though
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Concrete
You be like the sophisticated MC
Always a pleasure to read your stuff
Even when I know you ain’t even try properly I still enjoy

Saying this was dope would definitely be a little fake curtesy...
It was good though

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