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    Posted: 12 September 2008 at 10:59pm
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Edited by Bolo - 12 September 2008 at 11:08pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 September 2008 at 11:01pm
Nep:

Our head to head is 1-0 to me.


fuck the claims that you hear, I KO'ed you, thats straight fact so stay back
I'll slay cats an advance leavin' your plays macked while you remained whack
anyway fag, I know you'll try hard in your five bars, but I know mine have shook ya
You had a nice run but now you've come out of luck, an I'm not talkin' bout them Irish hookers
Can't deny me, fookers - DTK we all know you're not blessed a hero
An' I feel like a naked battler the way I'm gettin' dressed two-Zero
Seriously, I'm the best you fear, though since my inception I've gone hot
you gon' dropped but like snipers, takin' me out is a real long shot
you a worthless child, I'm exertin' style your punches dont hurt me while
gettin' dressed is always first but the outfit finishes in the dirty pile....



DTK:

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*Poppin is a style of dancing..
*Lost to scotty
*Junior gave Nep the crew leader spot when he left assasins then everyone quit
 
 
Neppo,We Know Ya Retro!Son I Cant Loose!
The Only Time Llyod's Got It Poppin Is When Bustin His Dance Moves!*
Im On A Rage Kid,Your The Fakest Ya Got To Stop Me..
But How Could He?Honestly This Herb Even Lost To Scotty!
Yeah Your Gonna Claim You Ko'ed Me Once..But Heres Death Homo
Junior Gave You Crew Leadership..And Then You Were Left Solo!*
Nobody's Feeling Ya,Honestly Kid Ya Text Doesnt Even Have Hope..Potential
You're A 23 Year Old Moderator!?Yeah..Theres Some Dope Credentials (LOL)
So Watch Me Kill His Rap Game..Strip It And Bag It
This Aint The First Time Nep Tried On Dress And Looked Dumb..Faggot
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 September 2008 at 3:19pm

Nep - Weren't feelin the opener, no real punch but nice rhymes. Irish hooker thing was ok. Dressed 2 zero thing was a bit weak.Haha, sniper thing was sick. Closer was an ok concept but i dont think it was worded as well as it could have been. Overall it was an ok verse but i was expecting more...
DTK - LMAO @ the opener. Pretty good. Next bar was a pretty funny personal too. Next bar was meh, as was the next. LMFAO @ the closer. Overall this was quite an impressive verse, as you had 3 pretty strong bars.

Looks like I've underrated DTK...that is, if he can spit like this all the time
He took this (Suprisingly) quite easily. Nep dissapointed me a bit :(

DTK GMV

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 September 2008 at 5:40pm
Nep:
Bar 1: not a punch as much as it is saying what it is you said... and also changed the wording up at the end from present tense to past tense... "remained" should read, "remain."
Bar 2: Decent, not very strong.
Bar 3: An attempt at name play, but it's, "Dress," not "Dressed," right? Doesn't work, imo.
Bar 4: I dunno, man... you ain't comin' with punches, but more of this, "I'm just better than you, and you're not going to beat me," thing... it doesn't work, whether it's true or not... this battle's here to prove it... and you're not proving it.
Bar 5: I concur with Blank on the wording, not your strong point in this battle


DTK:

Bar 1: It's, "Lose," but other than that, the punch was there...
Bar 2: LOL
Bar 3: This was whatever.
Bar 4: Ehh...
Bar 5: LOL

All in all, Dress came correct (dressed correctly?) ...more punches connecting, more entertaining verse...

Mvgt: DTK
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 September 2008 at 6:33pm

aight... here's the breakdown...

nep... opener had good multi's, an' a personal... but wasn't used that effectively... didn't really land... 2nd bar, flow was stretched an' the punch itself was indirect... play was nice... ok at best... 3rd bar was ok... setup was forced to shit tho... 4th bar, wasn't feelin' it... no real punch... closer, as point said earlier, was a good concept used poorly... lands, but not hard...
overall, you had good flow for the most part, an' the multi's were good... but this verse seemed like a major underachievement to me...

dtk... opener was good... punch lands, relevant play... 2nd bar... the setup was horrible, but the punch/ personal hit... ok bar... 3rd bar was nice, well done... pre-empted his shot at you an' then landed a good personal/ punch (all though it HAS been used similarily)... 5th bar was ok... straight forward punch/ personal but the setup was forced... not a hard hit... closer was ok... could've definately been worded better... ok at best...
overall, your flow was pretty nice... you had more punches an' personals... good verse that could've been better wit' better wording... good verse tho, keep it up...

MVGT d2k

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 September 2008 at 6:35pm

typo*

*4th bar, not 5th*
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 September 2008 at 6:45pm
DTK is through...tough luck nep, good verse n thanks showin on time.
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