The 10th Plague: R1) Dressed2Kill vs. Nepenthez |
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Bolo
Standard Member ¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN |
Topic: R1) Dressed2Kill vs. Nepenthez Posted: 12 September 2008 at 10:59pm |
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First to 5 or 3KO Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained Vote swaying will be deleted Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided If you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show (IMPORTANT: If you don't think you will be able to make it, the sooner you make me aware of it, the better, as a reserve will be selected to take your place.) All verses must be in by: Saturday, 20th of September 2008 at 12:00 AM EST (that's Midnight on Friday) Theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent. DO NOT POST YOUR VERSE. PM your verse to me! if you have problems PM'ing it to me, my email address is in my profile. If you have to e-mail your verse, make sure you title of the e-mail reads: "(your username) - Round 1 verse vs. (your opponent)". NO EXCUSES. Votes will last for 1 week from when the verses are posted. If you finish your verse ahead of the deadline, send it to me as soon as possible. Verses will be posted and the battles opened for votes as soon as both verses are received. Edited by Bolo - 12 September 2008 at 11:08pm |
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Bolo
Standard Member ¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN |
Posted: 22 September 2008 at 11:01pm |
Nep:
Our head to head is 1-0 to me. fuck the claims that you hear, I KO'ed you, thats straight fact so stay back I'll slay cats an advance leavin' your plays macked while you remained whack anyway fag, I know you'll try hard in your five bars, but I know mine have shook ya You had a nice run but now you've come out of luck, an I'm not talkin' bout them Irish hookers Can't deny me, fookers - DTK we all know you're not blessed a hero An' I feel like a naked battler the way I'm gettin' dressed two-Zero Seriously, I'm the best you fear, though since my inception I've gone hot you gon' dropped but like snipers, takin' me out is a real long shot you a worthless child, I'm exertin' style your punches dont hurt me while gettin' dressed is always first but the outfit finishes in the dirty pile.... DTK: Expos
*Poppin is a style of dancing..
*Lost to scotty
*Junior gave Nep the crew leader spot when he left assasins then everyone quit
Neppo,We Know Ya Retro!Son I Cant Loose!
The Only Time Llyod's Got It Poppin Is When Bustin His Dance Moves!*
Im On A Rage Kid,Your The Fakest Ya Got To Stop Me..
But How Could He?Honestly This Herb Even Lost To Scotty!
Yeah Your Gonna Claim You Ko'ed Me Once..But Heres Death Homo
Junior Gave You Crew Leadership..And Then You Were Left Solo!*
Nobody's Feeling Ya,Honestly Kid Ya Text Doesnt Even Have Hope..Potential
You're A 23 Year Old Moderator!?Yeah..Theres Some Dope Credentials (LOL)
So Watch Me Kill His Rap Game..Strip It And Bag It
This Aint The First Time Nep Tried On Dress And Looked Dumb..Faggot
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Point Blank
Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
Posted: 23 September 2008 at 3:19pm |
Nep - Weren't feelin the opener, no real punch but nice rhymes. Irish hooker thing was ok. Dressed 2 zero thing was a bit weak.Haha, sniper thing was sick. Closer was an ok concept but i dont think it was worded as well as it could have been. Overall it was an ok verse but i was expecting more... Looks like I've underrated DTK...that is, if he can spit like this all the time DTK GMV |
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Matt The Ripper
Superior Member Joined: 19 March 2008 Location: Cultus Lake, BC Status: Offline Points: 4042 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-40-2 Form: WLLLLL |
Posted: 23 September 2008 at 5:40pm |
Nep:
Bar 1: not a punch as much as it is saying what it is you said... and also changed the wording up at the end from present tense to past tense... "remained" should read, "remain." Bar 2: Decent, not very strong. Bar 3: An attempt at name play, but it's, "Dress," not "Dressed," right? Doesn't work, imo. Bar 4: I dunno, man... you ain't comin' with punches, but more of this, "I'm just better than you, and you're not going to beat me," thing... it doesn't work, whether it's true or not... this battle's here to prove it... and you're not proving it. Bar 5: I concur with Blank on the wording, not your strong point in this battle DTK: Bar 1: It's, "Lose," but other than that, the punch was there... Bar 2: LOL Bar 3: This was whatever. Bar 4: Ehh... Bar 5: LOL All in all, Dress came correct (dressed correctly?) ...more punches connecting, more entertaining verse... Mvgt: DTK |
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2smooth
Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 23 September 2008 at 6:33pm |
aight... here's the breakdown... nep... opener had good multi's, an' a personal... but wasn't used that effectively... didn't really land... 2nd bar, flow was stretched an' the punch itself was indirect... play was nice... ok at best... 3rd bar was ok... setup was forced to shit tho... 4th bar, wasn't feelin' it... no real punch... closer, as point said earlier, was a good concept used poorly... lands, but not hard... dtk... opener was good... punch lands, relevant play... 2nd bar... the setup was horrible, but the punch/ personal hit... ok bar... 3rd bar was nice, well done... pre-empted his shot at you an' then landed a good personal/ punch (all though it HAS been used similarily)... 5th bar was ok... straight forward punch/ personal but the setup was forced... not a hard hit... closer was ok... could've definately been worded better... ok at best... MVGT d2k |
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2smooth
Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 23 September 2008 at 6:35pm |
typo* *4th bar, not 5th*
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Bolo
Standard Member ¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN |
Posted: 23 September 2008 at 6:45pm |
DTK is through...tough luck nep, good verse n thanks showin on time.
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