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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Topic: R1) Game V Mackie Posted: 11 January 2006 at 6:04pm |
10lines max CHECK IN BY FRIDAY!!!!!! OTHERWISE U WILL BE REPLACED
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I-kontinue
Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 11 January 2006 at 7:41pm |
Chec
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Mackie
Standard Member Joined: 20 August 2005 Location: MK Status: Offline Points: 1504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 45-38-4 Form: LLWLNW |
Posted: 13 January 2006 at 4:48pm |
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Mackie
Standard Member Joined: 20 August 2005 Location: MK Status: Offline Points: 1504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 45-38-4 Form: LLWLNW |
Posted: 15 January 2006 at 12:23pm |
clowin tha game like mackieD's owner, im tha second half an its over!!*
bitch, you couldnt be sick if you set your level to eazy-e,** how can a wack - over-rated - played MC, beat an underdogs pedigree, your a pitiful fake, so it really is the death of a dynasty,*** your only shaven so more can ride you, your a lyrical travesty,**** this battles part of satirical mastery, ill box you up an leave you in 2D, losing ya intrests in my fire spit, tired of tha cat n mouse shit, cause the mouse traps ready to drop, i've been hunting bigger game, this bitches names played like tic tac toe, this jus anuva sick mack flow,***** *game- first half... second half - over **eazy e- died of aids... eazy e - easy - game difficulty setting ***death of a dynasty- film about some1 pretendin to be a rapper ****shaven - real name shavaughn *****names played.. game = name - play games |
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Mackie
Standard Member Joined: 20 August 2005 Location: MK Status: Offline Points: 1504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 45-38-4 Form: LLWLNW |
Posted: 15 January 2006 at 12:25pm |
sorry had to post now or i wudnt a been able to make the drop date
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Posted: 16 January 2006 at 5:25pm |
Game??
U still need to drop by wednesday OTHERWISE big OLION is in. |
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I-kontinue
Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 17 January 2006 at 10:02am |
Vs Mackie
*Yall only need to notice 1 thing for this verse...Fifty Cent kicked The Game outta G unit...he's number 45/50 in the text battle rankings While I write ma raps, its like I'm balancin cats You in that range. Flow is eh...between average and wack Ya punches land- but not hard. You cant damage wit taps! This is bug tryna beat a bird wit savage attacks (useless) I dont usually swear, but is Mackie retarded? 'Cus even peeps like Frank White wasn't that wack when he started Knock me ya hardest, and you wont land a hit He a trans or shit? ...Well, tell me how this man's a bitch (ha) Annnnnd, that's it. I clipped ya ass wit' optional pity Funny shit how I'M GAME...but you droppin from 50* vote up. |
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12327 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 17 January 2006 at 10:11am |
Game took this with more advanced flow and use of rhythm....tho a cuple of stupid things that he did were as follows:
"Ya punches land- but not hard" "Knock me ya hardest, and you wont land a hit" ^^^ contradictin ya own diss is not smart "but you droppin from 50*" ^^^ These battles dont count to the score so it's impossible for you to drop him from the rankings, and thats even before you consider how bad some peoples records are on the site... But the rest of your stuff was cool and consistant, Mackman, u shudda taken more time over this one, seemed like you just key'd it up, had some good potential, i liked the cat and mouse then the mouse trap idea but you cudda made that much sharper than you did, and you really need to watch ya rhyme scheme, I'd suggest either rhymin more in the lines so the switches dont hurt you so bad or just rhymin more conventionally, coz this one wasnt very good rhymically in places at all, some nice punches but really you do need to land harder with them like Game said, ya seem to be more concerned with throwin jabs all over the place rather than buildin up too more solid punch/diss combos Vote - Game |
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2smooth
Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 17 January 2006 at 12:48pm |
I dont usually swear, but is Mackie retarded? ^^ killed it by itself, lmfao... anywho... ice pretty much said it all... game had the better punches and flow... took it hands down IMO vote: game |
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Point Blank
Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
Posted: 17 January 2006 at 1:41pm |
Game :Hot Punches And Multies Flowed Nicely,But As 2smooth Said U Killed It With That Frank White Punch!HAha
Mackie : I Feel You Didnt Put Much Effort Into Your Verse Considerin The Circumstances.Flowed Nice, Except The First Line, I Was Like WTF? 'Over' And 'Eazy - E' Dont Rhyme, But Then Had To Read Over To Realise That You Rhymed Two Words In The First Line.Dont Do That Anymore, It Loses The Flow Horribly And Is Then Hard To Follow The Rest Of The Verse.Nice Try Though Vote : Game |
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Posted: 18 January 2006 at 12:34pm |
GAMES thRu KO |
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