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    Posted: 30 December 2004 at 6:38am
  • First to 5 EXPLAINED votes wins (explanations to be judged by me), 3-0 is a KO
  • all verses are 4 bars each person, (so a total of 8bars each team)
  • Crew votes will not be allowed when a team consist of members from the same crew
  • No Flips/feeding - since its blind drops
  • Posting Verses: see Tournament Rules to find out how to submit your verse
  • Votes: Votes must be judged on the team as a whole, if you feel one member wasnt as good, this must reflect your vote.
  • Deadline: Wendesday 5th January 2005 12 midnight (GMT)
Team A = -Orion- & King Jehu
Team B = Tequila Sunrise & ILLA


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 January 2005 at 6:06am
Team A = -Orion- & King Jehu
-Orion-

You both know most that O an' Jehu's raps're savage
Why's Teq in a crew he said were TOO WACK TO TAG WITH?! (lol... tru story)
Renegades, you faggots grab ya bollocks an' honour us
I'm puttin' down Tequila like this was Alcoholics Anonymous
ILLA too wack for Renegades; ya fear cursed this mayne (din't wanna face us)
You w(h)ine all the time but you gettin' much worse wit' age
You faggots know I'm sickest, just remember you pussy, son
ILLA wants a tourny win, shoulda asked TO ENTER THE ROOKIE ONE!!!

King Jehu

Sorry, I've been so busy I don't have time to take a fucking piss anymore. Anyway, here it is.

I'll wet you and bring the heat, you know you flow wack
So I'll call you niggas laundry and fold you both back
Cause O. and J. stab bitches like Simpson did
Whether it's TeC or TeQ, My Text will skin this kid
Expose you like I'm supposed to... I will wreck both
Illa was murked by Frank white, but he still gets votes!

Tequila nice? you must be loco
Illa's grown up with LA but I'll un-Root him like Black Thought going solo!

Team B = Tequila Sunrise & ILLA
ILLA:

Jehu couldnt come wid BIG PUNs, if they were buried in the ground//O vs I again.. he out in the first round cus '0' aint nothing except zero pounds*// (brrrrt)

DAMN onion u aint 'bossin shit! cus like a "bullemic" rappa im 'flossin sick'//I koed ice-c he dissed, but he had u runnin' fo "cover" like Eazy's dick//*

This is Tyson-shit i fight for fame, so like this rich kid's sig, i'll strike his name//Cambridge aint hood Y u actin' strange??! on real blocks U'd be "froze" like David blane//*

What?!? filla multies an bitin' chino's rhymes, u aint real bitches like pacino's lines//TEQ an ILL sick wid it we masterminds, only time these guys [conquer/conker] is at dinner time!//

explan
Jehu big puns he idol, i knocked orion outta a first round before
Eazy E had dies ov aids, peeps say O didnt want it wid ICE-c
Check his sig, lives in cambridge and david blane got froze in ice
U remember playin conkers in autumn lol

Tequila Sunrise:

BEAT: XZIBIT - MOTHERFUCKER

Your a mere queer, i fear youll go nowhere with your rhymes
   No its not my M.O. although ill hit a guy wit four eyes*
Dont try the sunrise, hey "J" im not that PUN guy*
So get the fuck off his punchlines, and let his nuts dry
OOOHH...HERE WE GO!
Lets get it poppin, youd think im pourin cheerios cuz O is droppin
  Illas gettin pics of his bitch and O is knowin nothin of it*
The pain ill leave is too much for any amount of IbuProFen*
   Last time anyone took "O.J" seriously, he won a heisman trophy*

THE EXPLANATIONS:
*King Jehu got glasses...4 eyes
*hes a huge Big Pun fan
*Illa supposedly received pictures from Os girlfriend
*Ibuprofen aka advil
*O. J won a heisman...Orion and Jehu
   

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 January 2005 at 8:23am

Right Battle Was Niiiiice..

Orion/Jehu

You both know most that O an' Jehu's raps're savage
Why's Teq in a crew he said were TOO WACK TO TAG WITH?! (lol... tru story
First Line was a Filler but most Openers are..Second Line (if its True) was a killer Personal And a real nice line..(however Teq u a fag if u sed that)

Renegades, you faggots grab ya bollocks an' honour us
I'm puttin' down Tequila like this was Alcoholics Anonymous
First line was Ok..Nuthin hard hittin Just Layed up the Second Line..which was pritty nice aswell The Aloholic Line is Played 2 me now as a few people sed it on stage 3 to him but nice way of wording it

ILLA too wack for Renegades; ya fear cursed this mayne (din't wanna face us)
You w(h)ine all the time but you gettin' much worse wit' age
Haha This was Nice..Personals Were Killer..Second Line was Nice aswell Creative shit props

You faggots know I'm sickest, just remember you pussy, son
ILLA wants a tourny win, shoulda asked TO ENTER THE ROOKIE ONE!!!

First Line Again was Ok Bit of a Filler to T-Up the Outro..Last line was SICK Hit hard as  fuck lol Humor on this aswell which made it sick Props

Jehu

Sorry, I've been so busy I don't have time to take a fucking piss anymore. Anyway, here it is.

I'll wet you and bring the heat, you know you flow wack
So I'll call you niggas laundry and fold you both back
First line was Kinda Weak..Didnt hit hard..jus opened the Verse up..Second line was nice..the Aspect is played but you worded it nicely props

Cause O. and J. stab bitches like Simpson did
Whether it's TeC or TeQ, My Text will skin this kid
DAMN OJ lines are Dead n Buried now haha Sorry man..Second line was nice and Creative PRops on that shit

Expose you like I'm supposed to... I will wreck both
Illa was murked by Frank white, but he still gets votes!
First line was a filler but T-up the Second with Class lol..Nice Personal and Punch with added Humor Real Nice

Tequila nice? you must be loco
Illa's grown up with LA but I'll un-Root him like Black Thought going solo!

Damn this was a Nice Way to End your Verse man the Creative side was nice and it hit hard props

Overall you both came Sick with it..Flows were Dope..Nice punchlines and both verses came nice with Creativity..


ILLA

Jehu couldnt come wid BIG PUNs, if they were buried in the ground//O vs I again.. he out in the first round cus '0' aint nothing except zero pounds*// (brrrrt)
Kinda Weak the Punch was There but Didnt Really Hit as hard as it could of..

DAMN onion u aint 'bossin shit! cus like a "bullemic" rappa im 'flossin sick'//I koed ice-c he dissed, but he had u runnin' fo "cover" like Eazy's dick//*
Bullemic Line is Played like shit...Eazy's Dick i havent hurd before and it was pritty nice line props

This is Tyson-shit i fight for fame, so like this rich kid's sig, i'll strike his name//Cambridge aint hood Y u actin' strange??! on real blocks U'd be "froze" like David blane//*
haha First line line was Nice very Creative..second line was even better it had a nice punch and a nice personal with a Creative sense props man

What?!? filla multies an bitin' chino's rhymes, u aint real bitches like pacino's lines//TEQ an ILL sick wid it we masterminds, only time these guys [conquer/conker] is at dinner time!//
Haha First line was ok nice Creative punch..Second line was Dope Conker shit was Nice man lol props

Tequila Sunrise.

Your a mere queer, i fear youll go nowhere with your rhymes
   No its not my M.O. although ill hit a guy wit four eyes*
First line was ok Nuthin amazin...Second line was hot Punch was dope and creative.

Dont try the sunrise, hey "J" im not that PUN guy*
So get the fuck off his punchlines, and let his nuts dry
i've already Read a Big Pun line lol but this 1 aint bad..Second line was nice Punch was ok

Lets get it poppin, youd think im pourin cheerios cuz O is droppin
  Illas gettin pics of his bitch and O is knowin nothin of it*
First line was Nice Punch was cool..Creative...second line was nice haha Personal was Cool..Punch was nice Props

The pain ill leave is too much for any amount of IbuProFen*
   Last time anyone took "O.J" seriously, he won a heisman trophy*
First line Was ok Punch was decent nuthin Eyecatching..Second Line was DOPE Personal/Creative and a Nice ass punchline PRops on that outro.

Overall..U Came Solid with this Shit the Flows were Sick..Nice personals And Punchlines Very Nice battle u handed out props

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Now as a TagTeam Battle i have 2 Decided Who came better as a Team..

Punchlines...O & J
Personals...T & I
Humor...O & J
Flow..Tie.
Enjoyment...T & I
Creative..O & J
Consistancy..O & J
Team Feedin..X

Overall....Orion and Jehu take my vote they came very nice Together as a Team..Illa and Teq also came nice Just O n J overpowered certain aspects of this battle..Very close In order of verses i wudda had

Orion
Teq
Jehu
Illa


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 January 2005 at 11:48am

Orion and Jewho... short verses and similar styles didn't give either of you much room to display your typical lyrical flair...  Both had some good personals... but whilst Jewho directed more punches towards their opponents... Orion sacrificed attacking in favour of lyrical boasts...

tequila sunrise and illa... one of you had good punches but simple rhymes... and the other had good rhymes with constant but inconsistent punches...  It doesn't seem like you knew what each other was doing... as you both used Pun-lines...  Hence the spits look like you're simply taking turns to diss both your opponents regardless of who your partner is...

Funny how Jewho and tequila both came up with the O.J.-line... though tequila's was better...  In the end... neither team came together as well as a Tag-Team should have...

Vote: tequila sunrise and illa...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 January 2005 at 12:37pm

I'm the same as SP in the respect I thought you should have worked togetha better as a team...I thought Orion's verse was poor, consisted of a couple of plays I didnt like that much (Tequila bin done b4 and the whine was simple but still worked ok)...opener was more of a punch on him than the actual tag team...coz u were biggin up your crew basically and ILLA is in it, worked ok genst Teq but kinda weak in the context...closer was good but still singularly directed....Jehu was basically the same, I was feelin the closer and the laundry play but the verse wasnt aggressive enuf fa me...your styles didnt work well togetha, kinda too similar fa me

Illa and Teq, it was left open for you...teams need to show a greater sense of cohesion in this...othawise wahs the point in havin a tag battle, may as well jus have a regular tourney...you both came personal, ILLA more wit punches, Teq more wit plays off them but yeh, u should have probably came harder than this but I stilled liked how to some extent your styles were more original than your opponents...

I could go eitha way on this...if it was in terms of OvsI n JvsT then id prolly give this to OnJ since they had better verses individually, but then agen its a tag tournament and I should be votin on terms of the tag as a whole, and while OnJ had individual verses thats wah they were...your styles were too similar for a tag battle and I didnt like that...I didnt think InT had particular good verses but there styles were more dis-similar and it worked better as a unit than there opponents...so yeh, ima give it to Illa n Tequila

Vote - I&T

(Dont copy my vote if you decidin on punches, coz O&J prolly had the better punches individually)

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 January 2005 at 12:42pm
Team A = -Orion- & King Jehu
-Orion-

You both know most that O an' Jehu's raps're savage
Why's Teq in a crew he said were TOO WACK TO TAG WITH?!
 
^^ flow was on point, nice multie, ok personal/punch

Renegades, you faggots grab ya bollocks an' honour us
I'm puttin' down Tequila like this was Alcoholics Anonymous
 
^^nice punch, flow was tight

ILLA too wack for Renegades; ya fear cursed this mayne (din't wanna face us)
You w(h)ine all the time but you gettin' much worse wit' age
 
^^punch was decent didnt feel the last rhyme tho, flow was good.

You faggots know I'm sickest, just remember you pussy, son
ILLA wants a tourny win, shoulda asked TO ENTER THE ROOKIE ONE!!!
 
^^good closer, decent punch and tight flow

King Jehu

Sorry, I've been so busy I don't have time to take a fucking piss anymore. Anyway, here it is.

I'll wet you and bring the heat, you know you flow wack
So I'll call you niggas laundry and fold you both back
 
^^good wordplay/meta, nice multie and flow

Cause O. and J. stab bitches like Simpson did
Whether it's TeC or TeQ, My Text will skin this kid
 
^^ok punch, flow was tight

Expose you like I'm supposed to... I will wreck both
Illa was murked by Frank white, but he still gets votes!
 
^^decent punch, good flow

Tequila nice? you must be loco
Illa's grown up with LA but I'll un-Root him like Black Thought going solo!
 
^^ hella tight closer, props.


Team B = Tequila Sunrise & ILLA
ILLA:

Jehu couldnt come wid BIG PUNs, if they were buried in the ground//O vs I again.. he out in the first round cus '0' aint nothing except zero pounds*// (brrrrt)
 
^^flow was dope, punch was ok but it seemed like u over complicated it tryna hit at both in the same bar.

DAMN onion u aint 'bossin shit! cus like a "bullemic" rappa im 'flossin sick'//I koed ice-c he dissed, but he had u runnin' fo "cover" like Eazy's dick//*
 
^^first line was tight, second was aite but kinda missed.

This is Tyson-shit i fight for fame, so like this rich kid's sig, i'll strike his name//Cambridge aint hood Y u actin' strange??! on real blocks U'd be "froze" like David blane//*
 
^^fuckin dope bar, great flow and punch

What?!? filla multies an bitin' chino's rhymes, u aint real bitches like pacino's lines//TEQ an ILL sick wid it we masterminds, only time these guys [conquer/conker] is at dinner time!/
 
^^pretty weak closer, flow was dope but the punch was pretty weak.

Tequila Sunrise:

BEAT: XZIBIT - MOTHERFUCKER

Your a mere queer, i fear youll go nowhere with your rhymes
   No its not my M.O. although ill hit a guy wit four eyes*
 
^^flow was tight, punch was funny but coulda been more direct

Dont try the sunrise, hey "J" im not that PUN guy*
So get the fuck off his punchlines, and let his nuts dry
 
^^flow seemed off in the second line, punch was again funny but coulda come harder

OOOHH...HERE WE GO!
Lets get it poppin, youd think im pourin cheerios cuz O is droppin
  Illas gettin pics of his bitch and O is knowin nothin of it*
 
^^nice flow, kinda bitchy punch, but it hit well

The pain ill leave is too much for any amount of IbuProFen*
   Last time anyone took "O.J" seriously, he won a heisman trophy*
 
^^not bad, coulda come harder for a closer tho.
 
punches: OJ, came more direct and had more personals
humour: IT, tequila killed this category
flow:tie, although OJ were tighter than Teq, Illa had the best flow of the bunch.
wordplay: OJ, jehu had it
creativity:OJ, seemed to have more original punches
 
overall i gotta give it to OJ i just think they edged out with more polished rhymes, althouh Illa definately had the best bar of the battle in my opinion.
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 January 2005 at 2:48pm
2-2...thanx for the votes...although, i dont understand how my first punch could have come more direct
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 January 2005 at 4:12pm

The Juice - u both came wit ya usual clever shit, n despite wut ice n sp have said i think it came together well...too well...it almost meshed into a single verse, making the lines almost redundant...that aside, y'all had better flow, better wordplay (as a whole), y'all had nice closers, o had nice personals...O had the better verse out of the two of u, n i think out of the whole battle

T.I - ur verses, while somewhat repetitive, each had their own style, and i liked that...flow wuz ok (though off in places), teq had nice plays...y'all had nice personals aswell...punches were good...teq had the better verse...

Flow: The Juice
Humour: T.I
Wordplay: The Juice
Punches: Tie
Cleverness: The Juice
Personals: T.I
Use of Tag Team: T.I

Vote - damn...^that didn't help, lol...my vote goes to T.I because of their use of the tag team format, which is really the biggest challenge as its not something we do everyday...nice battle

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 January 2005 at 4:35pm

you cant vote man...no crew votes...

 

but then again, illa isnt ur crew...this is up to scotty...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 January 2005 at 4:51pm
umm...O asked me to vote, n i think scotty said crew votes r allowed as long as both of u aren't in the same crew...besides i always vote fair...but yea, its up to scotty...
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