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    Posted: 13 December 2007 at 11:17am

Round One - 10 lines
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Edited by 2smooth - 14 December 2007 at 1:19pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:14pm
nobody fuckin' with the kid.....
 
 
If this sucker ass is lyrical his tons of fat is minuscule
Keep beating on them drums till your muscle mass is visible
Lose a couple pounds, fitting in bubble baths is difficult
No scale could ever hold you, you need something that is digital
And if he's tryna be black, take him away then
'Cause crossin' the finish line first is the only time I'll make it a race thing
It's not like you move weight, but on the forum you the kilo don
Walking 'round with a goatee like the storage of a weave salon
Enormous, not gorgeous, in the morgue is where your meat belongs
And keep ya thoughts to ya self 'fore they morph in to a needless song

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 January 2008 at 6:23am
Sparta:


Ain't no-one surprised that this chump's gone missing
Entered then pussied out TWICE, who the fuck's he kidding
Yeah, I'm above anything you've ever written, sucker
This the kid that gets upstaged on his tracks by his little brother
You tryna act gangster, but you ain't fooling me, rookie
You couldn't throw up Maryland eating too many cookies
When I'm done beating you down boy, I won't neglect your team
Cos when I'm done with 'em LA'll be searching for Asylum like they refugees
This punk wimped out again, he knew he wouldn't win this time
Only time he'll ever be at the top of LA's Scotty's skin design...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 January 2008 at 6:25am
it wasnt a verse against g pfeif, it was a verse against chain...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 January 2008 at 6:26am
Originally posted by mcwoods mcwoods wrote:

it wasnt a verse against g pfeif, it was a verse against chain...


yes, well done woodsie, you noticed. Ermm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 January 2008 at 6:27am
lol, how do we vote then?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 January 2008 at 6:31am
well.... chain did a pfeif diss, and sparta did a pfeif diss...... work it out
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 January 2008 at 9:10pm
This was pretty one sided here....
 
Chain had the great flowin verse...some funny lines too...but the fat jokes jus got repetitive and the punches themselves werent cleverly done...it was more like an open mic diss instead of a battle verse...
 
Sparta: nice verse, flow wasnt as good as chains the punches were hands down better...opener pretty much took this...asylum was nice and the closer coulda been dope but the wording is fucked...
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 January 2008 at 6:46pm
upping, lets get this moving
Не все потеряно пока...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 January 2008 at 7:49pm
Both verses were nice to read... Only thing is I felt is that Chain's verse was too one-dimensional in comparison with sparta's. sparta brought a bunch of different personals along with chain's main one which is that pfeif is fat. sparta also mixed it up in his finisher with wordplay use... jus felt like he hit pfeif in more areas than chain did...

v/sparta
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 January 2008 at 7:53pm
yeah agreed

chain - verse was real nice to read, but wasnt a realy solid battle verse, plays were kinda the same, nothing really hard hitting or real personal. but nice flow and multis, just jabs really

sparta - came more professional, harder more varied punches and personals, which makes for a more netertaining read, and trumps over flow and multis 

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 January 2008 at 1:05pm
3-0 KO Sparta's thru to next round.
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