Vengeance: R1-B1) chain vs. sparta |
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2smooth
Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Topic: R1-B1) chain vs. sparta Posted: 13 December 2007 at 11:17am |
Round One - 10 lines first to 4 votes or 3-0 = KO
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Edited by 2smooth - 14 December 2007 at 1:19pm |
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CHAIN
Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:14pm |
nobody fuckin' with the kid.....
If this sucker ass is lyrical his tons of fat is minuscule
Keep beating on them drums till your muscle mass is visible
Lose a couple pounds, fitting in bubble baths is difficult
No scale could ever hold you, you need something that is digital
And if he's tryna be black, take him away then
'Cause crossin' the finish line first is the only time I'll make it a race thing
It's not like you move weight, but on the forum you the kilo don
Walking 'round with a goatee like the storage of a weave salon
Enormous, not gorgeous, in the morgue is where your meat belongs
And keep ya thoughts to ya self 'fore they morph in to a needless song
....STOP RECORDING! |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 02 January 2008 at 6:23am |
Sparta:
Ain't no-one surprised that this chump's gone missing Entered then pussied out TWICE, who the fuck's he kidding Yeah, I'm above anything you've ever written, sucker This the kid that gets upstaged on his tracks by his little brother You tryna act gangster, but you ain't fooling me, rookie You couldn't throw up Maryland eating too many cookies When I'm done beating you down boy, I won't neglect your team Cos when I'm done with 'em LA'll be searching for Asylum like they refugees This punk wimped out again, he knew he wouldn't win this time Only time he'll ever be at the top of LA's Scotty's skin design... |
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mcwoods
Superior Member Joined: 04 December 2006 Status: Offline Points: 4204 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 42-51-0 Form: LLLLWW |
Posted: 02 January 2008 at 6:25am |
it wasnt a verse against g pfeif, it was a verse against chain...
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 02 January 2008 at 6:26am |
yes, well done woodsie, you noticed. |
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mcwoods
Superior Member Joined: 04 December 2006 Status: Offline Points: 4204 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 42-51-0 Form: LLLLWW |
Posted: 02 January 2008 at 6:27am |
lol, how do we vote then?
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 02 January 2008 at 6:31am |
well.... chain did a pfeif diss, and sparta did a pfeif diss...... work it out
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Fatal
Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 02 January 2008 at 9:10pm |
This was pretty one sided here....
Chain had the great flowin verse...some funny lines too...but the fat jokes jus got repetitive and the punches themselves werent cleverly done...it was more like an open mic diss instead of a battle verse...
Sparta: nice verse, flow wasnt as good as chains the punches were hands down better...opener pretty much took this...asylum was nice and the closer coulda been dope but the wording is fucked...
Vote: Sparta
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sparta
Standard Member ..Палач.. Joined: 20 June 2006 Location: Volgograd, RUS Status: Offline Points: 2401 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-13-2 Form: LWWLLL |
Posted: 03 January 2008 at 6:46pm |
upping, lets get this moving
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I-kontinue
Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 03 January 2008 at 7:49pm |
Both verses were nice to read... Only thing is I felt is that Chain's verse was too one-dimensional in comparison with sparta's. sparta brought a bunch of different personals along with chain's main one which is that pfeif is fat. sparta also mixed it up in his finisher with wordplay use... jus felt like he hit pfeif in more areas than chain did...
v/sparta |
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mcwoods
Superior Member Joined: 04 December 2006 Status: Offline Points: 4204 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 42-51-0 Form: LLLLWW |
Posted: 03 January 2008 at 7:53pm |
yeah agreed
chain - verse was real nice to read, but wasnt a realy solid battle verse, plays were kinda the same, nothing really hard hitting or real personal. but nice flow and multis, just jabs really sparta - came more professional, harder more varied punches and personals, which makes for a more netertaining read, and trumps over flow and multis v/ sparta |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 14 January 2008 at 1:05pm |
3-0 KO Sparta's thru to next round.
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