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Form: WWWWNW 		Direct Link To This Post Topic: R1-B2) dalinquent vs. masta p
    Posted: 13 December 2007 at 11:18am

Round One - 10 lines
No Biting, Recycling, Feeding OR Flipping

first to 4 votes or 3-0 = KO
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Edited by 2smooth - 14 December 2007 at 1:19pm
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Form: LLLLNN 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 December 2007 at 11:03pm
 

*unstoppable is his latest track

**DAL TONES= dial tones

***in some of his battles (i.e. ice n woods), he uses played out shit

****his beat, most of them are commented by others as bein wack

 

 

Check it Dal,

u inspire dopeness? bitch u only shine when u got on GOLD STUDS

cuz da only time a daliquent's hit jackpot is when he on da DOLL-BLUDGE

so hold up and

stop braggin on unstoppable* that u got a bitch HOPPED N SPOONED

yo hook sounds so retarded, its like u naturally CHOPPED N SCREWED

and fool

 call me a pimp, fuckin bitches till they be screamin WILD MOANS

but when u bangin chicks, da only sounds u hearin r DAL TONES**

and hoe, Ill fuck u till u respect meu cant duck itso TRUST IT

delinquents be fuckin wit da law as much as his played shit*** doin JUSTICE

and that's never

closer

geek dont try an fight me, in da tourny u about to be ticked of like NIKE

cuz yo beats**** be similar to adventure games-u aint never finding da right KEY

U JUST ALL HYPE G

 

 

 

 
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Form: WLLLWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:37pm
FYI:  If ya dont get it, dont vote...see ya in round 2 :)

Masta P smashing me? Please, I'll break ya face son...
Fitting ya chose ya name...Cause my punchline'll make ya say uhhhh
You facing the great one, So look bitch, you'll get hoed
And I'll fuck ya world up, Like sticking my dick in a globe
I'll shit on you bro, How the fuck ya think ya can touch this
Kid, Ya blatantly weak...Bitch don't even know what a punch is
Ya dumb bitch, You ain't a big shot, I got this shit locked
I'll flip ya, Then get rid of p.m.'s ass like clearin` my inbox
Look little bitch, stop...You don't stand a chance when facing me
Ain't no reason to fearMasta, 'Specially since they abolished slavery
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Form: WWLWNL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:44pm
lmao at dals closer...
P: dont try so hard to put multis in there, shit looks maddddd fored, really fucked up the verse. some of it didnt even make sense.. whats hopped and spooned mean N E way? the punches u got wern't all 2 hard hiting anyway.
DAL: Better plays than P, name plays, globe was nice. natural multis made it more ...fluent. loved your closer, shit was funny.
DAL GMV

masta, i reccomend readin tutorails if your still confused of y i thought your multis were forced
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Form: LWWLLL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 7:04pm
Dalinquent's got it...he had some good personal hits (2nd, 6th, closer) and laced it together with genericity well enough to prevent the verse becoming unbalanced...Masta, dal tones was your only personal hit and it was pretty lame, the rest of your punches rhymed nicely enough but just didnt hit him with the amount of hardness needed for a tourney battle

v. dal
Не все потеряно пока...
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Form: LLLLWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 7:10pm
yeah vote dal

dal - globe was nice, pm's was decent, closer nice, more solid harder hits, punch is, was good aswell, most bars were solid without being KO's, flow was nice and rhyming worked well too

masta p - dal tones thought was pretty funny, but that was as good as it got, rhyming good, but no real hard punches, or personals or anything that made me think "shit", needed to come harder and more personal, which you didnt

vote - dal
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Form: WLLWLL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2007 at 6:29am
(as smooth hasnt been on since Weds)

Closed - 3KO Dal goes thru
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