Textual Torture: R1-B2) U.N.L.M vs Dalinquent

ok

hangings dropped out for personal reasons, so U.N.L.M is taking over as first reserve.

deadline has been extended to Friday 31st 23:59 GMT

Gonna break this down cos on first skim it seems pretty close

UNLM

I need to vent cause i'm mad, and give him played looks
While i'll be staying 'erasing D' like mistakes in gradebooks
Had a lot of potential, but you worked it okay...3/5
You need paid hooks cause face it you just a loan sap
And it turns sad when you get better feed when you don't rap
Again, pretty nice, nothing hard tho 3/5
Your in a trap, won't beat me when he's late to 'Rip' to death**
And Like "signaling to turn in cars", Dal went 'down' since he 'left'***
Lol, nice idea...setup was good too 4/5
I bet he come wack cause i'm an ama in 6 month on the net
While this kid only faggot here 3 years and not close to pro yet
This has been done before on various people, but its a valid personal...3/5
Or even a threat and you'll need alot of help with heavy sway
Since like I'm in an Indian house, i'm used to 'eatin up dal' everyday
Lol! Really nice hit...4.5/5
Wait! how the fuck he talkin bout site battlin n' thinkin he's tight
Cause this Ama thinking he pro isn't even top 30 on the site
Played, but hits 3/5
You won't even put up a fight cause i won't stop hittin you once
And makin the thread only time you'll be in with Mc of the Month
Poor closer, not worded very well 2.5/5

Dalinquent

U winning, Forget it cause battling me , You’ll quickly regret it
Didn’t make the list when only 10 heads active, Damn Bitch your pathetic
Again, as with UN's one...quite played but worked slicker 3.5/5
This shit is upsetting…I hoped for more of a challenge…
I’m dropping this bloomer like I tore a fucking hole in ya Gallus
Pretty good, original hit...3.5/5
Voters know who’s the baddest, You’ll get abused by my art
I couldn't see you landing a punch like Pfeif losing to smart
Not liking this...irrelevent 2/5
You truly a `tard, I’m unharmed by this silly rook and his diss
I’ll twist ya name to show this no game, I’ll really put ya in Risk
Nice, works on a few levels 4/5
Look at this bitch, Man, My flow is a weapon…
Cause unlike you, It attacks, While U.N. just oppose the aggression
This was nicely done too, clever play 4/5
I control adolescents, Like commercial subliminals
And rip wrappers, Kinda like orphans on Christmas do
Nothing more than bigups, and one played one at that 2/5
Should have ducked me in text like liquid do, You should of known
…That Dal will leave ya ass like ya MSN addy…Full of holes
Not bad, but I dropped a similar one on him before 3/5

UNLM- 26
Dalinquent- 22


Looks like UNLM's got this...in summation, Dal had a pretty inconsistent verse, some real nice bars and a couple of poor ones, UN kept it consistent throughout

v. UNLM

upping for some votes

UNLM wins by 3-0 KO and goes thru