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    Posted: 05 June 2005 at 10:39am
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 June 2005 at 10:44am
Check in deadline is 11th of may?

*Warps himself back a month*

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 June 2005 at 10:57am
urr wot do you mean may? 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 June 2005 at 5:22am

15th june...cool

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 June 2005 at 6:05pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 June 2005 at 6:19pm
Nice Drop Law
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 June 2005 at 6:39pm
Lawless..Beat is cool..not sumthin id use but its str8...flow is cool..Breath control has Nice but a couple times u took an Odd pause n shit..Delivery was ok Same tone of voise throughout..Emotion is pritty nice tho...Lyrics are Str8...Scarface clips were Ass tho lol didnt seem to Fit the track..

Overall..7/10 not a bad track seen u spit better

Xrayotic..Beat is nice u make it??...flow is cool on point n kept it consistant..Emotion is cool ket it nice for a Battle track..Delivery was str8 kept that nice..Lyrics were cool..couple nice lines man..First time i hurd u spit

Overall..7.5/10

Battle was Close imo

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 June 2005 at 11:03am
I can't vote this seein as Law is in my crew but how are you gona say that X-ray had better lyrics than Law, pfffffft
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 June 2005 at 11:23am
^word... Law had some ill wordplay. Xray had a different flow, but he didn't attack his opponent like he was supposed to. The delivery and flow woulda been hot for a song, but for a battle, it kinda lacked the intensity. Punches were good in both, but Law kinda got me with the wordplay used for the punches... X Ray, you shocked me with this. Good work. Law, you brought nicer punchlines in my opinion...



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 June 2005 at 7:22pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 June 2005 at 7:38pm
man, an opinion is "i prefered how xray was more straight to the point with his punchlines", sayin that laws lyrics weren't as good as xrays is jus factually false...unless u takin into account how the lyrics flowed and were delivered but then why did u mention those separately?? And where did u get the points for 7 and 7.5 outa 10? I wudnt even make a fuss over it but its just stupid...goin thru sayin this is ok and that was nice doesnt even form a fully explained vote, if ya went and sed "i thought xray won doesnt he sounded better and thought he had a more complete package than law" then ok, but ya vote is jus gay...not that i have anythin agenst xray coz i actually liked his track but im tired of seein the same old bullshit votes, ya cudda jus sed "i liked xrays better because...." and that wudda been fine, but no, ya had to go and do a stupid vote and then get called out for it, dam people, y do u do this all the fukin time

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 June 2005 at 7:38am
Ice C i know what your saying..to actualy tell you the truth even i liked lawless's track but just chill it's a vote yeahnamean..but why are manz stalin to vote
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 June 2005 at 8:57am

am liken lawless drop alot punchlines wer heavy as fuk as wer levi's very close on yer punches between yer too close for me ta call, both cats had serious wordplay 2 , only fing tht i didnt really like about lawless drop is his accent , n this is an opinion i aint sayin ur flow is shit its gud but the accent is sloppy half yankie/uk  that is my only flop on ur drop n levi is sik am liken everythin about thsi dude flow.style,lines i think u cud win this tourny if he sticks ta more battle style beats n dat.

vote: xray close to call jus hu i was feelin the most..

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 June 2005 at 9:00am
Cool beats from both, props on x making his own.Both had decent flow, tho i felt lawless had better punchlines its close as fuck. im jus guna vote on whos i preferred.. which is xrayotic

Vote:x ray

good battle both..
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 June 2005 at 7:37am

Battle of the first round... X-Ray had nice flow, he a natural on the mic and he got natural rhythm... lyrically I liked ya style, I mean verse of the first round is Phatal right, he ain't use many standard punchlines, whatever ya technique is, or method of offence, you gotta perfect it... Good flow n' delivery and some clever ideas and good use of vocab... pretty strong... Lawless doesn't sound as natural/comfortable as X-Ray which does lose him points but he comes strong an' confident with his delivery on this which does make the punchlines that much more effective... Punchlines were mostly witty but effective, cocky stuff... Where X-Ray had some maybe cheesy lyrics about his girl Lawless was solid back to front really, none of it missed... And tho I'm adamant it ain't all about how many punchlines you got (see: Phatal vs Frank White, even ILLA vs SJay, etc) I think Lawless overall had a stronger battle verse, but it was pretty close, 'cuz I like X-Ray's unique approach, I think he'd have been able to work it closer if he knew his opponent better... peaze

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 June 2005 at 10:18am

the realest shit ave seen typed by O

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 June 2005 at 10:38am
lawless -  beat is serious, vocals droppin nice "pessimistic demon" "when you aint straight" some parts are a bit rushed, but for the most part flow is on point. but after the 1st half the memorable punches are few and far apart. Im liking the enrgy you coming with though. "you finished" "at teh oscars" like i said some hot lines, couldve been more, but ill have to see how rayotic comes.

Rayotic - beat is also serious...and the verse starts hot "young bucks medallion" the flow is pretty on point. a few parts I wasnt feeling. "Fell from heaven with angel dust" Ehhh, came hard but i dont think you ame hard enough AT your opponent. Didnt really spot any lines that seemed to be dissing Lawless directly, maybe im wrong.

Overall, i like Lawless more. seemed more "battle-esque" to me. Definityl had more punches, and lines i thought were good hitting, even though his flow wasnt perfect he made it more of a battle. I think that beat by Ray also hurt him. sounded like some club shit, so kinda limited yourself on that.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 June 2005 at 12:53pm
thanks for the votes

nice verse, x-ray..
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 June 2005 at 1:00pm

thanx man, safe guys for votes lawless won init...finish tha rest of them law lol safe in a bit

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 June 2005 at 1:03pm
nah man, no-ones won shit yet, its 3-3

first 2 5 i think
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