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Scotty32 
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 Topic: R1-B4) Fatal vs SpartaPosted: 21 August 2007 at 2:10pm |
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First to 5 or 3KO Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained Vote swaying will be deleted Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show all verses must be in by: Tuesday 28th of August 2007 at 12:00 midnight GMT (thats UK Time, so dont try an claim "Time Difference" as an excuse) theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent. DO NOT POST YOUR VERSE. PM your verse to me! if you have problems PM'in it to me, my email address is in my profile, so Server Errors are not a vaild excuse Votes will last for 1 week from when the verses are posted. |
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Scotty32
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 6:38am |
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Flash:
Expos:
1. In the movie 300 theres a famous line by the spartans "Then we'll fight in the shade!"
2. Back in greek history it was common for the greeks to be bisexual...or to "go both ways"
3. Hope the links work but my closer is in refrence to the recent Greek fires that killed 64 people...
...Since I Recruited Ya, I Got The Power To Finish Ya...
This Bitch Is A Coward, However, Despite What He Say
Knows He'll "Lose To Flash" So Spartans Like To "Fight In The Shade!" This Dyke Should Refrain, His Plays Are Wack An Jus Stupid Predicted Sparta To Win? He Even Came In LAST ON OUR CREW LIST! His Verse Is "Comin Up Short" Leave This Fag Done Faster In Fact, "Spartas A Trojan" And Not A "Magnum (W)Rapper!" (haaa...) This Bitch Is A Traitor, Tagged Wit Point Blank.....OK, Thats Expected Its Normal, Spartans Like To "Go Both Ways!"
This Hoe's Brave, Step To Me This Geek Never Wins!
Ill Pull The "Strap-On Sparta" Quicker Than "Greek Lesbians!" Lets Begin, Wit The Fact Ya Lack Skills To Blast At Fatal I'll Deal "SP A Loss" Like "Spainards At Blackjack Tables!"
Im Wicked Wit Wordplay, But Ill Rip This Bitch Wit My Rhymes Its Ironic How Sparta "Spits On Time" But STILL "Shit Wit Dead-Lines!" Ill Murder This Bitch Wit My Heat, This Geek Should Retire Or Ill Leave "Sparta Burning" Quicker Than Them "Greeks In The Fire!" ...Ya Not On My Level Homie... Sparta: ~second time i've battled him properly; latino hulk in sig; in an escort service prostitutes go on dates with the clients; torture is used to extract information which is impossible if the victim is dead; TT= textual torture/isle of man TT; fluoride (F) is a part of toothpaste It's clear when I lamp this fool, that he stays dead 'Cos I'ma break him for the second time like Cissé's leg Quit writin' cos my flows'll wreck ya; The Hulk? Yeah, cos your verses just stumble around with no direction He bullies novs for his record, it's clear his rep is worthless 'Cos every time he gets taken out by pros, like an escort service It seems Stalin's confused as to who he might have been sonning ...I suppose when it comes to Fatal the whole site's in the running Your punches are wack but your forced wordplay's weaker No-one wants to see Flash here, like a male streaker So bring your trash sonny, I won't hesitate to bin it 'Cos it's clear a good Torture can't have Fatal in it Step ya game up...your poor wordplay's hardly hurtin' I'll have you crashing out of TT like you're Archie Birkin Up against a pro, we'll see if this fool can hold weight 'Cos the only time F's bringing it fresh is in a tube of Colgate... Edited by Scotty32 - 29 August 2007 at 6:42am |
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Point Blank
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 7:20am |
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Hmmm... Flash - Opener Was Clever, Not Much Of A Strong Hit Tho. Next Bar Was Weak In My Opinion, Seen It Done Before. Weren't Feelin The Next Bar At All :S. Next Bar Mentions Me WOOO, Lol @ The Punch. LMAO @ Greek Lesbians, Dope. Next Punch Was Ok. Next Bar Was A Good Hit. Werent Feelin The Last Bar. Overall This Was A Let Down In My Opinion. Started Off Really Slowly, No Strong Hits Until The Lesbian Line, Where It Picked Up. Also, I Think You Used Way To Many Spartan/Greek Plays. sparta - LMAO @ The Opener. I Dont Think The Yanks Will See This As Good As The Brits Will. Next Bar Was Ok. Next Bar Was A Good Hit. Next Bar Was A Bit Meh. LMAO @ Male Streaker, Strong Punch. Next Bar Ok. Archie Birkin Line Was A Strong Hit, bit Generic But Nice. Closer Was A Nice Hit Also. Overall You Had Some Strong Hits, Opener, Closer And Male Streaker Lines Were The Best, Some Bars Just Werent Upto Scratch, But In My Opinion You took This. Real Close Battle. If Fatal Had Kept His Verse Consistent Like From The Greek Lesbian Line Onwards, It Woulda Been Much Closer, But Coz Of His Slow Start And Lack Of Strong Punches He Lost It. Spart GMV |
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-Orion-
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 7:31am |
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Yea, no...
This is supposedly battle of the first round on paper but you both underachieved big time... Flash, the Greek shit got old, SP is reachin', dead-lines, go both ways......na... I mean, deadlines is acceptable but as it's been done before it needs to have some new flavour to it, and it didn't really... Sparta had his issues too; Hulk was eh, escorts I've done that sorta shit before and I know I've seen it elsewhere too, Colgate made a weak closer as well...
Sparta was reaching less...less barely-relevant wordplay and the flow was better bar to bar... But there's too much initials shit here... I know I had a period where I used to do a little too much of it for my own liking too, so maybe I'm to blame if you read my shit and took my lead on it, ha, who knows...but yeah, Sparta takes this one...seein' some of the other people who are goin' thru tho, this draw is stupid...don't people seed around here unless I slap them repeatedly and tell them to? smh...
VOTE: Sparta
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Scotty32
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 11:26am |
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WTF?
draw is done randomly using my randoming script, which ive ALWAYS used. sorry it couldnt meet your high standards you wasnt around to consult. |
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2smooth
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 12:12pm |
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Fatal - wasn't really feelin' ya' opener tbh... ok idea that wasn't executed well... 2nd bar was ok at best... you're better than somethin' that generic in a battle of this calibur... magnum wrapper was dope, tho, gj... go both ways had a lot of potential but you misused it IMO... Greek lesbians was fuckin' niiiice... haha... spainards line was too spelled out to work properly, wasn't feelin' it... next one i wasn't feelin' either... closer was decent tho, good play... overall, flow was a little choppy here in a couple spots... had a couple real nice bars but mostly misses in this verse... was way under ya' standards... Sparta - lol, opener was cool... 2nd bar, the idea was nice, an' it sorta worked... but wasn't really feelin' it that much... lol @ the escort service bit, good dig... next bar was sub par... male streaker was only ok, flow fell off here... good play in the next bar tho... Archie Birkin bit was real nice... an' fuck what everyone else says... the colgate line was tight as fuck, good closer... overall, you had the better verse here... flow was better, punches landed harder and more often... not quite up to your usual standards, either, but still enough to take the win... MVGT SPARTA |
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Scotty32
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 12:39pm |
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spartas thru
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-Orion-
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 12:41pm |
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Scotty's a legend
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Scotty32
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 2:59pm |
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if your refering to me not locking it, its cose i had to pop out half way thru locking it
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