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    Posted: 13 December 2007 at 11:20am

Round One - 10 lines
No Biting, Recycling, Feeding OR Flipping

first to 4 votes or 3-0 = KO
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 12:12pm
-Ive beaten him before...Larynx/Throat
-SF is an abreviation for San Francisco, California...San Francisco is known for their large gay population
-He works at KFC
-Steve Francis used to be an All-star NBA player, but has been terrible the past two years


...Its Simple, 

Franc-Is Not Gettin His Vengeance Cuz I'll Break His Larynx
Fatal Hits Are "Destroying France" Faster Than'A "Earthquake In Paris!"
This Fakes Embarrassed In The Fields, Most Ama's Tore Ya
He's Used To Blowin It, But SF Couldnt Get A-Head In California
Ya Fam Will Mourn Ya! In This Tourny Its Clear Who The Worst Is
He Can Bring Heat To Fried Chicken, Too Bad Just NOT His Verses!
Ill Bend An Break 'Em, My Lines'll Wreck Em When I Face Him
Im "Shuttin Down Sir Francis" Quicker Than'A "Hotel Renovation!"
Im Bringin Hell Like Im Satan! Stay Gettin Slain By A Vet
Your Just Another Francis Struggling To Make Great Plays On The Net!


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 4:45pm
You stay online all the time and you Claim Ya Stylin'
Bitch please, get like a Zoo Keeper and Tame Ya Lyin' (Lion)
You a Lame Ya Dyin', Such a Shame Ya Tryin'
But all them weak rhymes just shoulda Stayed In Private
Round 1 went ya way, Got smashed as a Newb
We all seen how ya pad ya stat sheet like Belichick's Crew
Well Its Just True.....So why don't you Try and Explain
Why you stuck on 29....Like a bitch who Lie Bout Her Age
Fatal's a bitch with his Joke-Cracks, all I Have Is Two Arms
But they'll leave you Broke-Back, like the Faggit You Are
What's Good?.....Shit was quick and Easy....
 
-He post more than most anybody....so he's online a lot
-People give him shit for battlin Newbs to get wins....Belichick coaches the Patriots who like to run scores up on people
-most everything else is self explanitory....
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:09pm
when does the voting 'commence'?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:37pm
hmm. Fatal by far..
Fatal, niceee plays here. SF line was very nice, sick nameplays, maybe too many but you used them in a varity of differenr was so it wasnt played out at all, which made them good. good with the personals as well. dope closer, good read

Sir, hmmm i saw some critical points here that really.... lost it 4 ya. Privite, line was shit...i dont know what you were tryin ta do. the multies were multies but didnt seem like they enhanched the verse, but actually brought it down and closer wasnt great either..

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:51pm

fatal - opener was a nice play, maybe a little bit odd by calling him france but still hit well and was nicely worded, 2nd was decent also, nice couple of plays in there, 3rd was alrite, not very hard hitting just a jab really, 4th's not bad either, not a big fan of plays like this as its only applicable to that one link and nothing else, if ya see what im saying ( its hard to explain lol ) closer was good, "on the net" and basketball plays been used quite a bit, only difference was the name francis which made it semi personal, overall a solid verse

sir francis - opener not worlds worst, but lying / lion been done to death, kinda original with the tame bit, but still only average hitting, next bar wasnt a hard punch which is needed in short battles, just stating a wee opinion, hmm plays alrite, wouldnt have got it unless i read the expo, decent enough concept, next one was nice idea, but not strictly true, so slightly takes away, but nice execution , closer alrite, think ive seen something similar before, decent closer

overall - fatal had the harder punches and the cleaner verse, sir francis takes multis and thats really it

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:58pm
As preety much explained above, fatal took this preety easily imo, come with harder punches and more origonal personal material (damn say that when your pissed) enjoyed his verse more and just feel he landed and threw more and better punches

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 December 2007 at 5:46pm
Good battle....I had to rush my shit...wrote it in like 10 minutes before work....I just moved into an appartment so i've been kinda busy....real nice Verse though Flash...good shit....
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2007 at 1:23am
Thanks SF...good battle...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2007 at 6:25am
(as smooth hasnt been on since Weds)

Closed - 3KO Fatal goes thru
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