Vengeance: R1-B5) fatal vs. sir francis |
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2smooth
Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Topic: R1-B5) fatal vs. sir francis Posted: 13 December 2007 at 11:20am |
Round One - 10 lines first to 4 votes or 3-0 = KO
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If you want to bitch, take it to the Bitching Thread, or PM me DEADLINE IS MIDNIGHT, DECEMBER 20TH, 2007
if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show and not allowed entry to the next tournament
BLIND DROPS, SO ANYONE CAN DROP AT ANY TIME (AS LONG AS IT'S BEFORE THE DEADLINE ) Edited by 2smooth - 14 December 2007 at 1:20pm |
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Fatal
Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 12:12pm |
-Ive beaten him before...Larynx/Throat
-SF is an abreviation for San Francisco, California...San Francisco is known for their large gay population -He works at KFC
-Steve Francis used to be an All-star NBA player, but has been terrible the past two years
...Its Simple, Franc-Is Not Gettin His Vengeance Cuz I'll Break His Larynx Fatal Hits Are "Destroying France" Faster Than'A "Earthquake In Paris!" This Fakes Embarrassed In The Fields, Most Ama's Tore Ya
He's Used To Blowin It, But SF Couldnt Get A-Head In California! Ya Fam Will Mourn Ya! In This Tourny Its Clear Who The Worst Is He Can Bring Heat To Fried Chicken, Too Bad Just NOT His Verses! Ill Bend An Break 'Em, My Lines'll Wreck Em When I Face Him Im "Shuttin Down Sir Francis" Quicker Than'A "Hotel Renovation!" Im Bringin Hell Like Im Satan! Stay Gettin Slain By A Vet Your Just Another Francis Struggling To Make Great Plays On The Net! ...Dynasty Muthafuckas... |
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Sir Francis
Standard Member Joined: 11 July 2006 Location: Bloomington State Status: Offline Points: 425 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-4-0 Form: LLLWWW |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 4:45pm |
You stay online all the time and you Claim Ya Stylin'
Bitch please, get like a Zoo Keeper and Tame Ya Lyin' (Lion)
You a Lame Ya Dyin', Such a Shame Ya Tryin'
But all them weak rhymes just shoulda Stayed In Private Round 1 went ya way, Got smashed as a Newb
We all seen how ya pad ya stat sheet like Belichick's Crew
Well Its Just True.....So why don't you Try and Explain
Why you stuck on 29....Like a bitch who Lie Bout Her Age
Fatal's a bitch with his Joke-Cracks, all I Have Is Two Arms
But they'll leave you Broke-Back, like the Faggit You Are
What's Good?.....Shit was quick and Easy....
-He post more than most anybody....so he's online a lot
-People give him shit for battlin Newbs to get wins....Belichick coaches the Patriots who like to run scores up on people
-most everything else is self explanitory....
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blat skeet skeet
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Your Daddy
Banned Joined: 14 December 2007 Status: Offline Points: 56 |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:09pm |
when does the voting 'commence'?
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Im Your Daddy
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Swift Styles
Standard Member Joined: 24 September 2007 Location: East Coast, US Status: Offline Points: 2014 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-4-1 Form: WWLWNL |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:37pm |
hmm. Fatal by far..
Fatal, niceee plays here. SF line was very nice, sick nameplays, maybe too many but you used them in a varity of differenr was so it wasnt played out at all, which made them good. good with the personals as well. dope closer, good read Sir, hmmm i saw some critical points here that really.... lost it 4 ya. Privite, line was shit...i dont know what you were tryin ta do. the multies were multies but didnt seem like they enhanched the verse, but actually brought it down and closer wasnt great either.. FATAL GMV |
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mcwoods
Superior Member Joined: 04 December 2006 Status: Offline Points: 4204 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 42-51-0 Form: LLLLWW |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:51pm |
fatal - opener was a nice play, maybe a little bit odd by calling him france but still hit well and was nicely worded, 2nd was decent also, nice couple of plays in there, 3rd was alrite, not very hard hitting just a jab really, 4th's not bad either, not a big fan of plays like this as its only applicable to that one link and nothing else, if ya see what im saying ( its hard to explain lol ) closer was good, "on the net" and basketball plays been used quite a bit, only difference was the name francis which made it semi personal, overall a solid verse sir francis - opener not worlds worst, but lying / lion been done to death, kinda original with the tame bit, but still only average hitting, next bar wasnt a hard punch which is needed in short battles, just stating a wee opinion, hmm plays alrite, wouldnt have got it unless i read the expo, decent enough concept, next one was nice idea, but not strictly true, so slightly takes away, but nice execution , closer alrite, think ive seen something similar before, decent closer overall - fatal had the harder punches and the cleaner verse, sir francis takes multis and thats really it vote fatal |
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Kay B
Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:58pm |
As preety much explained above, fatal took this preety easily imo, come with harder punches and more origonal personal material (damn say that when your pissed) enjoyed his verse more and just feel he landed and threw more and better punches
Vote - fatal |
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Sir Francis
Standard Member Joined: 11 July 2006 Location: Bloomington State Status: Offline Points: 425 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-4-0 Form: LLLWWW |
Posted: 21 December 2007 at 5:46pm |
Good battle....I had to rush my shit...wrote it in like 10 minutes before work....I just moved into an appartment so i've been kinda busy....real nice Verse though Flash...good shit....
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blat skeet skeet
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Fatal
Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 22 December 2007 at 1:23am |
Thanks SF...good battle...
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 22 December 2007 at 6:25am |
(as smooth hasnt been on since Weds)
Closed - 3KO Fatal goes thru |
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