Vengeance: R1-B7) mcwoods vs. swift styles |
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2smooth
Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Topic: R1-B7) mcwoods vs. swift styles Posted: 13 December 2007 at 11:23am |
Round One - 10 lines first to 4 votes or 3-0 = KO
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BLIND DROPS, SO ANYONE CAN DROP AT ANY TIME (AS LONG AS IT'S BEFORE THE DEADLINE ) Edited by 2smooth - 14 December 2007 at 1:20pm |
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mcwoods
Superior Member Joined: 04 December 2006 Status: Offline Points: 4204 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 42-51-0 Form: LLLLWW |
Posted: 18 December 2007 at 3:56pm |
Ill leave S crippled, fucked up in some nasty ways
another SS forcing everything, like we back in tha nazi days your spits are real tame cuz, everyone knows my shit is wild and now copying weezy, aint the only time Im ripping styles man, you cant win, when my punches are 1 in a million put his pussy lines next ta smooths, like he gotta brazilian i got the draw everyone wanted, knew Id win I called it n I dont even gotta worry, even ya topicals are ALL SHIT you mayweather my storm, but ya brains still splatting your getting knocked out by 10, like you ricky hatton *just check the links 10 lines/10 rounds easy... |
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Swift Styles
Standard Member Joined: 24 September 2007 Location: East Coast, US Status: Offline Points: 2014 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-4-1 Form: WWLWNL |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:22pm |
This lames dumb and boring, Killah you aint hard at all
and u winning this tourney, is likethe Trotters and Basketball! (funny) let this brit fall, your too fuckin boring and whack Nobody ll be voting this herb, unless u voters smoking crack You make up what you lack, woodsy you got quite the imagination So it doesnt surprise me your obsessed with Beef and masturbation! This MCs too soft, Im so fuckin hard that I scare him Im givin woodsy more problems, than the irish potato famine! I got you in the first round, left you thinking your hexed You aint makin it to round 2, so Im asking WHOS NEXT?? |
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sparta
Standard Member ..Палач.. Joined: 20 June 2006 Location: Volgograd, RUS Status: Offline Points: 2401 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-13-2 Form: LWWLLL |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 7:07pm |
woods...nice enough verse, ss was good but could have been better, though i suspect itll be used against him again...topical was nice, hatton was okay, the rest held it together well enough...swift, opener didnt really hit, wasnt that good as you didnt actually say he wouldnt win it, wasnt really a punch...potato famine was your only good punch, and the rest didnt do enough
v. woods |
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Your Daddy
Banned Joined: 14 December 2007 Status: Offline Points: 56 |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 7:20pm |
woods. first bar was nice, bit obvious, but i liked it good punch 2nd bar i thought was dope. sorta like the eminem flip before he'd even herd the other guys if u kno what i mean, tbh im suprised he didn try n use a weezy punch against you. wudda been better if he had, all the same it made me laugh, nice shit. third bar was a good punch kept it up, incorparated the play into the punch well. last to bars wernt to the same standerd IMO, but pretty tight verse anyway.
SS- weak opener. i did laugh. Only cause you put '(funny)' at the end. n tbh i was more laughin at you. 2nd bar indirect. weak, the rest was weak too. tbh a bad verse. you need to concentrate on constructin real punchs before you jump up in a tourny cause im sure doper heads have missed out n you were never gettin past the first round if you droppin this at level woods easy. |
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U.N.L.M.
Standard Member Joined: 19 December 2006 Location: USA Status: Offline Points: 1955 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-15-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 8:09pm |
Woods- opener was alright, maybe could've been reworded..2nd bar was tight, 3rd bar was solid enough, topical bar was decent, and closer was decent also..Just a solid little verse which was all you needed..
Swift- Opener was very weak for the reasons sparta stated above..Next two bars weren't very good either, they were indirect and just didn't pack a real punch..Famine bar was a nice punch and the closer was just filler, which is not good at all in a 10 line verse..Your verse had one good punch and the rest was weak, indirect, or filler..Read some tutorials on how to construct better punches or just read other's drops and look at their punches..Sooner or later you'll start getting better at incorporating them...
V/Woods...
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 22 December 2007 at 6:31am |
(as smooth hasnt been on since Weds)
Closed - 3KO Woods goes thru |
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