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    Posted: 13 December 2007 at 11:23am

Round One - 10 lines
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Edited by 2smooth - 14 December 2007 at 1:20pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 December 2007 at 3:56pm
Ill leave S crippled, fucked up in some nasty ways
another SS forcing everything, like we back in tha nazi days
your  spits are real tame cuz, everyone knows my shit is wild
and now copying weezy, aint the only time Im ripping styles
man, you cant win, when my punches are 1 in a million
put his pussy lines next ta smooths, like he gotta brazilian
i got the draw everyone wanted, knew Id win I called it
n I dont even gotta worry, even ya topicals are ALL SHIT
you mayweather my storm,  but ya brains still splatting
your getting knocked out by 10, like you ricky hatton

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10 lines/10 rounds

easy...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:22pm
This lames dumb and boring, Killah you aint hard at all
and u winning this tourney, is likethe Trotters and Basketball! (funny)
let this brit fall, your too fuckin boring and whack
Nobody ll be voting this herb, unless u voters smoking crack
You make up what you lack, woodsy you got quite the imagination
So it doesnt surprise me your obsessed with Beef and masturbation!
This MCs too soft, Im so fuckin hard that I scare him
Im givin woodsy more problems, than the irish potato famine!
I got you in the first round, left you thinking your hexed
You aint makin it to round 2, so Im asking WHOS NEXT??
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 7:07pm
woods...nice enough verse, ss was good but could have been better, though i suspect itll be used against him again...topical was nice, hatton was okay, the rest held it together well enough...swift, opener didnt really hit, wasnt that good as you didnt actually say he wouldnt win it, wasnt really a punch...potato famine was your only good punch, and the rest didnt do enough

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 7:20pm
woods. first bar was nice, bit obvious, but i liked it good punch 2nd bar i thought was dope. sorta like the eminem flip before he'd even herd the other guys if u kno what i mean, tbh im suprised he didn try n use a weezy punch against you. wudda been better if he had, all the same it made me laugh, nice shit. third bar was a good punch kept it up, incorparated the play into the punch well. last to bars wernt to the same standerd IMO, but pretty tight verse anyway.

SS- weak opener. i did laugh. Only cause you put '(funny)' at the end. n tbh i was more laughin at you. 2nd bar indirect. weak, the rest was weak too. tbh a bad verse. you need to concentrate on constructin real punchs before you jump up in a tourny cause im sure doper heads have missed out n you were never gettin past the first round if you droppin this at level


woods easy.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 8:09pm
Woods- opener was alright, maybe could've been reworded..2nd bar was tight, 3rd bar was solid enough, topical bar was decent, and closer was decent also..Just a solid little verse which was all you needed..
 
Swift- Opener was very weak for the reasons sparta stated above..Next two bars weren't very good either, they were indirect and just didn't pack a real punch..Famine bar was a nice punch and the closer was just filler, which is not good at all in a 10 line verse..Your verse had one good punch and the rest was weak, indirect, or filler..Read some tutorials on how to construct better punches or just read other's drops and look at their punches..Sooner or later you'll start getting better at incorporating them...
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2007 at 6:31am
(as smooth hasnt been on since Weds)

Closed - 3KO Woods goes thru
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