Double Impact: R2-B1) Calibra & Cuba vs Sparta & Point Blank |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Topic: R2-B1) Calibra & Cuba vs Sparta & Point Blank Posted: 10 May 2009 at 8:41pm |
First team to 3 votes.
12-16 lines each participant. Crew Votes Allowed. Blind Drops* Due Saturday 16th May 2009 11:59pm (GMT+DST) There will be no extensions. No-show = Instant Team Loss. * This is Blind Drops, each participant must send their OWN verse to me by either Private Message or Email (which is in my profile). Verses from team mates or anyone else will be ignored. Voting: Voting will last one week from the time of the verses being posted. Any vote not explained or not to my liking* will be disallowed. (** this is, but not limited to, dick-riding / hate voting / blah blah - basic shit really) |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 17 May 2009 at 2:33pm |
Calibra:
Expos: Siamese twins unseperated, im checkin' on their vitals
As I surgically remove these rappers from their titles Calibra's droppin' Points like a fall in the economy Spartas rep just like his name, borders on Mythology All titles defence attempts have been totally pathetic Fucking these kids... in Sparta it was socially accepted Wanna show ya wack as ya partner and lose by choice? Well if that was ya aim you've really proved ya Point Point Blank claiming Champ? That's a sinister lie Sparta had to drag this bitch across the finishing line* Dodging punches Point? I really can't believe ya
Editing ya sig but still ain't taking out Calibra** We just like the voters, aint lettin' these get through Plus, like gamers, we've all owned PS2/too*** Yours Sincerely Calibra, fuck being B.F's Forever Literally flipped the script by ending P.S with letters*** Cuba: We raping with syntax and breaking ya thin raps You got no votes in the poll so how you making an impact? What you quoting is average, don't notice ya talent Even the guys we killed last round got more votes than you faggots You supposed to be champs but disasters can happen Knocked clean out in the second, faster than Hatton This master is crafting an inevitable slating So when I air PBS, trust...they get terrible ratings We separate Siamese, bust like a ruptured appendix So after this shit these bitches will be clutching for Vengeance Not even a structured repentance will blinker my mojo How they gonna win...they STILL ducking Dalinquant and Bolo Play ya position, go clean up some topics or some shit Sparta's role fits his talent...only got moderate punches Dynasty's weak link can't drop with Styles or even grab Sage's So he Faded his weak lines...got left with Blank pages Sparta: Listen, these sad fuckers steppin up, they quick to get dropped Me and Point choppin' Era short here like Vincent Van Gogh You fucking thick Geordie bastards, quit rap, get back to the seams Congrats on being the only 2 from your town who can actually read 26 lines of fire from S n P and these chumps are erased Your odds of winning longer than Cuba's ugly-ass face New Era? You just a washed-up bunch of old fools Get the fuck out, I'VE won as many titles as your whole crew! (count 'em) So steo your games up, you ain't nearly as good as you like to pretend I;m whoopin' Calibra so bad, he'll resoprt to BITING AGAIN (fuck off the site) That's right Cuba, you picked a chomper, I've no option but to stomp ya CC's getting smashed up here worse than crashes at Monza... Point Blank: Don't understand somethin then ask... Tastin their fear..me and spart erasin their Era... So watch this duo split as fast as fuckin' Katie an Peter Of all the stories on LA, theirs is the cutest I've heard Cali made a sig for Cuba, who joined his crew in return (awww) Now theyre due to be BURNED! Theyre leavin as injured patients Coz this aint an english class an we ain't needing alliteration!! (C&C) Calibras an irritation..we're sure to annhilate him Leave this Geordie in so much trouble, Alan Shearer will try an save him!! You'll find our rhymes amazin, whereas your set is the poorest We all know a part of 'Cali's in Cuba', like American tourists! Cubas dreams gettin smashed,we'll knock him aside,see.. He couldnt hold all the titles, if he was The Rock in the 90's!!! Snappin these haters...they'll get snagged in the fangs of alligator.. So its like we're in a maths exam....coz we'll be seeing CalCu-later! (By3!) ...Next... |
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12327 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 17 May 2009 at 2:46pm |
Sparta titles = Vengeance, Siamese Raps, Topical Title (once)
New Era titles = Last Man Standing, Open Mic Tourny, Tag Team Tournament, Shadow Boxing, MC of the Year, Topical Title (twice), Text Title (twice), Tag Titles (once) Learn to count
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Point Blank
Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
Posted: 17 May 2009 at 4:05pm |
Fuck me Cuba (no homo), but u got TWELVE links? lol...anyway ye, nice verses, glad everyone showed
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12327 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 17 May 2009 at 4:15pm |
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mcwoods
Superior Member Joined: 04 December 2006 Status: Offline Points: 4204 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 42-51-0 Form: LLLLWW |
Posted: 17 May 2009 at 10:45pm |
calibra
Siamese twins unseperated, im checkin' on their vitals
As I surgically remove these rappers from their titles hmm, not the strongest opener, reminding us of their title win, somewhat clever, but not worded well enough so not a killer hit Calibra's droppin' Points like a fall in the economy Spartas rep just like his name, borders on Mythology first line is good, second is okay too, sparta/mythology - to be honest (even though this is diff) i would stay away from all them concepts, been done too much. this is just okay All titles defence attempts have been totally pathetic Fucking these kids... in Sparta it was socially accepted again, another old sparta play, its different, but a play like this is never gonna be brutal, the concept is fundamnetally the same, set up was funny tho
Wanna show ya wack as ya partner and lose by choice? Well if that was ya aim you've really proved ya Point this was better, funny punch and nicely worded Point Blank claiming Champ? That's a sinister lie Sparta had to drag this bitch across the finishing line* kinda a run on from the previous punch, funny enough but slighlty dampened. Dodging punches Point? I really can't believe ya
Editing ya sig but still ain't taking out Calibra** this was nice, well worded and concise. We just like the voters, aint lettin' these get through Plus, like gamers, we've all owned PS2/too*** decent enough hit, maybe readjusted the wording but a solid hit Yours Sincerely Calibra, fuck being B.F's Forever Literally flipped the script by ending P.S with letters*** i done a similar concept before so it kinda takes it away for me personally, but an okay ending. overall - first half was just okay, picked up towards the second half, flow was solid throughout. cuba We raping with syntax and breaking ya thin raps You got no votes in the poll so how you making an impact? solid opener, concept is a little done but funny nonetheless What you quoting is average, don't notice ya talent Even the guys we killed last round got more votes than you faggots decent punch, funny again, but should have been merged with the last bar, too much of the same concept. You supposed to be champs but disasters can happen Knocked clean out in the second, faster than Hatton solid punch, a little indirect but clever enough This master is crafting an inevitable slating So when I air PBS, trust...they get terrible ratings solid, wording seemed a little off for me, could have been made harder, good tho We separate Siamese, bust like a ruptured appendix So after this shit these bitches will be clutching for Vengeance not really getting this punch, its okay, but more of a fact, no clever play, plus sparta won vengeance, so not seeing the point of this bar Not even a structured repentance will blinker my mojo How they gonna win...they STILL ducking Dalinquant and Bolo lol, solid personal, set up rhyme a little forced Play ya position, go clean up some topics or some shit Sparta's role fits his talent...only got moderate punches So he Faded his weak lines...got left with Blank pages nice wordplay, all the links are unnecessary tho lol, kind of annoying, solid punch tho overall - nothing KO, but a nice verse, well flowing and worded with multiple hits sparta Listen, these sad fuckers steppin up, they quick to get dropped Me and Point choppin' Era short here like Vincent Van Gogh Lol, this is a brilliant opener, only thing is the rhyme is a little off, i always saig in van GO, not van goff, so a little confused over it. You fucking thick Geordie bastards, quit rap, get back to the seams Congrats on being the only 2 from your town who can actually read lol, pretty funny, not KO, but a decent jab 26 lines of fire from S n P and these chumps are erased Your odds of winning longer than Cuba's ugly-ass face lol, i had a play about him looking like bert, this is diff tho, longer is a nice take on it, decent personal New Era? You just a washed-up bunch of old fools Get the fuck out, I'VE won as many titles as your whole crew! (count 'em) this was a nice idea, i get where your coming from i.e chain, nep, cali having won nothing, however cuba has won quite a few, plus 'king jehu' is a 'member' it seems, which would put their number up, a solid hit, but dampened. So steo your games up, you ain't nearly as good as you like to pretend I;m whoopin' Calibra so bad, he'll resoprt to BITING AGAIN (fuck off the site) im going to assume this is the same guy lol, this is a nice personal, well worded That's right Cuba, you picked a chomper, I've no option but to stomp ya CC's getting smashed up here worse than crashes at Monza... waiting for a punch like this, this has a 'insert opponent' wording style, which can be effective, but as i see it, it can be a little repetive and uncreative, not a bad finish. overall - very solid verse, funny punches and personals, no real complaints PB Tastin their fear..me and spart erasin their Era... So watch this duo split as fast as fuckin' Katie an Peter lol, pretty good, kinda like cub's hatton punch, decent idea but a little indirect Of all the stories on LA, theirs is the cutest I've heard Cali made a sig for Cuba, who joined his crew in return (awww) lol, not bad, worded well. Now theyre due to be BURNED! Theyre leavin as injured patients Coz this aint an english class an we ain't needing alliteration!! (C&C) average, not really a solid enough hit, only two C's like lol Calibras an irritation..we're sure to annhilate him Leave this Geordie in so much trouble, Alan Shearer will try an save him!! lol, being a footie fan this was a nice dig. You'll find our rhymes amazin, whereas your set is the poorest We all know a part of 'Cali's in Cuba', like American tourists! lol, this was funny, but im not 100% sure why lol, wording and punchline isnt quite connected, a little off Cubas dreams gettin smashed,we'll knock him aside,see.. He couldnt hold all the titles, if he was The Rock in the 90's!!! this was okay again, not bad but not killer Snappin these haters...they'll get snagged in the fangs of alligator.. So its like we're in a maths exam....coz we'll be seeing CalCu-later! (By3!) not bad, pretty well thought out, but wording is a little, eh... unrealistic, overall - solid, decent hits, some misses. Overall - in terms of flow and rhyming, cuba came out slightly ahead and then the rest where close behind, all pretty similar, nicely done. in punches, sparta was ahead, then cuba and point where next with cuba inching slightly ahead maybe, with cali not doing quite aswell all 4 had solid verses, but i think combined, sparta and point had the overall better hitting verses, there was no real killer, killer punches, but enough to do a bit more damage if you want anything explained more, ill do so vote sparta and point. |
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Point Blank
Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
Posted: 20 May 2009 at 3:56pm |
Thanks Woods...bump
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sparta
Standard Member ..Палач.. Joined: 20 June 2006 Location: Volgograd, RUS Status: Offline Points: 2401 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-13-2 Form: LWWLLL |
Posted: 22 May 2009 at 12:44pm |
Upping this, voting closes in 2 days
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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 23 May 2009 at 4:09pm |
Calibra/Cuba - I believe that Calibra dropped the ball big time here..opener was filler and in a short battle you cant have filler lines..the sparta shots were all history refferences which is obviously played out..Besides that I didnt think he brought anything to hard hitting except the PS2 bar..that was a pretty hot play imo..Cuba had a solid verse first bar a decent way to open it but the second bar was hot..third was a good relevant hit too..tbh the rest of Cuba's verse was hot..all good punches or plays and to say that about the rest of the bars would be very repetitive.. Sparta/Point - Sparta started it off extremely solid first bar was pretty clever and the comedic aspect of the second bar was nice as well..the third bar was a funny personal refference and the fourth was dope as fuck with the titles..the second last bar was fucking killer..Thats some dope ass investigating for a battle winning personal..and the closer was alright at best I found..Point to be honest I figured that you'd be rusty as hell but proved otherwise here...the opener was pretty funny but not to hard hitting..I pissed my pants over the second bar..hillarious..I didnt like the whole illiteration thing in the next bar to be honest..I dont understand the Allen Shearer refference they must be from England..I loved the next play..pretty funny..The next bar was decent as best..I really liked the closer..very clever and well worded so good job Overall I thought this was a bit of a landslide..2 hot verses compared to 1..It seems that Cuba was just unlucky here that Cali didnt bring his best..But the bar of the battle definently goes to Sparta with the biting refference..props both but Vote : Sparta/Point |
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Kay B
Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 24 May 2009 at 11:47pm |
Gotta agree with the two above, iv seen alot better from you calib this seemed rushed in a battle verse imo the opener should be one of if not THE hardest hit and your opener just seemed filler and tho u had some nice idea's you didnt seem to execute them as well as you normally would in a battle verse, cuba bought heat as he normally does which is why its a shame, as said above it come down to 3 dope verses's and with sparta and point dropping dope verses between them there was only ever gonna be one winner....Had calib dropped a dope verse it coulda been a whole different story but it wasnt....dope verse cuba shame u had to go out with a verse like that, but sparta and point just had the doper verses...
v/ spart an point |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 25 May 2009 at 6:41pm |
3ko to Sparta and Point Blank
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