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    Posted: 10 May 2009 at 8:41pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 May 2009 at 2:33pm
Calibra:

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*-Point came wackest in the Final when they won the belts.
**-Point had a quote from me in his sig for months and it disappeared when we drew them in the Semis.
***-PS is obviously Point/Sparta.

Siamese twins unseperated, im checkin' on their vitals
As I surgically remove these rappers from their titles
Calibra's droppin' Points like a fall in the economy
Spartas rep just like his name, borders on Mythology
All titles defence attempts have been totally pathetic
Fucking these kids... in Sparta it was socially accepted
Wanna show ya wack as ya partner and lose by choice?
Well if that was ya aim you've really proved ya Point
Point Blank claiming Champ? That's a sinister lie
Sparta had to drag this bitch across the finishing line*
Dodging punches Point? I really can't believe ya
Editing ya sig but still ain't taking out Calibra**
We just like the voters, aint lettin' these get through
Plus, like gamers, we've all owned PS2/too***
Yours Sincerely Calibra, fuck being B.F's Forever
Literally flipped the script by ending P.S with letters***



Cuba:

We raping with syntax and breaking ya thin raps

You got no votes in the poll so how you making an impact?

What you quoting is average, don't notice ya talent

Even the guys we killed last round got more votes than you faggots

You supposed to be champs but disasters can happen

Knocked clean out in the second, faster than Hatton

This master is crafting an inevitable slating

So when I air PBS, trust...they get terrible ratings

We separate Siamese, bust like a ruptured appendix

So after this shit these bitches will be clutching for Vengeance

Not even a structured repentance will blinker my mojo

How they gonna win...they STILL ducking Dalinquant and Bolo

Play ya position, go clean up some topics or some shit

Sparta's role fits his talent...only got moderate punches

Dynasty's weak link can't drop with Styles or even grab Sage's

So he Faded his weak lines...got left with Blank pages




Sparta:

Listen, these sad fuckers steppin up, they quick to get dropped
Me and Point choppin' Era short here like Vincent Van Gogh
You fucking thick Geordie bastards, quit rap, get back to the seams
Congrats on being the only 2 from your town who can actually read
26 lines of fire from S n P and these chumps are erased
Your odds of winning longer than Cuba's ugly-ass face
New Era? You just a washed-up bunch of old fools
Get the fuck out, I'VE won as many titles as your whole crew! (count 'em)
So steo your games up, you ain't nearly as good as you like to pretend
I;m whoopin' Calibra so bad, he'll resoprt to BITING AGAIN (fuck off the site)
That's right Cuba, you picked a chomper, I've no option but to stomp ya
CC's getting smashed up here worse than crashes at Monza...


Point Blank:

Don't understand somethin then ask...

Tastin their fear..me and spart erasin their Era...
So watch this duo split as fast as fuckin' Katie an Peter
Of all the stories on LA, theirs is the cutest I've heard
Cali made a sig for Cuba, who joined his crew in return (awww)
Now theyre due to be BURNED! Theyre leavin as injured patients
Coz this aint an english class an we ain't needing alliteration!! (C&C)
Calibras an irritation..we're sure to annhilate him
Leave this Geordie in so much trouble, Alan Shearer will try an save him!!
You'll find our rhymes amazin, whereas your set is the poorest
We all know a part of 'Cali's in Cuba', like American tourists!
Cubas dreams gettin smashed,we'll knock him aside,see.. 
He couldnt hold all the titles, if he was The Rock in the 90's!!!

Snappin these haters...they'll get snagged in the fangs of alligator..
So its like we're in a maths exam....coz we'll be seeing CalCu-later! (By3!)

...Next...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 May 2009 at 2:46pm
Sparta titles = Vengeance, Siamese Raps, Topical Title (once)

New Era titles = Last Man Standing, Open Mic Tourny, Tag Team Tournament, Shadow Boxing, MC of the Year, Topical Title (twice), Text Title (twice), Tag Titles (once)

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 May 2009 at 4:05pm
Fuck me Cuba (no homo), but u got TWELVE links? lol...anyway ye, nice verses, glad everyone showed
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 May 2009 at 10:45pm
calibra

Siamese twins unseperated, im checkin' on their vitals
As I surgically remove these rappers from their titles

hmm, not the strongest opener, reminding us of their title win, somewhat clever, but not worded well enough so not a killer hit

Calibra's droppin' Points like a fall in the economy
Spartas rep just like his name, borders on Mythology

first line is good, second is okay too, sparta/mythology - to be honest (even though this is diff) i would stay away from all them concepts, been done too much. this is just okay

All titles defence attempts have been totally pathetic
Fucking these kids... in Sparta it was socially accepted
 
again, another old sparta play, its different, but a play like this is never gonna be brutal, the concept is fundamnetally the same, set up was funny tho

Wanna show ya wack as ya partner and lose by choice?
Well if that was ya aim you've really proved ya Point

this was better, funny punch and nicely worded

Point Blank claiming Champ? That's a sinister lie
Sparta had to drag this bitch across the finishing line*

kinda a run on from the previous punch, funny enough but slighlty dampened.
Dodging punches Point? I really can't believe ya
Editing ya sig but still ain't taking out Calibra**

this was nice, well worded and concise.

We just like the voters, aint lettin' these get through
Plus, like gamers, we've all owned PS2/too***

decent enough hit, maybe readjusted the wording but a solid hit

Yours Sincerely Calibra, fuck being B.F's Forever
Literally flipped the script by ending P.S with letters***

i done a similar concept before so it kinda takes it away for me personally, but an okay ending.

overall - first half was just okay, picked up towards the second half, flow was solid throughout.

cuba 

We raping with syntax and breaking ya thin raps

You got no votes in the poll so how you making an impact?


solid opener, concept is a little done but funny nonetheless

What you quoting is average, don't notice ya talent

Even the guys we killed last round got more votes than you faggots


decent punch, funny again, but should have been merged with the last bar, too much of the same concept.

You supposed to be champs but disasters can happen

Knocked clean out in the second, faster than Hatton


solid punch, a little indirect but clever enough

This master is crafting an inevitable slating

So when I air PBS, trust...they get terrible ratings


solid, wording seemed a little off for me, could have been made harder, good tho

We separate Siamese, bust like a ruptured appendix

So after this shit these bitches will be clutching for Vengeance


not really getting this punch, its okay, but more of a fact, no clever play, plus sparta won vengeance, so not seeing the point of this bar

Not even a structured repentance will blinker my mojo

How they gonna win...they STILL ducking Dalinquant and Bolo


lol, solid personal, set up rhyme a little forced

Play ya position, go clean up some topics or some shit

Sparta's role fits his talent...only got moderate punches


lol, pretty funny again,

Dynasty's weak link can't drop with Styles or even grab Sage's

So he Faded his weak lines...got left with Blank pages


nice wordplay, all the links are unnecessary tho lol, kind of annoying, solid punch tho

overall - nothing KO, but a nice verse, well flowing and worded with multiple hits

sparta

Listen, these sad fuckers steppin up, they quick to get dropped
Me and Point choppin' Era short here like Vincent Van Gogh

Lol, this is a brilliant opener, only thing is the rhyme is a little off, i always saig in van GO, not van goff, so a little confused over it.

You fucking thick Geordie bastards, quit rap, get back to the seams
Congrats on being the only 2 from your town who can actually read

lol, pretty funny, not KO, but a decent jab

26 lines of fire from S n P and these chumps are erased
Your odds of winning longer than Cuba's ugly-ass face

lol, i had a play about him looking like bert, this is diff tho, longer is a nice take on it, decent personal

New Era? You just a washed-up bunch of old fools
Get the fuck out, I'VE won as many titles as your whole crew! (count 'em)

this was a nice idea, i get where your coming from i.e chain, nep, cali having won nothing, however cuba has won quite a few, plus 'king jehu' is a 'member' it seems, which would put their number up, a solid hit, but dampened.

So steo your games up, you ain't nearly as good as you like to pretend
I;m whoopin' Calibra so bad, he'll resoprt to BITING AGAIN (fuck off the site)

im going to assume this is the same guy lol, this is a nice personal, well worded

That's right Cuba, you picked a chomper, I've no option but to stomp ya
CC's getting smashed up here worse than crashes at Monza...

waiting for a punch like this, this has a 'insert opponent' wording style, which can be effective, but as i see it, it can be a little repetive and uncreative, not a bad finish.

overall - very solid verse, funny punches and personals, no real complaints

PB

Tastin their fear..me and spart erasin their Era...
So watch this duo split as fast as fuckin' Katie an Peter

lol, pretty good, kinda like cub's hatton punch, decent idea but a little indirect

Of all the stories on LA, theirs is the cutest I've heard
Cali made a sig for Cuba, who joined his crew in return (awww)

lol, not bad, worded well.

Now theyre due to be BURNED! Theyre leavin as injured patients
Coz this aint an english class an we ain't needing alliteration!! (C&C)

average, not really a solid enough hit, only two C's like lol

Calibras an irritation..we're sure to annhilate him
Leave this Geordie in so much trouble, Alan Shearer will try an save him!!

lol, being a footie fan this was a nice dig.

You'll find our rhymes amazin, whereas your set is the poorest
We all know a part of 'Cali's in Cuba', like American tourists!

lol, this was funny, but im not 100% sure why lol, wording and punchline isnt quite connected, a little off

Cubas dreams gettin smashed,we'll knock him aside,see.. 
He couldnt hold all the titles, if he was The Rock in the 90's!!!

this was okay again, not bad but not killer

Snappin these haters...they'll get snagged in the fangs of alligator..
So its like we're in a maths exam....coz we'll be seeing CalCu-later! (By3!)

not bad, pretty well thought out, but wording is a little, eh... unrealistic,

overall - solid, decent hits, some misses.

Overall - in terms of flow and rhyming, cuba came out slightly ahead and then the rest where close behind, all pretty similar, nicely done.
in punches, sparta was ahead, then cuba and point where next with cuba inching slightly ahead maybe, with cali not doing quite aswell

all 4 had solid verses, but i think combined, sparta and point had the overall better hitting verses, there was no real killer, killer punches, but enough to do a bit more damage

if you want anything explained more, ill do so

vote sparta and point.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 May 2009 at 12:44pm
Upping this, voting closes in 2 days
Не все потеряно пока...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 May 2009 at 4:09pm

Calibra/Cuba - I believe that Calibra dropped the ball big time here..opener was filler and in a short battle you cant have filler lines..the sparta shots were all history refferences which is obviously played out..Besides that I didnt think he brought anything to hard hitting except the PS2 bar..that was a pretty hot play imo..Cuba had a solid verse first bar a decent way to open it but the second bar was hot..third was a good relevant hit too..tbh the rest of Cuba's verse was hot..all good punches or plays and to say that about the rest of the bars would be very repetitive..

Sparta/Point - Sparta started it off extremely solid first bar was pretty clever and the comedic aspect of the second bar was nice as well..the third bar was a funny personal refference and the fourth was dope as fuck with the titles..the second last bar was fucking killer..Thats some dope ass investigating for a battle winning personal..and the closer was alright at best I found..Point to be honest I figured that you'd be rusty as hell but proved otherwise here...the opener was pretty funny but not to hard hitting..I pissed my pants over the second bar..hillarious..I didnt like the whole illiteration thing in the next bar to be honest..I dont understand the Allen Shearer refference they must be from England..I loved the next play..pretty funny..The next bar was decent as best..I really liked the closer..very clever and well worded so good job

Overall I thought this was a bit of a landslide..2 hot verses compared to 1..It seems that Cuba was just unlucky here that Cali didnt bring his best..But the bar of the battle definently goes to Sparta with the biting refference..props both but

Vote : Sparta/Point

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 May 2009 at 11:47pm
Gotta agree with the two above, iv seen alot better from you calib this seemed rushed in a battle verse imo the opener should be one of if not THE hardest hit and your opener just seemed filler and tho u had some nice idea's you didnt seem to execute them as well as you normally would in a battle verse, cuba bought heat as he normally does which is why its a shame, as said above it come down to 3 dope verses's and with sparta and point dropping dope verses between them there was only ever gonna be one winner....Had calib dropped a dope verse it coulda been a whole different story but it wasnt....dope verse cuba shame u had to go out with a verse like that, but sparta and point just had the doper verses...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 May 2009 at 6:41pm
3ko to Sparta and Point Blank
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