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Scotty32 
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
 Topic: R2-B1) Dalinquent vs BoloPosted: 18 January 2008 at 11:58am |
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First to 5 or 3KO Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained Vote swaying will be deleted Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show all verses must be in by: 25th January 2008 at 23:59 GMT (thats UK Time, so don't try an claim "Time Difference" as an excuse) theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent. DO NOT POST YOUR VERSE. PM your verse to me! if you have problems PM'in it to me, my email address is in my profile, so Server Errors are not a valid excuse Votes will last for 1 week from when the verses are posted. Edited by Scotty32 - 18 January 2008 at 12:10pm |
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dalinquent
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Posted: 19 January 2008 at 5:40pm |
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just checkin in and saying good luck dude...
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Scotty32
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 25 January 2008 at 7:39pm |
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Dalinquent:
Short 2 lines, Don't really give a fuck...I got homework to do Look ya style's the worst in this shit, That's why I'm hurtin' this bitch B.O. winning? Please, I'll remove em from this shit like a deodorant stick Dal's murkin' em quick, Ya weak clowning can't clash with my style I'll end em with L, Now Bo can finally have em laughin' out loud* You'll get smashed in the mouth, Im on my all star shit again And yo, me twisting ya name is closest loob'll ever be to fittin' in* This bitch gettin wins? Not likely with his played, decrypted rhymes Thats shit is just as possible, As him gettin' in gades a second time* Face it, I'll wreck his lines, Dal's known to smash enemies While the last time a bolo punch landed hard was - LAST CENTURY* How could this ass injure me? Just fa that I'll smash em again Cause their's only one instance of bolo ass coming back wit a win* I'll trash em in a flash wit a grin an' leave his bullshit damaged Then give bolo a los, Like motherfucking wolves in Spanish* FYI: in order *Bo-lol, *bolo twisted loob/lube, *use to be gade, *check the link, *check the link, *los bolos=the wolves in spanish Good luck kid.. Bolo: Yes you’ve
inspired dopeness, created a savage destroyer…
*Dalinquent
= someone that breaks the law…an experienced lawyer gets him to pay for his
crimes….L.A. = La (like the note), lawyer, la – yer. Scotty: the sections in blue were meant to be hyperlinks, but i dont think they're clickable now that i put them on here (atleast not for me)....so just incase - here are their respective links: the forum’s most hated! - http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=13916&PID=151242#151242 Only one who thinks you’re dope’s - http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=14047 “oh shit!” punch - http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=7781&KW=&PID=83025#83025 |
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Bolo
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¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN |
Posted: 25 January 2008 at 7:43pm |
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los bolos = doesnt mean the wolves in spanish....los lobos does....
other than that, good verse dal...vote up! |
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I am the one that knocks...
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dalinquent
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Posted: 25 January 2008 at 8:08pm |
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lmao...Thats why I failed spanish for 3 years in high school, confused it with bowlin i believe...lmao again, fucking legend...
anyways, good verse bolo, should be a close one, good luck dude... |
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Fatal
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Posted: 26 January 2008 at 8:28pm |
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Damn, really close battle, ill vote this when i get back from work
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DressToKill
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Posted: 26 January 2008 at 11:56pm |
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Nice battle both..
Dal your Opener was clever dude nice play I liked how your verse started..second line was also nice..2 nice plays to start things off..I wasnt feeling the third bar..the name play just wasnt good at all..4th was a decent personal..5th was good..6th was meh..closer since the grammar was wrong made it not that great imo..
Bolo- the opener was decent..2nd bar was a nice personal..I was feeling that..3rd was alright..okay at best..4th was dope..mid sentence shit was nice as hell..dope play..5th was also dope..the set up with the braille thing was nice too..also the play was good..nice job with that..6th was a good little personal on his crew..7th Nice personal..closer Nice play
I wish Dal would of dropped that extra bar because it might of helped him out ALOT here..IMO Bolo started off a bit slow but then picked it up with some clever plays to finish it off..Dal had some reaches but to me the punches just didnt hit..so Bolo gmv for having a nice ass verse
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The original comeback kid
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U.N.L.M.
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Posted: 27 January 2008 at 12:13am |
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I did this out and forgot that Dal was 2 lines short and didn't feel wasting my effort so i took the percentage of the total and used that...
Dalinquent: Look ya style's the worst in this shit, That's why I'm hurtin' this bitch B.O. winning? Please, I'll remove em from this shit like a deodorant stick haha, dope 4/5 Dal's murkin' em quick, Ya weak clowning can't clash with my style I'll end em with L, Now Bo can finally have em laughin' out loud another good play, nice 4/5 You'll get smashed in the mouth, Im on my all star shit again And yo, me twisting ya name is closest loob'll ever be to fittin' in* Hmm..I liked it, it was good to me 3.5/5 This bitch gettin wins? Not likely with his played, decrypted rhymes Thats shit is just as possible, As him gettin' in gades a second time* Decent, was personal as well, 3/5 Face it, I'll wreck his lines, Dal's known to smash enemies While the last time a bolo punch landed hard was - LAST CENTURY Good, liked it a lot 3.5/5 How could this ass injure me? Just fa that I'll smash em again Cause their's only one instance of bolo ass coming back wit a win Was alright, not feelin' it all too much 2/5 I'll trash em in a flash wit a grin an' leave his bullshit damaged Then give bolo a los, Like motherfucking wolves in Spanish* Well, we all know the problem here, with the grammar and all but at least the effort was there 1.5/5 21.5/35= 61% Bolo: Yes you’ve
inspired dopeness, created a savage destroyer… Alright, nothing major to open up tho..2/5
U ain’t
shit, n it ain’t just that Decent, nothing major tho 2.5/5
Wow, this was dope as hell, really good play 4.5/5
Another dope play, very nice 4/5
You ain’t
above most noobs, Scotty, go
ahead n put me through...this other little kiddy sucks ha, good play on the closer 3.5/5
27/40= 68% Overall- Dal started pretty hot and stayed steady through the middle but you took a plunge with the last two bars(and third if ya count ya missin bar) which shows ya were rushing to get ya homework done lol..Just ended it really, a mistake with the grammar and all..Still had a nice verse but it could've been better and at least finish hard..Bolo on the other hand, started off a little weak IMO but then really heated it up and came hard from the middle on..As the numbers show, i was just feelin more of Bolo's plays and him incorporating the personals..he had some really dope bars like the mid-sentence one and he just took this by not fallin off and coming more consistent..It was closer(would've been even closer if Dal finished) but Bolo takes this...Good stuff from both... V/Bolo... |
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Bolo
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¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN |
Posted: 29 January 2008 at 6:24pm |
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stop sleepin muhfuckas....
2-0 me fatal where u at? |
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I am the one that knocks...
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dalinquent
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Posted: 29 January 2008 at 7:01pm |
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got his hand on his dick...as usual
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Fatal
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 29 January 2008 at 9:06pm |
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*Sighs....you cocksuckers Dal:opener was dope...ive seen deoderant plays before, but i was really feelin this. Flows perfectly...next bar was creative. Was a name play...next bar im not feelin at all. I HATE punches that re-arrange names, and lube/loob is a stretch for a punch...gades was a good personal. good hit...last century punch was tight. Really solid hit and flow was good, wit nice transistional...comin back for the win punch was a solid bar too...good nameplay...the closer coulda been dope if it were true lol, but, well you know lol...i did like the aggressiveness of the wording tho and directness...Overall i came away impressed wit Dal's verse. One thing i've always had a problem wit dal's verse was how he words his punches but the last couple battles, He's REALLY stepped up. I loved the aggressiveness of the verse and the direct punches. I can see you've been working on your transistionals and it shows. What hurts tho is ya missing bar.
Bolo:
Opener was ok, nothing "oh shit" but still was decent...Forum's most hated was nice tho. Good personal and good wording...next bar was ok. I felt that it coulda been worked differently tho. Still not bad tho...Jail violence is fuckin dope. The wording is great and the flow was on point. Next bar was decent, again, i think it coulda been worded differently...The crew punch was nice too. Was a good swith up which shows ya attackin at different angles...The "oh Shit" punch was pretty good. Good use of a personal, nice find...Closer was dope. This is a type of play that i would use. Great hit...This was another good verse by bolo, i felt a few punches should of been worded differently tho. Flow was nice but not as good as Dal's.
Overall, this was a very close battle. Both had very nice hits but both had one or two that i wasnt feeling. What hurts dal is his missing punch tho, which could of been an "oh shit punch." You never know. Also i didnt like the loob punch, like i said, i HATE those types of punches. Bolo's verse started off fairly slow but had two really tight punches but had a couple let-down punches too. I think when it comes down too it, the closer and the lube punch really let you down, i think if you hadn't forgotten to put an extra bar tho, you could have took this. Overall, very nice battle, both had good verses but dal's two bars lost this for him IMO. Good battle, sorry dal
Vote: Bolo
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dalinquent
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Posted: 29 January 2008 at 9:11pm |
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Props fa all the votes and congrats bolo, You better win this since ya put me out...lol
props man |
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DressToKill
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Posted: 29 January 2008 at 9:11pm |
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3-0 Bolo..
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The original comeback kid
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Fatal
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 29 January 2008 at 9:13pm |
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Since when you started runnin the tourny? lol jp |
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DressToKill
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Posted: 29 January 2008 at 9:16pm |
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Right Now
 See you next round
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The original comeback kid
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Fatal
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 29 January 2008 at 9:17pm |
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Lmao...too bad for you then, huh?
:P
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DressToKill
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Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 29 January 2008 at 9:20pm |
 Lol enough spamming the thread I guess..
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The original comeback kid
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Scotty32
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Posted: 03 February 2008 at 11:50am |
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Locked, Bolo's through.
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