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    Posted: 19 December 2019 at 8:59am
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Edited by Crimson Juice - 26 March 2020 at 7:23pm
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Clown, bitch…. I laugh when I'm reading your handle
I'm watching T pose cuz nobody here is seeming to stand you
You claimed to have a Billie Eilish feature, that's shit that you can't do
Like calling yourself a Rapper when you don't even know a feat from a sample
You was in Boom-Bap collective, homie was tired of typing it out
But y'all was so whack that when the leader sorted Stylez he bounced
Let all them foreign dudes on the rest of LA tryna quiet y'all down
Cuz when y'all let Ax in, nobody knew what you rhyming about
Made a mixtape for your prison bro, loser plays his verses through phones
You gave him bars but I know that this dude is preferring his own
All that unoriginal shit, thinking you spit some dope words and we'll vote?
The only Wave you riding was that tournaments hopes
Homie's gangbanging? You know what he says when his G's aren't near?
Originally posted by Rapper T in Alphabet Ethnicity Open Mic Rapper T in Alphabet Ethnicity Open Mic wrote:

]Goys and Greaseball Greasers are Gringos in here

I've peeped your shit tracks, stuff I ain't needing to hear
Shit's piercing, and no I don't mean a damn needle to ears
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You'll scream blue-ish flumes when I beat you it's true
Cos you a see-through bitch with more than EQ issues
I mean you could choose to be more wistful
But you just dissed me... But you just dissed you
Cos you called me 'unoriginal'... BITCH YOU ARE TOO D2!!! (R2D2)
And Rapper T is a Star. Woz (Star Wars) urz even a rap?
HANDLE IT. I lay a (Leia) ray (Rey) and PALPATINE you!
T pities fools so you can't fool me dude
I've passed all these rules, get schooled you preteen
Think you spit facts, shit talk you're leaking
Out your mouf. Ask anyone, they say he's bad news
DJFlame ain't DJ's name it's DJ FLAMING FAG OOH!
DJ FLAILING BACK OOH DJ BADLY FAILING ACT OOH!
EACH-WAY-MAYBE BAT OOH? WE GON SEE J LEAVE AS ASH-
I MEAN I BEEEN GREAT MAKING 'CLAPS' EVEN IF D GO (deagle) 'AIM' TO 'SCRATCH'... OOOOOOOOH...
Lets be honest D, the only thing you're scratching is the Dirt outside your THATCHED COOP

You chicken shit HAHAHAHAHA
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I'll give this another week before I close it...bump.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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I'm at work so not going into too much depth but here we go..

Flame//

Not feeling your opener.
The Billie feature personal was aaight, clean punch if not spectacular.
Wasnt a fan of the third bar.
Fourth bar was a light dig.
Enjoyed the prison bar play.
Rest was meh.. didn't like the piercing concept.

RT//

Opener was aaight, flowed well and multi Rhymes fit well.
The set up for the second bar was poor but the execution of R2D2 was aaight.
Third bars wordplay was okay but the punch was weak.
The rest.. well.. it was shit.


The standard of this battle was underwhelming. Expected better from both of you.

RT started off better but dropped way off after his first two bars..
Even though Flame was hit and miss I felt he had the better personals/Punchlines and executed his concepts better.

Vote// Flame.
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Well seems as a posted in this thread..



I must say i found this battle a close one really, both had decent word-
play popping, and both came with the personals, it's the punches within
both verses i found to be a bit of a let down, so this tussle boils down to
who jabbed the hardest overall, as the wordplay from both was cancelled
out, DJ dug deep with the personals via he's old old crew an shit, whilst
RT went the clowning route, but i did like his Star Wars bar, but for the
wrong reason when it comes to battle, it was cool that it had a concept
vibe attached but it really didn't do anything to him as per say, and for
me DJ had more hits with his jabs...

Vote....DJ...by the width a public hair...peace.
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before you can dare make an entrance".
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flame: 

i think that you could have added a little bit more color to your punches but they were there for sure, structure was ok everythintg was average but it was an ok battle verse to me. mbaye find a way of wording your bars so that they flow more smoothly, pherhaps add in more multis or something like that between bar 1 and 2 in a punch line rather than on the same line if im making sense. 

Favorite Punch : 

You was in Boom-Bap collective, homie was tired of typing it out
But y'all was so whack that when the leader sorted Stylez he bounced

Rapper T:

I must say that over the time of you signing up i have whitnessed you progress but i still think that your verse fell short on this battle. mid way through you completley lost form and your bars lost any rhyming structure to them which completley reuined if not erased your punches and their impact and also lost where you were going with your concept. I think you could have done better quite honestly it seemed like flame really pissed you off and i think you may have let your emotions cloud your writing in this one


Overall due to just having a better battle verse - 

MVGT- Flame 
NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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3-0 to DJ....KO.
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