Text Battle Archive: Rapper T vs Schematic [Horrorcore] (0-2)

Demonic Doctrine
From nowhere I teleport to murder you in the Eleven Dimensions
No one alive can stop or reverse the Hellish Intentions
Drain your blood till you are Stiffer than Mannequins
Psychotically grinning as it is Dripping and Splattering
The pendulum slides now Everything under your Ribs be Scattering
Your carcass is slowly being consumed by the Wicked Paladin
Here we go Again, Am here to rip your Soul in the End
Rival in temptation,Like the grim, Am not here to Pose and Pretend
After A Slight Concentration, Enter the scene when all Hopes are Dead
When You are unable to bet, step, Control or Defend
To expose your final destination like a Goat in the Trend
A Sequence of Events before the Feasting Commence
We Gathering Chi from Demons Sent to Vent the Most Evil Intents
To unleash Black Mantras that focus on Eating Your Sense
Simply Intense, Set fire to your fields while you Sleeping in Tents
Within the Suspense, Wake up battered and Bound with Wire
To the vision of a shadowy Cold Attire
Arranging Tools in a Table, You drowzy Confused and Disable
Watching the rusty pipe tip that Pertrudes from your Nabel
Wondering what is happening when the Spooks Enable
Shook like a Devil under the View of Angel Gabriel
Throat smoldered Hung with Cable from the Tower of Babel
Didn't get to know the joy of a wife, This is how it All Started
You don't even own your life, All your Parts are Branded
Tried playing it straight but to the Gods your Path is Slanted
A menacing imp on the Pearly Gates, gone so wrong by the Dark ur Wanted
On all points from the North bringing Trouble on the South
I approach you like a Subtle Lil Scout
Rip your Dick off and Shuv it in your Mouth
Chopp your Leg then stick them like A Horn Above your Head
Drink the fluids from your broken cranium like it Was a Keg
Lacerate your Face with 80 blades Laced with Mace
Till it looks like a Rabies Plague of the Strangest Case
Sandblast the Base to Disappear any Trace left on The Eerie Place
On a Scary Phase narrating your Faith in Sin it is Fluke
So Look, You either Starve to death or start Eating the Puke
Caz I'll Use your Skin for a Suit after its slowly Peeled like a Fruit
Bash in your Teeth with a Flute caz you only Seem to Pollute
Am Simply Brute, Quickly Execute when trailing the Scene for a Shoot
Congratulation you made it and Will be Meeting the Cook
All force Feed you a Book for performing like the Feeblest Crook
Perforating minions and operating with a rusty Needle and Hook
I kill you with the Swords Splipping your Gourds
All have the entire Legion alarmed like you Meeting the Lords
Gargantuan claws that viciously Pry open Stripping your Cords

This vote has been accepted by a moderator.

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SCARE-MATIC
Starts strong, but hard to follow rhythm here n there
Decent depth of rhyming throughout, appreciated the 4/5 syllable multies which enhanced the piece ... though themselves hit n miss in places.
Horrorcore vibe clearly comes across ... no missing that
Some nice word-choices, and moments of gold in amongst the hit-n-missness
Not really a story*, but painting the scene pretty well in places
Ends kind of abruptly
(Did I mention hit n miss?)

Damn!

Drain your blood till you are Stiffer than Mannequins Psychotically grinning as it is Dripping and Splattering

A Sequence of Events before the Feasting Commence

Nah!

Like the grim

Pertrudes from your Nabel

SPLATTER-T
Interesting approach, combining attacking your opponent, with braggadocio, rebuttalling his verse, and a little horrorcore thrown in as an afterthought.
Multies are present, mostly 2 and 3 syllables (edit: found some longer ones later on)
Though saying that, when you got going, I like where you were going - and yep that's the Horrorcore now ... check.
Also not really a story* but eventually paints the scene well.
And it ends neatly, which is a plus.

Damn!

I been planning, to pull your brains through your nose Break all your bones, leave you raped in a hole

Get ya lip split, bruised all over like my mistress

Nah!

12

*I know folks'll be yelling Horrorcore don't need a story. True. But if one of these did, it would be a plus over the other one, so still worth noting ... (OK, it's not easy to pad these votes out you know!)

I've had a little drink and I've had a little think ... and for some of the reasons I may or may not have said above ... MFVGT Schemmmatik

Giving this two more days before Schematic wins due to lack of votes.