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 Topic: rd1: Kay B vs Swift StylesPosted: 04 February 2012 at 2:43am |
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BEST OF LUCK TO YOU FELLAS. |
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"See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean.. ..Slick.. |
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Kay B
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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 10:55am |
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Swift Styles
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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 4:07pm |
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Kay B
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Posted: 06 February 2012 at 12:13am |
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Since everyone else has ima just post it up lol ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ *Fifth/Fifty....Game desroyed 50...swift also has 4 losses on his record *He is 13 (19th) places below me (16th) on the rankings Swifts 'punches' leave us distorted for a second
Where as kay'll rip this rapper before an orphan would a present This fuckers stupid man, take a look and think here Tell fatty to go on a di-et, dumbass'd come back with pink hair! Face facts fat cunt, you bes' believe im sick I moan i CAN see my ribs, This bastard CAN'T even see his dick.. Dropped a half decent punch, so how much that shit cost? Ofcourse i got game homie i mean shit, i just handed anuva FIFTH loss* Check the top 10 you aint there or the vets-list Why?...U droppin more played bars than level 100 on tetris! Long to short lines, switchin' up on styles swift Cause just like ya rankin' one punche'll leave u knocked n dropped 13 miles bitch Here come's denial which, makes you complain n cry Pm slick.."Why's kay gone so hard X", "Cause he's insane that's why! Key'd for this battle an' suddenly had the smallest thought Let's aDRESS it man..cause Her's proof that swifts style is stretched long or fallin' short....  |
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Swift Styles
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Joined: 24 September 2007 Location: East Coast, US Status: Offline Points: 2014 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-4-1 Form: WWLWNL |
Posted: 07 February 2012 at 4:25am |
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Here to serve ya, After this they'll need to Rebirth ya Ill murder Kay B like the Toys R Us merger This turn of event put me up against kevin I'll Press him so hard it'll make the voters forget him Get em! Its high time for me slay this prick And I aint gotta count ya battles to leave ya 86'd! Its mad obvious, Battling aint this dudes talent Ill eat him up, Like Im all about a
K challenge!! You aint this ill you bitch, Kb's as small as kilobits Your verse is horrible, there's no need to get that filler flipped Im Rattling a dude
Still braggin bout a win from 08 ' And dont need a fortuneteller to forsee his known fate Lets see how he feels after all these bars hit him K, you aint winning cuz this isnt a hard decision * Im taking this one easy, Making sure that B's off this Im given you a loss that'll hurt like
these topics! **added his link - Slick. Edited by -XTC- - 07 February 2012 at 5:27am |
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$n00z
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Posted: 07 February 2012 at 4:45am |
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Kayb- good verse.it was constructed str8. imo i didnt think there were any hardhitting punches. it was a few bars in there i liked like the di-et bar and 5th loss was ok. i did like the ending alot. took a second to get it cuz at first i couldnt see the link but that was clever Swifty- nice mane. loved the opening Kay B punch. tite. press and votes... nice. 86'd bar.. clever. K challenge... tite. I could do this for the rest of ya verse because it was literally every line or other line was an ill punch. great verse mvgt- SWIFT just thought he had the better verse and put MUCH thought into each punch using name flips, personals and great structure and flow to the verse good battle yall n be eazy |
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-XTC-
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Posted: 07 February 2012 at 5:28am |
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elaborate the vote if you don't mind sir. 'preciate it.
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"See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean.. ..Slick.. |
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$n00z
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Posted: 07 February 2012 at 6:22am |
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Kayb-
punches present opener- ok di-et - nice and funny sick/dick- aaaa fat jokes are cool IF you use a creative punch IMO cost/5th loss- was coo. but mediocre set up vetslist/tetris- tetris bar was ok but seems a lil old swift/13miles bitch- liked the first line but the ranking punch seemed forced and didnt really hit much cry/thats why- -__- was really plain closer was clever and best part of the verse Swifty-
punches kayb toysRus- nice as shit press/votes line- it hit me on the 2nd read. nice #battles/86- loved it eat him/k challenge- nice Kbs small/kilobits- ill 08- funny when i saw the link hard dedcision- ok closer- nice and funny mvgt- SWIFT
just thought he had the better verse and put MUCH thought into each punch using name flips, personals and great structure and flow to the verse
good battle yall n be eazy
better?
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Kay B
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Posted: 07 February 2012 at 1:11pm |
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Props on droppin swift
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Gemos
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Posted: 07 February 2012 at 6:09pm |
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Here goes:
Kay B Punchlines: Second/Present: Good opener, it works, but it isnt too hard hitting Di-et: this is aight Fat/Sick: I meen I met the dude before and he skinnier then a muthafucka but if i hadnt i probably wouldve laughed at this. not a bad punch at all. 5th loss: good connection, nice punch tetris: this ones pretty ill 13 miles bitch: nah, i see what your getting at but just aint hittin cry/insane: mad plain, not hitting at all, doesnt work. closer: closer was ill in my opinion the best part. Swift Punchlines: rebirth/toys r us: ill, opens it up just right press/forget: nice shit right here 86'd: damn thats like a punch in the face k challenge: at first i had no clue, but then i peeped the link and laughed kilobits/filler flipped: nice shit 08/fate: good punch, funny hit him/decision: this is alright, nothing special closer: good, funny. aaaand mvgt Swift for having an all around better verse in my opinion, with more connecting punches, and more thought put into them. great battle both of ya peace |
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-XTC-
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Posted: 07 February 2012 at 7:19pm |
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MADE AN ERROR. 2-0 SWIFT SORRY FELLAS. Edited by -XTC- - 08 February 2012 at 3:25am |
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"See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean.. ..Slick.. |
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Kay B
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Posted: 08 February 2012 at 5:20pm |
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iight man cool....2-0 uppin
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PoeticAssassin
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Posted: 09 February 2012 at 1:06am |
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Kay-B *Fifth/Fifty....Game desroyed 50...swift also has 4 losses on his record *He is 13 (19th) places below me (16th) on the rankings Swifts 'punches' leave us distorted for a second Where as kay'll rip this rapper before an orphan would a present Not a bad start..I thought the orphan line was clever.. This fuckers stupid man, take a look and think here Tell fatty to go on a di-et, dumbass'd come back with pink hair! Basically saying he's stupid..ummm not really feeling this one..kinda funny but not really that good Face facts fat cunt, you bes' believe im sick I moan i CAN see my ribs, This bastard CAN'T even see his dick.. Again not bad but not really great...clowning him cuz he's fat, but not really making it clever. Dropped a half decent punch, so how much that shit cost? Ofcourse i got game homie i mean shit, i just handed anuva FIFTH loss* This one was good I thought, clever play on words. Check the top 10 you aint there or the vets-list Why?...U droppin more played bars than level 100 on tetris! I thought this one was good, tetris line was funny to me and clever. Long to short lines, switchin' up on styles swift Cause just like ya rankin' one punche'll leave u knocked n dropped 13 miles bitch Decent name play, and a decent finish up on it. Here come's denial which, makes you complain n cry Pm slick.."Why's kay gone so hard X", "Cause he's insane that's why! Not feeling this one at all, basically a filler line IMO Key'd for this battle an' suddenly had the smallest thought Let's aDRESS it man..cause Her's proof that swifts style is stretched long or fallin' short.... Didn't like the closer...thought it was basically another filler. Overall not bad, 4 bars that were good. Too many filler lines IMO. Fat jokes don't really work unless they are clever and I thought they lacked in here. Swift Styles Here to serve ya, After this they'll need to Rebirth ya Ill murder Kay B like the Toys R Us merger Good start to the verse, liked the finish up more so than the start. This turn of event put me up against kevin I'll Press him so hard it'll make the voters forget him Thought this was a filler line in my opinion, ya drew KB in the tourny so make us forget him, too generic Get em! Its high time for me slay this prick And I aint gotta count ya battles to leave ya 86'd! Clever attack on his battle score, even though its good, thought is was a nice way to go at it Its mad obvious, Battling aint this dudes talent Ill eat him up, Like Im all about a K challenge!! This was good too, nice way of wording the attack You aint this ill you bitch, Kb's as small as kilobits Your verse is horrible, there's no need to get that filler flipped Didn't like this one...KB..KiloBits..I understand where you were going put it didn't really work for me. Im Rattling a dude Still braggin bout a win from 08 ' And dont need a fortuneteller to forsee his known fate I don't know about this one either...seemed to be just thrown in there for line count. Lets see how he feels after all these bars hit him K, you aint winning cuz this isnt a hard decision * A attack from something about 2008..doesn't really seem fresh for me. Im taking this one easy, Making sure that B's off this Im given you a loss that'll hurt like these topics! Decent personal attack in the closer. **added his link - Slick. Overall--Opener was a clever way to start, and the closer was a good personal attack. A few filler bars in there and the 2008 shots to me weren't that good. And the Kilobits attack, wasn't doing it for me either. Both had some good lines, and both had some off lines. I was a toss up for me, because they both had about 4 bars that stood out. But what took it for me was the fact that Swift had a better closer. Other than that it was pretty even. Swift GMV
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PoeticAssassin
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Posted: 09 February 2012 at 1:07am |
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Damn it I had my expos bolded and Italic, but for whatever reason it didn't transfer like that. Sorry if its hard to read.
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Kay B
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Posted: 09 February 2012 at 1:36am |
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lol...iight...
good battle swift n goodluck in the rest of the tourney |
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Swift Styles
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Posted: 09 February 2012 at 5:50am |
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cool yeah that was nice, I just wanna say now that I am not fat. not even close
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-XTC-
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Posted: 09 February 2012 at 4:02pm |
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and with that. SWIFT WINS VIA KO. AND ADVANCES TO ROUND 2. CONGRATZ FATTY.  |
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"See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean.. ..Slick.. |
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