Rebirth 2012: rd2: Chain vs Swift Styles

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   RULES
16 LINES EACH
CREW VOTES WILL BE ALLOWED DUE TO LACK OF VOTERS
ALL VOTES MUST BE FULLY BROKEN DOWN AND EXPLAINED
BLIND DROPS WILL BE SENT TO MY INBOX
YOU WILL BE GIVEN 2WEEKS AFTER CHECK IN TO COME UP WITH YOUR VERSE
NO EXTENSIONS NO EXCUSES.
IF YOU DO NOT CHECK IN WITHIN 3DAYS OF THIS POST. YOUR OUT VIA NO SHOW
BEST OF LUCK TO YOU FELLAS.

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-XTC- Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 12 November 2006 Location: Brooklyn Status: Offline Points: 1533 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 19-11-4 Form: LLLLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote -XTC- Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: rd2: Chain vs Swift Styles Posted: 18 February 2012 at 10:54pm
	*RULES* 16 LINES EACH CREW VOTES WILL BE ALLOWED DUE TO LACK OF VOTERS ALL VOTES MUST BE FULLY BROKEN DOWN AND EXPLAINED BLIND DROPS WILL BE SENT TO MY INBOX YOU WILL BE GIVEN 2WEEKS AFTER CHECK IN TO COME UP WITH YOUR VERSE NO EXTENSIONS NO EXCUSES. IF YOU DO NOT CHECK IN WITHIN 3DAYS OF THIS POST. YOUR OUT VIA NO SHOW BEST OF LUCK TO YOU FELLAS.
	Slick back in this shit.. time to put a hold on commotion "See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean.. ..Slick..

-XTC- Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 12 November 2006 Location: Brooklyn Status: Offline Points: 1533 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 19-11-4 Form: LLLLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote -XTC- Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 05 March 2012 at 1:13am
	Chain He's a fucking liar, I dunno why dudes believe him I ain't even read it...#Itunes agreement Screw ya mans and em, ya crew‘s a band of weaklings G‘head and stick together...I human centipede‘ em Feed‘ em knuckle sandwiches, blacking out and shit Ya girl will be like y‘all when I ass-to-mouth the bitch What used to be a bed is now an excavation site You gon sleep on that dig, but fuck an explanation, right? Ima stomp yo ass out till my feet are hurting me Walking in my shoes requires orthopedic surgery Stam cell research and all kinds of fetus slurpery That and super powers plus the Kremlin‘s secret service, b Ima flea this murder scene, you can't see a third of me ...And quite frankly...you ain't even worth the feed! Killer like a matador, I ain't tryna lock horns Me, I'm a prophet...and your domain needs a dot org Swift I see you've been shining lately, let me dim down your radiance You wont make it...swifts knocking this poet off his alias! Not surprised too see your on nearly everyones top 5 list The only people saying "Chain suvived this" probly ride dick I know your flow is smooth dog, probably comming off some sly shit But your tourny verse vs PA was smelling more like dry piss So step aside homes, I got a semi round to slide in In terms of flow, your mo like a nymph versus posidon Ill probably need wiki all the weak plays you got cited Plus your audios consist of just tracks that you ghostwrite in! Aint this exciting? LA is saying this mans dumb tight But I deliver shots like his name brand gun type Your on smash, N' feeling like an aching vagina Ill move A in Chain and Ill break him like china!! You cant match these liners! Basically I perform better CHAIn..Your more of an herb than the first of your four letters!! Sorry for posting this late.
	Slick back in this shit.. time to put a hold on commotion "See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean.. ..Slick..

$n00z Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 06 February 2010 Location: NC Status: Offline Points: 1267 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-7-0 Form: WWLWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote $n00z Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 05 March 2012 at 4:15am
	Chain He's a fucking liar, I dunno why dudes believe him I ain't even read it...#Itunes agreement ok opener Screw ya mans and em, ya crew‘s a band of weaklings G‘head and stick together...I human centipede‘ em i really liked this part Feed‘ em knuckle sandwiches, blacking out and shit Ya girl will be like y‘all when I ass-to-mouth the bitch when i 1st got here i got knocked using "fuck ya broad" type bars but IMO i thought this part was tough ... What used to be a bed is now an excavation site You gon sleep on that dig, but fuck an explanation, right? ....but i did think this part was a lil plain with no punch Ima stomp yo ass out till my feet are hurting me Walking in my shoes requires orthopedic surgery nice bar but not really a battle punch Stam cell research and all kinds of fetus slurpery That and super powers plus the Kremlin‘s secret service, b these last 4 lines would be hard as fuck in an audio battle but in text it loses is luster a lil Ima flea this murder scene, you can't see a third of me ...And quite frankly...you ain't even worth the feed! once again nice bars but better for audio Killer like a matador, I ain't tryna lock horns Me, I'm a prophet...and your domain needs a dot org ok closer Swift I see you've been shining lately, let me dim down your radiance You wont make it...swifts knocking this poet off his alias! decent opener Not surprised too see your on nearly everyones top 5 list The only people saying "Chain suvived this" probly ride dick nice bar but no real punch there I know your flow is smooth dog, probably comming off some sly shit But your tourny verse vs PA was smelling more like dry piss this part was jussa basic statement So step aside homes, I got a semi round to slide in In terms of flow, your mo like a nymph versus posidon nice lil quick jab here Ill probably need wiki all the weak plays you got cited Plus your audios consist of just tracks that you ghostwrite in! good punch with the personal. i like Aint this exciting? LA is saying this mans dumb tight But I deliver shots like his name brand gun type maybe i missed him talkin bout his gun but ok bar with good flow Your on smash, N' feeling like an aching vagina Ill move A in Chain and Ill break him like china!! nice lil nameplay You cant match these liners! Basically I perform better CHAIn..Your more of an herb than the first of your four letters!! LOL nice closer. at 1st i was gonna say WTF u tawn bout but a quick google search on CHAI made me realize so it was a ill closer Both were good verses. CHAIN- As always your flow was impeccable. There were some ill bars in there. But I thought it was more suited for audio than a text "battle", b/c you can wow the voters more when they're hearing you kill an enemy with that ill flow and nice wordings SWIFT- Ya verse started with little firepower but u picked it up nicely. You had some nice flow as well. I thought you had some really good punches after the 1st half and took it out on a strong closer. mvgt-SWIFT' Both verses were good but when you put them beside each other in a text battle. I thought Swift displayed more battle elements and punches than Chain did.
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Rameez Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 31 July 2007 Location: Brampton, CDN Status: Offline Points: 3922 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-40-4 Form: NWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Rameez Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 06 March 2012 at 1:12am
	Chain He's a fucking liar, I dunno why dudes believe him I ain't even read it...#Itunes agreement ^^ok start in a generic way.. Screw ya mans and em, ya crew‘s a band of weaklings G‘head and stick together...I human centipede‘ em ^^pretty sick bar here. liked the play.. Feed‘ em knuckle sandwiches, blacking out and shit Ya girl will be like y‘all when I ass-to-mouth the bitch ^^decent though but punch line falling toward a filler side What used to be a bed is now an excavation site You gon sleep on that dig, but fuck an explanation, right? ^^didn't felt like the punchline made any hit Ima stomp yo ass out till my feet are hurting me Walking in my shoes requires orthopedic surgery ^^funny bar though but not really a valid punchline Stam cell research and all kinds of fetus slurpery That and super powers plus the Kremlin‘s secret service, b ^^nope I really didn't find this as a punch man Ima flea this murder scene, you can't see a third of me ...And quite frankly...you ain't even worth the feed! ^^punchline could use more aggressiveness Killer like a matador, I ain't tryna lock horns Me, I'm a prophet...and your domain needs a dot org ^^decent generic punchline.. Overall your verse flow was well, some ill concepts, but this verse seem more like open mic type, for battle verse you need to be more hard and brutal... I liked reading it as it sounds Swift I see you've been shining lately, let me dim down your radiance You wont make it...swifts knocking this poet off his alias! ^^ this is ok for a start, a bit personal but need to be little more hard with punchline Not surprised too see your on nearly everyones top 5 list The only people saying "Chain suvived this" probly ride dick ^^seemed like it's falling toward filler site, the statement made in punch seems unreal I know your flow is smooth dog, probably comming off some sly shit But your tourny verse vs PA was smelling more like dry piss ^^weak personal punch, dry piss is wrong choice for punchline.. So step aside homes, I got a semi round to slide in In terms of flow, your mo like a nymph versus posidon ^^this was a cool play, good punch Ill probably need wiki all the weak plays you got cited Plus your audios consist of just tracks that you ghostwrite in! ^^better than you dry piss punch.. now u throw a nice personal punch Aint this exciting? LA is saying this mans dumb tight But I deliver shots like his name brand gun type ^^bit loose on the punchline.. ok bar.. nothing standing out me Your on smash, N' feeling like an aching vagina Ill move A in Chain and Ill break him like china!! ^^liked this play of chain to china.. nice wordplay and decent punch You cant match these liners! Basically I perform better CHAIn..Your more of an herb than the first of your four letters!! lol at Chai, I find it funny since it's part of my language means tea.. clever punch here. .and this hit well.. Swift you had weak start, but then u start gettin from weak to harder punches, I found this verse weaker than kay B one.. Overall, imo, weak battle, both of the verses I founded weak, i.e weak punchlines, no jaw breaking punches where u say WOW!, I find swift verse had better personal punches and some nice nameplay that give him the edge. Chain had mostly generic punches with good concept and most of his lines sounds more like his usual open mic drops with nice flow and multis.. so overall, swift came little better Vote: Swift Styles


Point Blank Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote Point Blank Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 10 March 2012 at 6:27pm
	Yea Swift takes this...Chain's verse was enjoyable to read but it just didn't feel like a battle verse coz there wasn't a single personal against Swift. Flow and multies were perfect as usual but the content wasn't strong enough to win this battle and there was a distinct lack of punches. Swift, your verse weren't that solid but it was enough to take this, at least you had a few digs at Chain. The ghostwrite bar was nice, but you need to work on your wording of punches in order to make them hit harder. You essentially just said 'you ghostwrite', rather than making a joke out of it or making it aggressive. Anyway yea, Swift got this.